Reviews For Mission to the Land of Coal
Name: eldertensa (Signed) · Date: 08/08/09 - 08:15 pm · For: Chapter 5
I'm not sure if you can tell from my name but I like bleach to. Hurray!
Name: eldertensa (Signed) · Date: 08/08/09 - 08:09 pm · For: Chapter 4
Kenpachi is definately Naruto's mini-me.
Name: eldertensa (Signed) · Date: 08/08/09 - 08:06 pm · For: Chapter 3
This is Awesome!!!
Name: eldertensa (Signed) · Date: 08/08/09 - 07:59 pm · For: Chapter 2
OMFG this is definately the most awesome story I have ever read, Keep going with this story!!!
I couldn't contain myself half the time reading this!!!!
Name: GrayFOX77 (Anonymous) · Date: 24/11/07 - 07:05 pm · For: Chapter 4
Oooooooohhhhhhhhh,please finish this story I'll kill just to read the ending so please finish the story for me please.No pressure.(Also I'm not an Ino fan so don't include her in this story please I just hate that Bitch.Sorry I hate that Bitch and Sorry I'm so picky about characters so I'll always check on this story to check if its finished and will also keep on reviewing you. LOVES AND KISSES, GrayFOX77
Name: GrayFOX77 (Anonymous) · Date: 24/11/07 - 06:38 pm · For: Chapter 3
OMG I just can't get enough of your stories and to tell you the truth I'm not an excellent writer like you but I am at a passing level like at good or so on.(P.S I still hate that Son Of A Bitch INO-PIG and will always hate her.FOREVER LIVES THE HEART OF SasaSaku AND NaruSaku.FOREVER DIES Ino-Pig she diserves noones respect and should stay single.)
Name: GrayFOX77 (Anonymous) · Date: 24/11/07 - 01:36 pm · For: Chapter 2
I looooooooove your story and like your imagination.Oh and by the way did you know Sasuke's Birthday is on June or July on the 23 I think cause I don't really remember cause I found out on summer vacation.Oh and also I think Ino is a Bitch and a total Slut and doesn't diserve a man and should be a lonely Bitch.(P.S. I'm a girl and maybe we could be friends.)(P.S I still hate Ino-Pig.) LOVES AND KISSES, GrayFOX77
Name: GrayFOX77 (Anonymous) · Date: 24/11/07 - 01:14 pm · For: Chapter 1
I like the idea of a NaruSaku story & ShikaTema cause I don't like the idea of ShikaIno cause Ino is a slut and doesn't diserve a man or anyone as a matter of fact.Anyways great story and I'll keep on reviewing to you so bye bye. LOVES AND KISSES, GrayFOX77
Name: baxter54132 (Signed) · Date: 24/11/07 - 11:28 am · For: Chapter 4
its okay. How do I say this. I think its a little... well.... Generic. Their isn't enough detail.
Name: baxter54132 (Signed) · Date: 18/11/07 - 02:51 pm · For: Chapter 3
... Itachi?? Thats retarded. If this is really prior to time skip then Itachi is with Gaara right now. Where is Kisame? I think your fighting scenes are a little off. We need more action detail. whom? who says whom nowadays.
Author's Response: It is not retarded. You are turning into Wazul because you say retarded all of the time. Itachi was not really there. So Kisame did not neeed to be there.
Name: Nightmare (Signed) · Date: 18/11/07 - 02:20 am · For: Chapter 2
MORE!
Author's Response: OK!
Name: baxter54132 (Signed) · Date: 17/11/07 - 08:32 am · For: Chapter 2
in chapter one its straight not strait. its butt not but. No one can make fun of Shikamaru except Temari. YOU SPELLED BUTT WRONG TWICE. Shikamaru isn't that lame.
Author's Response: I fixed it. (again)
Name: baxter54132 (Signed) · Date: 14/11/07 - 01:29 pm · For: Chapter 1
... U need to fix your spelling. That is all I have to say
Author's Response: Thank you for the advice. I fixed my spelling mistakes.