Reviews For Love Me, My Brother
Name: Sasuke (Signed) · Date: 20/05/07 - 11:33 am · For: Summer Vacation; Welcome to the Mysterious Beach!!
OMFG THATS AWESOME!!! I love the way Naruto became the ghost dude. Is Hayaku Montogari or however you spell it a real Japanese legend?
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-- lunaryu : Hyaku Monogatari means 100 tales of horror. It's a ancient game in Japan that you play with 100 people to tell horror stories. In legend usually something really spooky happens after the last story is finished to be told.
Name: Sasuke (Signed) · Date: 19/05/07 - 09:33 pm · For: Summer Festival (Part 4)
I think that Yokiko or watever her name is likes to Undress her son, Naruto ;) Because she grins when she takes him to her bedroom...:
Naruto thought in sweat drop at that. Then he sighed. “Fine, I wear that for the first practice,” he said in defeat. His mother’s face lit up 100% when she heard that.
“YAAAAAY!! Let’s get dressed then!!” she pulled Naruto’s hand enthusiastically while smiling widely. Naruto sighed again in weak, defeated self. He could never match his mother after all.
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-- lunaryu : Sure indeed. Naruto is way cuuuuter than any other boy, so she likes make him up into girls clothing. So cuuute, right?
Name: Sasuke (Signed) · Date: 19/05/07 - 05:46 pm · For: Sasuke Makes a Move!!
GODAMNIT KOU I THOUGHT YOU WANTED NARUTO WITH SASUKE YOU FUCKING BASTARD MOTHER FUCKER!!! GAHHH!!! I love Kou but at the same time....I HATE THE FUCKIN BASTARD!!! GRRR I FUCKING KILL YOU!!! Sorry I'm HYPER!!! ^____^ BTW Dont mean to be rude but you sure know a hell of a lot of Japanese (thanks for updating my Language learning BTW) so does that mean your originally Japanese?
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-- lunaryu : Ahaha, you're quite worked up, I see. I'm glad that my reader being so emotional towards my characters. Eh? No, I'm not. I'm Indonesian, and I like Japanese Language. I'm learning it now. Oh really? I'm glad that I can help you with some Japanese. Thanks for the review!
Name: kneazlegurl125 (Signed) · Date: 04/05/07 - 02:05 am · For: The Shadow from The Past
Oh...My...GAWD!!! i soooooo totally luv this story. i've just been reading for the past day and a half reading your story. its unlike any plot i've read for fanfiction, yet all the themes and plots you've used, i could swear i've read or seen them in shojo manga and anime. its refreshing and it makes me feel as if i'm reading a shojo manga, even tho its yaoi. At first i thought the ooc-ness of the characters would put me off, but the expressions you use make it so its like i'm reading a manga, i can see their actions so clearly. that alone totally makes up for the ooc-ness. though one thing that bugs me is the grammatical mistakes. though i guess that can't be helped. your plot owns big time. keep up the good work and post soon.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for the long review. I'm really sorry for the grammatical mistakes because I'm still studying as well. You see, English is not my first language. Anyway, I try to find a beta. I have idea who will do it, but she hasn't answered my request yet, and I can't postpone to add new chapter, so.... But, I'll try my best to fix them little by little and then update the chapter one by one. Thank you!
Name: Darling_425 (Signed) · Date: 01/05/07 - 08:49 am · For: The Shadow from The Past
Ah. Another great chapter done.
Unfortunely, I feeel like something is lacking after readng this. Hm, must be me.
Name: monique15 (Signed) · Date: 22/04/07 - 02:20 pm · For: Some Times Apart
i love this chapter and this story in a whole ^^ you the best^^
Name: XxSasukeLovexX (Signed) · Date: 19/04/07 - 07:21 pm · For: Some Times Apart
I love this story to death! i cant stop reading it! i get so excited each time u write a new chapter! please update soon! Ja ne! ^^
Name: Monica (Signed) · Date: 18/04/07 - 06:55 pm · For: Some Times Apart
It was ok.
Keep up the good work :D
Cant wait for next chapter!
Name: AllieChan (Signed) · Date: 18/04/07 - 02:47 am · For: Some Times Apart
omg lunaryu!! anouther masterpeice!! I always take so long to read your chapters because I get into them so much!
you are SUCH a great writer *hugs* I LOVE YOU!! (friend way!!)
this story is deffiantly one of my favorites on TONFA and you are doing such a great job!
ahhhhh I cant get over the sasuita!!! I LOVE it!!
update soon as always lol
Author's Response: Thanks for everyone who have cheered me up!! I shall update again two weeks later because I have to finish my Book Report first! *Damn those lecturers!!* I hate college works, really, but I need them to improve my skill in writing so...can't be helped! Anyway...please wait patiently to the next update...
