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A Formal Rival. A Secret Crush. by Serenity772

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Chapter notes: This is told from first person point of view in present tense.
He’s walking down the streets of Konoha. Naruto… That’s his name. His sensei, Iruka, had treated him to a piping bowl of Ramen. He looks just like any other boy his age, except for three whisker marks on both sides of his face. His blonde hair is spiky and always messy and his eyes hold deep sorrow and pain from being alone so long. However, it’s only noticeable if you truly care enough to look. No one seems to, though. Even with his bright orange jumpsuit marking him out of the crowd, nobody seems to notice.
Currently, Naruto is on his way to his house on the outskirts of Konoha. It isn’t very big, but only Naruto lives there, so it’s a comfortable size. If you’re wondering why he lives alone, it’s because his mother died in childbirth and his father was killed by myself. I am Kyuubi, the fox-demon that attacked Konoha fourteen years ago. The fourth hokage, in order to save his village, sealed me inside of Naruto.
Naruto has only recently discovered that he is my vessel. For fourteen years, he didn’t understand why people’s eyes are so cold. Everyone in the village denies his existence. In fact, sometimes, Naruto even doubts he’s alive. It’s because he’s a monster. At least that’s what the villagers think. I’m the only monster.
I have stolen away his existence. I have stolen away his family. I have stolen all the love he should have received. This prison that I am trapped in, I have come to hate, but never the boy. Naruto… He has suffered so much because of me. Should I ever be released I vow to protect him from those who would break his heart.
He is not yet strong enough to talk to me, but I can feel Naruto’s emotions. From them I must say I do not understand him. Though I am with him all the day long, I can not begin to fathom why he doesn’t hate them. His existence they have denied, yet he fights to keep them alive. The boy does not hate any of them, not even that annoying pink girl. What is her name? Sakura…? Yes, that’s it. He has to pretend to like her just so the village will not gain another reason to hate him. As a demon I can see no wrong in liking that boy. That silent brooding one that Naruto always fights with. Naruto loves that boy, but has to pretend he doesn’t, just because he is afraid of the very people he is training to protect.
What is this feeling? Sadness…Great sadness… Who is causing my vessel pain! They shall burn from the heat of my fiery wrath! Oh… It is those villagers again… His house is gone. The boy is on his knees now. The sadness won’t stop. His eyes are dripping, but no one shall notice. The heavens are starting to weep for his loss. Naruto’s greatest possession was the house of his family. No more… This boy is one of great courage, though he is afraid he faces his fear. Now he has nowhere to run, should he lose his courage. I have caused so much trouble. The boy is weeping and all because of me… The villagers will pay one day, for I vow to always protect this boy and the family he fathers. It has not been long now… Already his tears are beginning to dry. Though he is stopping, the heavens cry harder. They know, just as I know, he is still sad, but no one is there to see it. His bottled emotions help him take out his enemies, but he never kills. Never… Such innocence in one so ravaged with pain…The boy has stood and we are running now. The training grounds… Of course his team is supposed to meet for training. Seems he is the first, but here comes the boy and the pink one. Clingy as ever… Naruto is boiling inside… His jealousy of the raven-haired boy is great. He shall have to endure. When his sensei Kakashi-hentai arrives, he will be asked to spar with his crush. Only at those times does his sadness and pain melt away… At those times Naruto truly shows himself.
“Dobe, pay attention”
“Shut it Sasuke-teme!”
“Leave Sasuke-kun alone, Naruto!”
“Aw… But, Sakura-chan”
He is always getting the blame. That pink one hits him every time he insults the raven. Sasuke is that boy’s name. He instigates Naruto constantly. Because of his need for attention, Naruto can not back down from any challenge, which gets him into trouble. Hopefully, his sensei will get here soon… I do not wish for Naruto to get angry with the pink one, or worse, sad because of his unrequited love for the raven… The heavens though they cry for him, do not seem to smile kindly upon Naruto… Here is the hentai now…
“YOU”RE LATE KAKSHI-SENSEI!!!!” Both the pink one and Naruto shout as the puff of smoke dissipates from their sensei’s body.
“I’m sorry I was taking a ride with a dolphin on the sea of bliss.”
“You mean Iruka-sensei…” I am the only one who heard Naruto mutter those words. He knows about their relationship, but like him they are forced to hide it. His ambition burns strong now as he thinks of the hentai’s and the dolphin’s relationship. As hokage, he can promote gay couples, but for now he must remain invisible.
Chapter end notes: Thanks for reading I hope you all like it. If I have messed up either the p.o.v or the tense please let me know so I can change it. Arigato! Sayaonara!
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