Real name: Arden Jorgensen
Membership status: Member
Member since: 22/01/09
Website:
Beta-reader: Yes
Hi guys, Arden here!!
I kinda' share this account with my Onee-chan. Which means that it's my account, but she posts her story up here!! XD
We are very capable Betas, so if you are looking for one just message me or something. Mmmkay?
If you have time, check out my sister's story.
It's basically, technically amazing, but I might be a bit biased... lol. Read and Review, loves!!
BTW! My sister will be coming out with a new story! I'm helping her a lot, and she already has the first chapter all written!
It'll be called "Forget the Moon"
And, of course it will have LOTS AND LOTS of Itachi in it! Just for those people who are big fans just like us!
Be on the lookout!
We are yaoi/yuri-phobes. Ummm... it's just really gross... sorry.
I'm 18, and going to college/nursing school. :)
My sister is 22, and is in college, too.
Our favorite pairings are:
1. NaruHina
2. SasuSaku
3. IchiHime
4. KazeSawa
5. ShikaTema
6. RenRuki
Our favorite animes & mangas are:
1. Naruto
2. Bleach
3. Fullmetal Alchemist
4. Kimi ni Todoke
5. Faster Than a Kiss
6. Sukitte Iinayo
7. Hana Kimi
8. Death Note
Thank you for your support!
Please read my sister's story, we'll love you forever!
Ardisaur;]
Rated: 12/12A
[Reviews - 7]Category: General Fiction > Character-Centric
Characters: Itachi Uchiha, Kabuto Yakushi, Kakashi Hatake, Kisame Hoshigaki, Obito Uchiha, Orochimaru, Sarutobi Hiruzen (Sandaime Hokage), Sasuke Uchiha, Minato Namikaze (Yondaime Hokage)
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, General, Horror, Tragedy
Warnings: Dark, Death
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 | Completed: No | Word count: 47145 | Read count: 13020 [Report This]
Published: 04/09/05 | Updated: 30/12/08
Date: 07/04/09 Title: Chapter 8: Traitor
bahahaha.... writing drunk is the best.
I always get good ideas when I'm buzzed or plastered....
It was totally awesome, though...
You need to finish this.
It's very well written and the imagery and feelings are real.
X}
Rated: 15
[Reviews - 18]Category: OC-centric, Het Romance > Fluff
Characters: Clan Hyuuga, Genma Shiranui, Hidden Leaf Ninja, Kakashi Hatake
Genres: Drama, Humor, Romance, Spiritual, Supernatural
Warnings: Death
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 | Completed: No | Word count: 49668 | Read count: 17872 [Report This]
Published: 03/12/05 | Updated: 20/02/09
Date: 13/03/09 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Heat
You have a thing for Kakashi don't you? Don't worry, it's okay. haha
Aywhoo.... this is also a very good story!!
Keep going and update soon!!
Rated: U
[Reviews - 44]
Waking up beside a certain silver-haired Sharingan user can be good.. depending on how you look at it. But dealing with him is a pain in the you-know-what. What's going to happen to a normal girl's regular life now? How does her choices, decisions and mistakes change the Naruto world? Or does it... at all? KakashixOc. hint (very tiny and hard to spot) of SasuNaru.Category: OC-centric
Characters: Kakashi Hatake, Sasuke Uchiha
Genres: Action/Adventure, Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 | Completed: No | Word count: 207220 | Read count: 49945 [Report This]
Published: 03/12/05 | Updated: 08/02/09
Date: 23/02/09 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Kakashi
Oh my god!!!
This is sooooo good!!!
hehe
Keep up the awesome-ness!!!
Rated: 15
[Reviews - 131]
My name is Haruno Sakura; I am seventeen years old and am in my last year of high school. I am a straight-A student and am eligible for a scholarship to the top university in the country. My name is Haruno Sakura and I live in a cardboard box. AU, Modern. Sakura-centric, Ino/Sakura. Rated for language.
Category: Shojo-ai/Yuri Romance > Top Pairs > Sakura and Ino
Characters: Ino Yamanaka, Sakura Haruno
Genres: Drama, Romance
Warnings: AU, Death, Sexual Themes, Yuri
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31 | Completed: No | Word count: 144282 | Read count: 85295 [Report This]
Published: 28/12/06 | Updated: 04/05/13
Date: 19/12/09 Title: Chapter 27: The Aftermath II
Ummm.... holy shit on a bear.
Even though I'm a yaoi/yuri-phobe, this is so good.
I think it's really, um, funny how once Sakura gets over that fact that she's a lesbo, she goes all out. haha.
Like the making out with that random girl at the club and stuff.
You've definitely reeled me in!
This is sooooo good. I don't even care about the lesbian thing!
