I have no idea what you are talking about!!! This is perfect just the way it is!! I love it, so sad, yet simply hard to stop reading it, sadness throw at the heart strings and tangling in them, so it gets stuck in them like gum, tugging and causing tears. Then again...sleep deprived idiot talking here. Anyway...I love it, I'm not lying to you, I'm being as sincere as possible. Can't wait to see the story unfold! Oh and the lines at the top are touching! With much love, A Vampires Butterfly ^.^
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-- Archaic Aphorism :I can always count on you, can't I?
And I don't think you're a sleep deprived idiot. Well, maybe I agree with sleep deprived, since you seem to be on no matter what time I post, but an idiot you are not.
I'm really glad you like it. I think my stories only ever bother me or seem mediocre to me because I know what I want to come out, but that's never what actually comes out... rawr.
Thankyou for reviewing!
-Archaic
Nice. I bet ur manga will come out great.
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-- Archaic Aphorism : Um... thankyou? I don't remember mentioning manga anywhere in there, but maybe I did. Maybe you're psycic... 'cuz I am trying to do a manga at the moment, as well. Either way, thanks for reviewing!
Very nice. Makes me feel better, too. I gotta say, it's the fat guys who have the biggest hearts.
Manic depression (aka bipolar disorder), huh? I think I have that, too, and I've separated it into 3 distinct stages- mania, where I'm on top of the world, depression, where I feel like $hit and may want to cry but can't, and melancholy, where I'm feeling sad but still have some energy. I also get a lot of inspiration when I'm in a melancholy mood.
*gives a big hug* There. Hope you feel better soon.
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-- Archaic Aphorism :Hee hee, thanks for the hug, but I'm actually not normally a hug-person. Strange, isn't it?
Besides, right now I'm feeling fantastic (what you called "mania") because this was the third or fourth story I'd written yesterday (I don't post everything I write, as hard as that is to believe) so yeah... depression all gone.
Thanks for reviewing,
-Archaic
*wiggles in her seat* I have no idea what to expect. Now, I must say this, first and foremost. I do not, under any circumstances read OC stories. I am usually against them fully, and they are my eternal rival in writing. But this is you and your stories, which means that I will of course read this, enjoy this, and review the hell out of this! I love the fact that someone is actually using Chouji for something! Because besides, Tenten, who has no personality to work with whatsoever, he deserves to have some writing, because he does have a personality of some sorts and it is a nice one. So I am glad this aqua girl will be his friend. No matter how much she needs to cry. He is like a big teddy bear, so he is perfect for her! I can't wait for more! And I think it is sweet that Chouji is going to help her out with whatever she needs help with. ^-^ With much love, A Vampires Butterfly ^.^
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-- Archaic Aphorism :Wow! I'm so flattered that you're going to read my OC-story even though you usually wouldn't. Thankyou.
As for the Chouji... yes. That's what I thought, too. He needs more attention, and I actually really like him (platonically, thanks... can platonic apply to girls? I really don't know...) And besides, when I felt like being held before I wrote this fic, someone like Chouji popped into my mind and... thus... the fic was born. The OC actually won't show up in the story much except once every two or three chapters ('roud-about) to cry a bit and disappear again.
As always, thankyou so much for reviewing. I really really really do appreciate it.
(I actually saw this last night, but at the exact moment I opened it and read "*wiggles in her seat*" Father came in and booted me off (rather angrilly, since it kind of was one in the morning... oops.) So I wondered about it all night, 'cuz it certainly was a strange phrase to remember, lo.
Much thanks and love,
-Archaic