Reviews For The Other Rookie Nine
Name: Erin (Anonymous) · Date: 25/10/07 - 03:18 pm · For: Chance at Chuunin
Please kee writing! I want to know what happens so badly You are a VERY talented writer! Keep up such great work on the story! U ROCK!
Author's Response: Don't worry, I'll keep writing.
Name: Erin (Anonymous) · Date: 25/10/07 - 02:26 pm · For: I Failed?!
Great Story! I Love the idea of "The Other Rookie Nine"! I always wondered about the others. Neji is one of my favorite charactrs!
Author's Response: Don't worry, I understand why this review showed up twice (that happens to me all the time), but I am glad you like my story!
Name: Erin (Anonymous) · Date: 25/10/07 - 02:26 pm · For: I Failed?!
Great Story! I Love the idea of "The Other Rookie Nine"! I always wondered about the others. Neji is one of my favorite charactrs!
Author's Response: Gosh, I haven't updated for like, a few months. But now I'll be sure to update!
Name: Oshiyama (Anonymous) · Date: 10/10/07 - 05:16 pm · For: Chance at Chuunin
Cool. Thought you'd never update.
Update again....SOON!
Author's Response: SORRY SORRY SORRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! My computer was broken for almost a week.....rnSORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY...rnI'l update soon! (my computer better not break again...)
Name: Redfox50 (Signed) · Date: 10/10/07 - 04:58 pm · For: Chance at Chuunin
This is a great story,update soon ^_^
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'll keep reading your stories too!!!rnrnLove, peace, and puppies!
Name: Oshiyama (Signed) · Date: 15/09/07 - 03:00 pm · For: The First Missions
What an awesome chapter!
I thank you for thanking me and I hope you keep pressin forward. I love peace and puppies! ^-^
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing again! I should be able to update again tomorrow!rnrnLove, peace, and puppies forever!!!
Name: Oshiyama (Signed) · Date: 09/09/07 - 07:30 pm · For: A Side Story: The Headband
It did turn out funny! ^-^
Hope to read more of your great story. Riko Kamori
Author's Response: Thanks! Someone gave me a review that made me sad... : ( But I'm glad to have someone who really likes my story. THANKS AGAIN!
Name: Kitsune no Rai (Signed) · Date: 09/09/07 - 07:08 pm · For: Graduation
It's an interesting introduction. THere were some grammatical errors here and there, but it's nothing a proofread won't fix. The major problems I have with the first chapter is the parenthesis that you add in the middle of your paragraphs. It interupts the flow of the story. That and since I don't think America exists in the Naruto world, a name like Dixi Parks is really out of place. Fix these and proofread more and my rating would be a lot higher. It's a good start.
Author's Response: ... ok... I'll remove the parenthesis, but in my opinion, Naruto takes place in Japan and America exists so I am NOT changing DIxi. Besides, Masashi Kishimoto says that Chouji's favorite food is Korean BBQ, so if Korea exists, I think that means all the other ones do too. Thanks for reviewing anyway and telling me what was wrong without flaming..
Name: Oshiyama (Signed) · Date: 09/09/07 - 10:26 am · For: The Second Chance
Awwwwwww Hasuki must be very relieved. I'm glad to have read this. I'll continue to read your stories. ^-^ Over and out....Riko Kamori (Oshiyama)
Author's Response: YES! MY FIRST REVIEW THANK YOU THANK YOU! I promise to update and I'll read and review your stories too. Thanks again!