Name: Keyblade222 (Signed) · Date: 17/04/07 - 01:27 pm · For: Some Times Apart
ok this may sound crazy,and sorry for the other review its just alot of chapters haven't been posted.any who what if you put some itachxsasuka thing for a little while though?oh im trying to fix my email thing because something is wrong with so dont email
Name: moon master (Signed) · Date: 17/04/07 - 01:26 pm · For: Some Times Apart
thanks lunaryu-chan
i like this story very much and i hope that you come up with a good ending ^_^
you should ave them find out about each other in the next chapter
well any ways i hope you update soon >-
Name: Darling_425 (Signed) · Date: 17/04/07 - 11:42 am · For: Some Times Apart
Very nice! A nw chapter! Yay!
I wonder how much longer will it take to realize something till the end.
Name: Nao_angel (Signed) · Date: 17/04/07 - 09:03 am · For: Some Times Apart
lol, itachi is such a pervert XD i kinda feel bad for naru-chan too, if only he could have sassy-chan for himself:p Great chap!!! update soon;)
Name: ChiyoChan (Signed) · Date: 17/04/07 - 08:12 am · For: Some Times Apart
HaHa i love the perverse itachi!!
Author's Response: I do love him that way too *grins*
Name: Monica (Signed) · Date: 13/04/07 - 06:33 pm · For: Confused Feeling
*glomps you* thanks for posting the chapter :D
*was covered in dust sitting here waiting*
~^-^~
Author's Response: Aaah, I'm sorry for making you wait so long...I promise to update at Wednesday, so please be patient and wait, k? Thanks for the review. I really appreciate it!!
Name: Keyblade222 (Signed) · Date: 13/04/07 - 06:04 pm · For: Confused Feeling
ok dont reply I MEAN IT!!!!!!!!!!!ok its just the same review from the other story you had >_< >-(
Name: XxSasukeLovexX (Signed) · Date: 11/04/07 - 07:16 pm · For: Confused Feeling
I love this story, please update soon! =]
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I also love this story, really! Well, I shall update in in a week after updating my other story. Please wait patiently, k?
Name: NaRu KiTsUnE (Signed) · Date: 11/04/07 - 04:09 pm · For: Confused Feeling
hehehe sasuke sounded funni at da end becuz he said eh man wierd!
Author's Response: Well, he's indeed weird anyway. Don't forget he's an Uchiha! Thanks for the review. I shall update in a week. Please wait patiently!!
Name: moon master (Signed) · Date: 11/04/07 - 03:29 pm · For: Confused Feeling
yay you finnallly updated and i think that this was a good chapter to
and you are right the dreamm seen is hot *fights nosebleed*
anyways update soooon >.
Author's Response: Eheheh, I've thought to put some fan service anyway. Thanks for the review. Ok, give me a week and I will update just for you!!
Name: Satoyuki (Signed) · Date: 11/04/07 - 02:32 pm · For: Confused Feeling
A bit depressing, but I liked it. I really want to know what the task is, and what the 'equipment' is.
Author's Response: Aaaah, I'm glad you're curious about it! Well, thanks for the review. Oh, give me a week and I'll update it, I promise! Ah, thanks for reviewing!
Name: Nao_angel (Signed) · Date: 11/04/07 - 02:03 pm · For: Confused Feeling
aaah soo short *pouts*
lol, it's okay, i loved it XD
Naru is waaaaaaaay too dumb, i'm glad you made Sasu so patient:p
Author's Response: You think so? I've just thought to make him raped by Sasuke anyway (kidding). Well, thanks for the review, I'll do my best to update faster this time! I promise to update it in a week!
Name: sephirothsslave (Signed) · Date: 11/04/07 - 01:05 pm · For: Confused Feeling
O_o is it gonna be something like out there crazy or like....normal crazy.......i loved this chapter so much
Name: tearsofblood (Anonymous) · Date: 10/04/07 - 07:42 pm · For: Summer Vacation; The Night and Day Summer Dream
Loved the story, even though i'm an impatient person and naruto's density is almost painful because he's so slow to realize it, and he's in denial. Anyway, hopefully sasuke will be able to at least get naruto to realize he likes sasuke within the next couple of chaps? Update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I actually an impatient person as well. And I am annoyed as hell when I think why Naruto is so dense anyway...? But if he isn't like that then he will not be Naruto, right? Oh, i've just updated this story. Sorry for making you wait for too long. Now you can enjoy it!!
Name: Bronziie (Signed) · Date: 10/04/07 - 03:40 am · For: The School After, Acknowledgment
*kyyaaaaa* so kawaiii^_^ *cough*fangirlmood*cough*
Author's Response: You think so? Yep, definitely KAWAI!! (Sorry for self-proclaimed ^_~)
Name: Bronziie (Signed) · Date: 10/04/07 - 02:38 am · For: Pilot: Marriage
ooohh... I like this one^^ the plot is good too! My plot bunny is dying here:P
Author's Response: Thanks!