Reviews For A Mere Crush
Name: _12Lola34_ (Signed) · Date: 30/10/07 - 10:32 am · For: That's Love
Hi! *wave*
I haven't spoken... or well i suppose posted to you in so long.
the truth is see i have been in hiding! I ran over my next door neighbors cat on my lawnmower! I was so ashamed and scared that it would haunt me!!!
okay so that was a lie but i haven't been online for ages cus' my brother wrecked our internet connection thing box so we have it fixed now!!!
Love your writing still, hehe yer so umm HHHEEEELLLLOOOO!!!!! *GRIN*
Author's Response: NOOOO poor imaginary cat! Just playing,if that did happen.Well...let's see which one of us would end up in a hospital.Respect the cats.Once again,kidding around with you.Or am I? Never mind that,just try to read as much as the stuff I have now.
Name: i like bacon (Signed) · Date: 27/08/07 - 01:25 am · For: That's Love
no don't end it it soo good
Author's Response: hm...i don't know,i might add another chaoter.but that's up to the other authors that ever read this..
Name: Swords_and_Bandages (Signed) · Date: 26/08/07 - 12:54 pm · For: That's Love
Sweet ending, man. Very nice. (The implied NaruTen, too...) Good job!
Author's Response: it's like my natural talent or something.make sure you read my new,'Sound's New Shadow'
Name: Swords_and_Bandages (Signed) · Date: 14/08/07 - 12:15 am · For: maybe confessions & more..
Hmm... simple beauty. I like that. I got to say, though, the parts about Naruto, they're just insane.
Anyways, can't wait til the next update!
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-- rasengan_welch : truly,you reviews make me update faster.it's like you're the most expressed reviewer i know.however you feel about the chapter,you just go on and type it.and a small spoiler....cliffhanger.that's all i can tell you for now.unless you really wanna spoil the suspense? or maybe i'm of no need for a cliffhanger? i find them useless..
Name: Swords_and_Bandages (Signed) · Date: 07/08/07 - 09:25 pm · For: party time part 2
Umm... that last bit went totally into Crazyland. But, nonetheless, I anticipate the moment Konohamaru makes Hanabi confess! (Although it seems very unlikely with her personality.) Keep up the good work!
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-- rasengan_welch : will do..
Name: ohyeah (Signed) · Date: 07/08/07 - 08:38 pm · For: party time part 2
yep shiamaru i know, we ALL know. oh if your in the mood for a spoiler Asuma dies although judging by this story im not sure if that already happened poor lee and gai "Timothy, you must use proper puncuation, capitalization, pronoun use, ect. quite honestly your grammar is worse than my good friend Inuzuka Kiba here."Huh, what do you want". kiba said with his mouth full of cake". "Rasengan_welch take you weird smart naruto out of here" "Oh Timothy, Timothy, you still think your friend Leju writes this story, I'm sorry but is Us who are writing you" naruto stated looking eviler by the second. "Wait, what" tim questioned. "Exactly"naruto statd plainly. "Huh". tim spoke confused "Yes, no, no, Friday, Tuna, 3:00, and yes i did just read your mind and no im not just saying that to freak you out." "sorry rasengan_welch but im just to freaked out my naruto to read this story" *runs away deep in thoughts screaming* not sure how thats possible "Well thats quite easily explained...." "No go away"
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-- rasengan_welch : same review....again.. quit double-posting!
Name: ohyeah (Signed) · Date: 07/08/07 - 08:38 pm · For: party time part 2
yep shiamaru i know, we ALL know. oh if your in the mood for a spoiler Asuma dies although judging by this story im not sure if that already happened poor lee and gai "Timothy, you must use proper puncuation, capitalization, pronoun use, ect. quite honestly your grammar is worse than my good friend Inuzuka Kiba here."Huh, what do you want". kiba said with his mouth full of cake". "Rasengan_welch take you weird smart naruto out of here" "Oh Timothy, Timothy, you still think your friend Leju writes this story, I'm sorry but is Us who are writing you" naruto stated looking eviler by the second. "Wait, what" tim questioned. "Exactly"naruto statd plainly. "Huh". tim spoke confused "Yes, no, no, Friday, Tuna, 3:00, and yes i did just read your mind and no im not just saying that to freak you out." "sorry rasengan_welch but im just to freaked out my naruto to read this story" *runs away deep in thoughts screaming* not sure how thats possible "Well thats quite easily explained...." "No go away"
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-- rasengan_welch : ......what?