Date: 31/05/10 Title: Chapter 28: Progression
Hahahahaha!
Woo... That was awkward. LOL.
It's only to be expected though.
This was a good chapter! Things are finally starting to move for Ino and Sakura.
Rated: 12/12A
[Reviews - 100]Category: Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Crossovers
Characters: Gaara, Kakashi Hatake, Naruto Uzumaki, Sakura Haruno, Tsunade
Genres: Action/Adventure, Fantasy, Humor, Mystery
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 121080 | Read count: 50246 [Report This]
Published: 31/07/07 | Updated: 15/06/09
Date: 20/05/09 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: The Third Task
Wow!!!
That's really, really baddd!!!!
But, how would Voldy ene know how to get the bijuu from Naruto and Garra???
This is gonna drive me crazy!!!
lol
Good chapter, though!
Author's Response: Yep, it\'s not a good thing. ^_^ Voldy might have his ways . . . -shifty eyes- Sorry for driving you crazy, but I\'m working on the next chapter at this moment and I\'m quite far into it! But I think you\'ll be even madder with me . . . .
Date: 16/06/09 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Author's Gift
Ahhh!!!
I seriously can't wait!!
It's gonna be ama-za-zing!!
Believe it!!
This one ended pretty well.
I was pleased with this story through and through!!!
Good job!!
Date: 06/04/09 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: In Training
Yay!!! You finally updated!!!
This is gonna be really interesting on how you incorporate all of this together!!!
I can't wait!
Another great chapter!!
Author's Response: Yeah . . . heh--sorry it\'s been so long! ^^; I\'ve had it for a while but I just forgot to post it. I hope you all enjoy it! You might hate me for a while for what I\'m going to do though *bite fingernails*
Date: 30/05/09 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: The Graveyard
Ahhhhh!!!!
NOOO!!!
Geez!!!
Date: 31/01/09 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Hydrophobia
OMG!
I think you are ama-za-zing!
You have made me fall in love with Garra!!
lol
I love how you make him laugh!
It's so cute!
Rated: 15
[Reviews - 80]Category: Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Naruto and Hinata, Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Sasuke and Sakura
Characters: Hinata Hyuuga, Naruto Uzumaki, Sakura Haruno, Sasuke Uchiha
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Dark, General, Mystery, Romance
Warnings: Dark, Death
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 | Completed: No | Word count: 65991 | Read count: 37324 [Report This]
Published: 03/10/07 | Updated: 25/01/12
Date: 01/05/09 Title: Chapter 22: Realization
Wow!!
This is amazing!!
I really, really love it!!
I hope you continue!
Rated: 18
[Reviews - 27]Category: Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Naruto and Hinata
Characters: Hinata Hyuuga, Naruto Uzumaki
Genres: Action/Adventure, Romance
Warnings: Death
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 27 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 286747 | Read count: 28412 [Report This]
Published: 06/10/07 | Updated: 01/03/10
Date: 03/03/10 Title: Chapter 27: Epilogue
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!
Yay! It's finally here!
I was sooooooo fucking excited when I saw that you had updated!
It just makes me so happy... lol. Yeah, I'm a nerd...
Anyway! This was an amazing ending, and I freaking loved it!
The fighting scenes were terrific, as usual!
Ohhh... and your grammar was PERFECT! That's one thing that I respect about good writers, their impeccable grammar!
Zurui is going to get Jiyumaru killed... pervy raccoon...
I knew that it was necessary, but I didn't like the fact that Yakusho ran off... I liked that douche bag, and so did Sakura. hahahaha.
Oh well, this story was amazing, and entertaining through and through, and I enjoyed every minute of it!
I'm glad that you finished it, so I wouldn't die of anticipation!
Love,
TheArdisaur;]
Date: 28/03/09 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24
Ummmm.... wow.
that's all I can say.... this is dramatic.
and I LOVE it!
You need to update soon before I die of suspense!!!
Author's Response: Sorry for making you die of suspense. But it IS coming.
Rated: 18
[Reviews - 168]Category: Het Romance > Fluff, Het Romance > Angst, Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Naruto and Hinata
Characters: Gaara, Hinata Hyuuga, Jiraiya, Kiba Inuzuka, Rock Lee, Naruto Uzumaki, Neji Hyuuga, Pair NaruHina, Sakura Haruno, Shino Aburame
Genres: Angst, Drama, Graphic lemon, Romance
Warnings: Dark, Sexual Themes
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 29 | Completed: No | Word count: 54005 | Read count: 41011 [Report This]
Published: 30/12/07 | Updated: 18/04/08
Date: 01/06/09 Title: Chapter 29: SORRY!!!
Awwww!!!
I hope you *sniffle* continue!!
This story is way awesome!
I like how you make Hiashi mean!!
I also like how the Kyuubi cares about Naruto and Hinata!!
