Reviews For My Own
Name: Melodysandninja (Signed) · Date: 26/07/08 - 07:01 pm · For: Home
I love this story... I'm never gonna be able to writhe like this XD Oh, by the way, I'm a good friend of Redfox50, but i'm new on here. Still, this story rocks!!!
Name: darkxratha (Signed) · Date: 03/04/08 - 07:36 pm · For: Home
it's so adorable
Name: Patsuki21 (Signed) · Date: 06/01/08 - 04:58 pm · For: Home
this is a very nice story please write more
Name: Redfox50 (Signed) · Date: 27/11/07 - 03:20 pm · For: Home
Nice chappie.Cant wait for more ^^
Author's Response: i got this idea in a dream. So you better hope i dream some more.
Name: Sakuranzu (Signed) · Date: 27/11/07 - 03:19 pm · For: Home
I think its really cute! Please keep going!
Honestly I can't think of any constructive criticism besides working on your proof reading (couple words that don't fit the verb tense or aren't pluralised properly). But I've come to expect that on this site so i don't think anyone will mind too much as long as there's a good story :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'll try to ptoof read but the fact it that I dont' own microsoft word! I'm trying to get it though!