Reviews For Aftermath: The Last Ones Standing
Name: Tragedy (Signed) · Date: 02/10/11 - 07:46 pm · For: A Book Like This
Really It Only Took Me To The Third Mention Of War To Know What Was Going On. Still, It Was A Great Chapter To Read And Now I Have Speculations On The Girl And I.. Cant Wait To See If I'm Right.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 02/10/11 - 02:59 pm · For: The Wrong Band
Wow, what an insult to Tenten... That's so mean to say. And even his last line is insulting. Kakashi, how cruel... though very bluntly truthful.
It was a good idea to bring in some of the other characters. At least we're not solely focused on Sakura and Kakashi at this point. The other characters are involved in this, in some way.
Nice job! Keep up the good work!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 02/10/11 - 02:50 pm · For: Between the Bars
Aww, at least Kiba didn't yell... Whether it's good or bad that he doesn't know what happened, I'm not sure...
But I'm STILL wondering about this girl! I need to know who she is!
Great chapter, as always! Keep up the awesome work!
Author's Response: ...your fast! I only just uploaded this! You're going to find out... and so will he, eventually... ;)
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 02/10/11 - 11:32 am · For: A Book Like This
*sobs a lot* That's so sad... That's really, really sad! Oh my gosh, it was so romantic and cute in the beginning, when you talked about both of their reactions to one another and everything. You explained it so well, and it came out beautifully; the cute relationship to the tragic ending, it was all so wonderfully written.
I did honestly think this would be the story of the random girl in Kakashi's document, but then I realized this was Rin and Kakashi, and it made me even sadder to hear how their relationship went! So heartbreaking....
Excellent work with this. This chapter came out really well, one of my favorites of this story now :D Keep up the amazing work!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 02/10/11 - 08:46 am · For: Dead Things
Hmm, Kakashi, acting so nonchalant. How typical :P
Ooh, this document must play an important role. I wonder who this girl is. We did see her earlier, but I really want to know why she's so significant.
Wow, great work with the emotion and description in this chapter. You're definitely getting better and better with each chapter. Great work!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 01/10/11 - 09:09 am · For: The Hardest Of Hearts
>_<
Now I don't know what I want... KakaSaku or KibaSaku... Such a difficult choice at this point...
The suspense of this story always kills me! I can't stand the wait! I need to know what happens! Fantastic work on this, I really enjoy everything that has transpired throughout the story so far. I can't wait for more; keep up the amazing work!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 01/10/11 - 09:01 am · For: Because The Night
Wow! I love that last line! It's such a slap in the face, but I still love it, I don't know why, I just do!
Hehe, though it was completely irrelevant, it's still really funny that Sakura ranted on Kakashi about all his faults. And who would've thought, Kiba and Sakura's moms totally hit it off :D I never expected that.
Anyway, excellent job on this! And yay, I have another chapter to read now XD
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 01/10/11 - 08:48 am · For: Love and Communication
Haha, Sakura & Kiba & Sakura's mom visiting the Inuzuka clan. It kind of does sound awkward ;D
I definitely want to see how Sakura interacts with the rest of the Inuzuka members. Heehee, I'm so excited :D
Nice job! Now I'm off to read more. Haha, I love when there's a new update when I'm in the middle of reading a chapter ;)
Author's Response: And I actually had it all sketched out quite neatly on some notepad, but for some reason decided to skip it anyway..
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 01/10/11 - 04:22 am · For: Sleep Alone
EEEPPP! More KakaSaku fluff in the end there. It makes me all squealy XD
Wow... Kakashi totally just extinguished any hopes of bringing Naruto back that I had. Way to go man...
Anyways, awesome chapter! It really impressed me. Keep up the great work!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 01/10/11 - 04:17 am · For: Pictures Of You
Oh man, they're going to (or want to) bring Naruto back.... Oh my gosh, Kakashi's going to kill himself and resurrect Naruto! O_O Eh, that could be wrong though... Ah! I don't know! Well anyways, nice chapter! Great description here, I loved it!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 01/10/11 - 04:11 am · For: Everything's Not Lost
Haha, Naruto's big foxy grin on Kakashi's face, that seems just so funny XD
Anyway, wasn't expecting that, but I'm glad it's not Madara... for now, at least. But it's kind of good to see Naruto right now, his presence seems to brighten everything up :D Nice job on this chapter!
Name: Tragedy (Signed) · Date: 01/10/11 - 01:39 am · For: Sleep Alone
Sooo, Over The Last Two Or Three Days I've Been Reading Your Story And... Lets Say I Stayed Up To Four A.M To Finish It Just Now.