I can't believe you would like narusasunaru over this!!
That makes me to cry!!
D':
Please get over your writers block!!
This is wicked!
Rated: 18
[Reviews - 66]Category: Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Naruto and Hinata, Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Neji and Tenten, Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Sasuke and Sakura, Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Shikamaru and Temari
Characters: Gaara, Hinata Hyuuga, Pair SasuSaku, Pair ShikaTema
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance
Warnings: Death
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 | Completed: No | Word count: 147431 | Read count: 21151 [Report This]
Published: 03/03/08 | Updated: 19/06/09
Date: 19/05/09 Title: Chapter 24: The First Clue
Awwwww!!!
The end is soooo sweet!!!
I like your version soooo much better than what's actually happening in the manga....
geez!!!
lol
Date: 19/04/09 Title: Chapter 23: Dinner at the Hyuugas'
WHOOO!!!
This is really, really good!!
I love both books to death!
Naruto makes me laugh. He's just a big ball of energy!!
hehe
I hope Sasuke can get his emotions on track and realize that he's totally in love with Sakura!
Your story makes me happy!!!
lol
Rated: PG
[Reviews - 122]Category: OC-centric, General Fiction > Naruto, Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Minor AU
Characters: All
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Fantasy, General, Humor, Mystery, Romance, Tragedy
Warnings: Death
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 102 | Completed: No | Word count: 743813 | Read count: 119161 [Report This]
Published: 23/03/08 | Updated: 07/02/16
Date: 13/12/09 Title: Chapter 76: Enter into the Mist
Yes! Onari's team made it!!
Well, of course they did! haha.
You have such an imaginitive brain! All of this stuff is so interwoven and thought out! It's mind boggling!
Great chapter!
Date: 13/10/09 Title: Chapter 74: Preparation
They better keep Daiya safe, dammit!!
lol
Holy COW!
This was an amazing chapter!!
The practice rounds were so intense!
I bet the pairings took a long time.
Or... maybe not. Idk... but they were really good pairings. I think the fight between Idai and Onari was the most intense. I was seriously on the edge of my seat!
I feel really bad for Daiya. He seems so determined and the fact that he he has to rely on others so much tears him up. His condition just gets worse every time.
Takeru and Onari's relationship is really cute. I love how she just barges in on them. Kissing Takeru in the nude definitely wasn't something Sasuke and Izumi were expecting. LOL
Goooood, gooood, goooooood chapter!!
Loved it!!
Date: 19/02/09 Title: Chapter 58: Traded!
Woot!!
That's so sweet that Eiyu and Onari are together!! hehe
Poor Takeru though....
Date: 28/11/09 Title: Chapter 75: The beginning of our lives
Awwwww.
I really do love this story.
I dislike how Takeru is always so defensive and hurtful, but that's how the story goes! It wouldn't be very entertaining if he wasn't!
Onari is definitely more mature than Takeru. LOL. Girl Power!!!
Anywho! This was a great chapter!! As usual!!
Date: 06/09/09 Title: Chapter 73: Gin vs. Ryokuzu
This was an amazing chapter!!!
I loved it!!
Who healed Gin that fast?
Or, was Ryokuzu just tricking Gin about what happens in this world happens in the real world?
IDK. That confused me.
But, nevertheless!!! It was amazing!
Author's Response: Okay, all of the tricks Ryokuzu did such as biting her, the demon being in her stomach, etc happened to her mentally. When you go through something mentally, it can effect you physically yes. But remember! Gin had the lotus mixture all over her body. She had placed it on her hands and chest to protect herself against Ryokuzu. So in a way, the lotus took off some of the \'mental damage\' she sustained in the fight. Because in Buddhism, the blue lotus is seen as the flower of \'enlightenment\'. I\'m really glad you liked it. I was waiting for a review from you ^^. You\'re my number one fan, I think. You sign more than anybody! I wanted this chapter to be amazing. So it was kind of hard for me to delve a bit into Idai\'s past to come up with the right settings. I hope you like the next chapter too!
Date: 26/03/09 Title: Chapter 61: You cannot go!
Ohhh dear!!!
This is getting CRAZY!!!
It be sooooooo good!!!
I seriously cannot wait for more!!
Ima be bouncing off the rafters until you install more!!!!
Date: 19/03/10 Title: Chapter 78: Survival
Yeah! Fight, fight, fight!
This is getting sooooo good! I can't wait to see who makes it!
Date: 28/05/09 Title: Chapter 66: Shogai, not your every day celestial!
Good job Takeru.... finally taking matters into his own hands.... silly boy.
Nice....
Good chapter!!
Date: 30/06/09 Title: Chapter 69: Yanagi's Gift Part II
Awww.... poor Idai!!
I love that kid!!