Name: ohyeah (Signed) · Date: 06/08/07 - 04:21 pm · For: Party time part 1
for one you called ino clamorous and gai's pose is really weird i mean come why the hell would he do that i mean putting your fingures in acircle over your ey and stuff well thats a really weird pose its like the pose of acient idiot passed down to the king of idiots gai no offense gai your awesome but the posses are weird anyways poor lee go lee wohoo yeah whatever im hungry so i dont make since and what about naruto and tenten and if you even dare at the end of this story say together forever i will destory you with gai and rock lee
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-- rasengan_welch : dude...speak slow ans enlgish words man...i won't say 'that phrase'.i'll change the title.plus,why were you talking to characters that aren't even here at the moment?
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-- rasengan_welch : you see? now you made me spell 'english' wrong.calm down when you're writing the keyborad has done nothing to you...
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-- rasengan_welch : SEE?! now you made me spell 'keyboard' wrong.
Name: Swords_and_Bandages (Signed) · Date: 05/08/07 - 05:30 pm · For: The Invited
Hahahaha... "Will there be blood?" Lol.
Shikamaru is a P.I.M.P.! With that white suit of his. Hehehe...
Anywho, good job!
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-- rasengan_welch : thanks,there will be some good stuff in the next chap.
Name: ohyeah (Signed) · Date: 05/08/07 - 05:07 pm · For: The Invited
i have two mistakes although there may be others 1.in tontons part you said dog its an easy mistake but still 2.its like almost impossible to get to konaha from suna in one day not even that but dude if you make the onahamaru and hanabi do x-rated stuff your sick i mean i dont really care either way but a lot of people do im to board to care
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-- rasengan_welch : it's not x-rated though.... and i have no idea what you said first..
Name: Swords_and_Bandages (Signed) · Date: 05/08/07 - 12:26 am · For: Studying Under Jiraiya
Great job. A purple suit, huh? It'll look really nice if it's in one of those really dark purple colors. Anyways, can't wait for an update!
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-- rasengan_welch : today,it will be
Name: ohyeah (Signed) · Date: 04/08/07 - 05:31 pm · For: Studying Under Jiraiya
evil
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-- rasengan_welch : what...?
Name: ohyeah (Signed) · Date: 02/08/07 - 05:03 pm · For: annoying arguments
wow your a pervertt arnt you
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-- rasengan_welch : what i do this time?
Name: _12Lola34_ (Signed) · Date: 01/08/07 - 02:16 pm · For: annoying arguments
AWWWWWWW
i love Konohamaru ^_^
Love the story to and yeah the pairing is soo awwwww and wwwaaaaa and yey!!!
this probably makes no sense lol!!
update soon xx
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-- rasengan_welch : i will
Name: Lamerstu (Signed) · Date: 30/07/07 - 12:23 am · For: annoying arguments
Very cute couple! But could you please use more capital letters and spaces? I'm not trying to to offend you or anything but it's easier to read if there is better grammar... Can't wait for the next chapter! ^_^
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-- rasengan_welch : my bad,it'll be up today.
Name: Swords_and_Bandages (Signed) · Date: 29/07/07 - 09:04 pm · For: annoying arguments
Hmm... an interesting pairing. I'm piqued. Konohamaru and Hanabi... things will get very interesting. I'll wait patiently for your update.
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-- rasengan_welch : you don't have to,it'll be up quickly.first reviewer gets 20 coolness points.which was you,hi-5.