Author's Response: I'm flattered!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 30/09/11 - 06:07 pm · For: On My Shoulder
Gosh, what a sad yet wonderful way to end that chapter. Suspenseful and everything. This was kind of cyclic, as it reverts back to the hinted KakaSaku romance, and then you throw in the source of everyone's problems: Madara's possession of Kakashi. This was a great chapter; as I said, you portray all the emotions so vividly, and it makes for a really compelling read. Great work with these updates! Keep up the amazing work!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 30/09/11 - 05:58 pm · For: Untouchable Face
I seriously love your writing. It's so rational and logical; everything the characters say, think, and feel is so understandable, and it makes this story that much more relateable. Sakura's reaction to everything Kakashi is doing is excellent. Not sugarcoated or softened or anything. You clearly show her emotions, and I'm very proud for that fact. Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you! This really means a lot to me, as I'm very concerned about keeping the characters' action - uhm - emotionoally rational. :)
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 29/09/11 - 12:08 pm · For: From Your Favourite Sky
Aww... Kakashi cares for Sakura a lot... That makes this even sadder! Poor, poor... everyone XP
Haha, though I do appreciate the fact taht Kakashi was considerate to Sakura by pushing her and Kiba together. Playing matchmaker, heehee ;)
Anyways, excellent work with these recent updates! You're on a roll with this story, and it's coming out very well. Great job on everything so far, keep up the amazing work please!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 29/09/11 - 12:03 pm · For: Alone Down There
Aww, Kiba's so nice :) I bet you can see why I like him so much ;D But it is really sweet that he was there to comfort her, especially in a time like this...
Sakura's small memory was really sad, just in the way you wrote it. "A different Kakashi... a different Sakura..." It was a really creative style though, I liked that. It's a lot of foreshadowing though, so it's a lot more mysterious, and it makes me wonder how everything will turn out... Though I'm sure it'll be sad D:
Anyways, awesome job with this chapter! I really liked this one; it was sweet and tragic at the same time. Excellent job!
Author's Response: Of course I can see why you like him so much. I wouldn't have chosen him for this part if I wouldn't believe that he's probably the (occasionally a little bit compulsive) perfect boyfriend. ;)
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 29/09/11 - 11:48 am · For: She's My Way
*sobs* Shikamaru scared Chouji away? That's... awful...
While I'm glad to see that Shikamaru's out of the hospital, it's still heartbreaking to see that he's still so vulnerable, and his saddening dilemma seems to always be dampering Ino's bubbly personality... It's all so cyclic now; it is so depressing...
Nice job though. This entire story is really well-written, as was this chapter. Awesome work on this.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 29/09/11 - 11:42 am · For: Disarm
O_O Oh crud... What the heck Kakashi, at least TRY to sound convincing enough that things won't be so bad...
The height of this situation continues to amaze me; this epic plot twist really has me on the edge of my seat wanting more. Absolutely fantastic job with this!
Author's Response: I can't express how happy this review makes me!!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 29/09/11 - 06:46 am · For: Pure Morning
Oh my gosh, I'm so scared to see what happens when she opens the door! Oh my gosh! I can't even make a decent review now XP
Great job on this chapter! Please update soon and keep up the awesome work!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 29/09/11 - 06:42 am · For: Virgin State of Mind
Gosh, everytime we see Shikamaru, I want to cry. It's just that you write his situation so well. I love that you had Kurenai visit. It makes a lot of sense and it's even really sweet. This genjutsu though... I wonder if he'll ever be cured...
Nice chapter! You did very well with this!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 29/09/11 - 06:36 am · For: Rake It In
Just so you know, the very end of this chapter was all bolded in. Just remember to fix that.
Anyway, seriously, I'm loving these plot twists! Kakashi contemplating killing himself is so crazy and suspenseful that it's genius! And great dialogue here; the conversation really had me wondering what would happen.
Great job on this chapter! I really liked this one.
Author's Response: Thanks for pointing it out! And for all your kind words. (I think this dialogue was one of my favourite dialogues to write, so it's really good to hear you enjoyed reading it as well!)
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 28/09/11 - 05:09 pm · For: Mother Stands for Comfort
Ooh, I think Mommy knows Kiba has a crush on Sakura ;D Haha, that's pretty funny. Can't wait to see how this relationship turns out.
Keep up the good work with your writing! This is really going great so far!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 28/09/11 - 04:59 pm · For: One of a Kind
Phew, Pakkun's alright... Hmm, is it bad that I'm more worried about the dog than the Hokage?...
Nah, I'm joking. That was incredible thinking on Kakashi's part by creating a Shadow Clone. I seriously wonder who this person is that possessed him.
Great chapter! I'm so pleased with how this turned out, though I know there will definitely be more suspense to come. Now I must read more :D
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 28/09/11 - 03:47 am · For: Possession
D: Pakkun! No!
Holy flying monkeys, Kakashi's possessed?! By Madara?! Is it Madara?!
Oh crap... the suspense is killing me! Gah! I need to know what is going on! Oh jeez, this was an amazing plot twist! Excellent! Keep up the wonderful work!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 27/09/11 - 03:09 pm · For: Redefine the Enemy
Holy... crap...
Kakashi killed Yugao?! What?! What?! WHAT?!?!?!?!
Oh jeez, I can't even come up with a suitable review now...
Wow, excellent twist! I enjoyed that, though now my head is buzzing with questions. Oh gosh, please keep up the amazing work with this story. It's so good!