Reviews For If I could turn back time...
Name: Katana (Signed) · Date: 24/11/09 - 01:45 pm · For: I wish...
aw, it makes me want to cry. Uhg, I'm supposed to be doing math right now, but the fanfictios are just to inviting. Well, that was random. Bye!
Name: mintfresh (Signed) · Date: 19/05/07 - 01:54 pm · For: All I care about
I like it, I don't usually read these sorts of things, so I can't compare it, but it has something to it, a poignant sense of loss perhaps? Anyway, I like it!
Author's Response: Oh yay! i'm glad people thought it was alright! I'm not very good at writing sad stuff...
Name: invisible_habits (Signed) · Date: 17/05/07 - 03:08 pm · For: All I care about
It's good, really good just like the first one. I definitely think Sasuke felt exactly like that when he was younger, that he wanted Itachi to see him just as much (if not more) as he wanted their father to see him.
As they grow older I think it's more likely that Itachi would feel like you describe, there's just something about him that makes you wonder what he's about ((yes, I've seen a little bit more of Itachi now that the anime had progressed)). But I don't think it's impossible that Sasuke would habour these feelings somewhere deep inside, cause it's very hard to break sibling love...
Finally, I think it was a very smart move to add this chapter. In my oppinion everything became a great a deal sadder knowing that the brothers love each other but think that the other hates him... Now you just wish they would kiss (no incest meant) and make up, but you know it will never, could never, happen... I think this is very nicely portrayted.
Name: hinata_is_awsome (Signed) · Date: 17/05/07 - 02:07 pm · For: All I care about
HI!! I think your story is great I think you should have concluding chapters and have them meet up and then they act like a family again but tsunade wants Itachi dead.NOT A INCEST!!! I dont like those they are to creepy.
Name: niveaus (Signed) · Date: 17/05/07 - 10:47 am · For: All I care about
I liked the first chapter better - simply because it seems more likely, since Itachi is still quite mysterious. But I like your writing style, and I really like the little stories, like the shuriken training 'impressive.' And the two sides to the story, both with the same conclusion, is really good too.
Author's Response: Hmm I think I agree about the first chapter, but I like the two sides to it... and I am determined that the Uchihas cant be *all* bad...
Name: Usagi (Signed) · Date: 07/05/07 - 03:44 pm · For: I wish...
You know I really, really wish Itachi would have those same feelings in the actual series. that would make my day.
Author's Response: Me too damnit! He can't be *that* evil deep down!
Name: invisible_habits (Signed) · Date: 01/05/07 - 08:45 am · For: I wish...
Wow, this is good! Like...really good! I've only seen the anime, so I really don't know much about Itachi. But I've wondered several times if he's really as cold as he appears, if he doesn't have feelings like these. Nice that someone brought it up. You write very well and caputre emotions in a wonderful way.
Author's Response: Aww thanks! I'm glad you liked it. I am convinced that Itachi can't be all evil- He must have a heart somewhere behind all that angst and sexiness.
Name: ChiyoChan (Signed) · Date: 20/04/07 - 12:37 pm · For: I wish...
Very nice! I liked it.
Um... lessee, what's there to say constructively?
I like how you don't reveal who is the speaker until the last line (though there are some hints, which is good).
Only other thing is... if you could maybe bring up the turning back time thing a bit more than just with the first line because, I mean, you used it as the title. It's good to keep a theme true to the title and mention it a few times.
I also really liked the 'I wish' theme... nicely done.
Geez this is long, but this drabble was good and I hope my opinions were helpful and not too boring.
Props ta ya.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review... um, why are you under my name?
Author's Response: Okay problem sorted!
Name: Tari (Signed) · Date: 20/04/07 - 08:49 am · For: I wish...
Oh wow...that was an eye opener...I never thought Itachi could feel like this about sasuke. You've started the thought paths in my brain again - theyve been unactive for WAY too long XD. This is nicely written. 10/10!