Reviews For Shizake Chronicles: The Awakening
Name: TeamWorkIsKey (Signed) · Date: 19/05/14 - 08:04 am · For: Blood Clash
Nice fight scene! I really liked reading it, even though I'm not completely caught up in your story, this didn't really need any background information, but I guess that's how it is with random writing (duh haha). But I do have a question, how are they cousins? Or will I find that out once I keep reading your story? Anyway, awesome job with this chapter. I always have troubles with fight scenes but you make it look easy because of how epic it turned out. Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I'm really glad you liked it, I went for as much epic ness as possible. Yeah no worries you don't need to be caught up unless you want to know the whole reason why they're fighting but it's not important. Ah well in my story I don't really explain much about shizake's parents but they are cousins by blood. So fugaku is shizakes uncle.haha ah it was nothing your not bad at fight scenes it's just that the fights are my favorite parts. Well once again I'm glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the review :)
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 12/01/14 - 12:13 pm · For: Ninja art: Soul Resonance!
Finally getting to this!!! Gosh, it feels so refreshing. I've missed reading your stuff. It feels so nostalgic because of how things have been around here lately to read something by you. And I even have SoV to read later.
I love Soul Eater and Naruto so much, so this crossover was epic. I loved seeing how being from different worlds affected the fight between Black Star and Shizake. I have a little uneasy feeling about the quickness of everyone - even Stein - accepting the other world thing because of the madness. Why wouldn't they think he'd been driven crazy from it? Then again, in that case he probably would have been in jail until he proved himself somehow. It would have completely changed the chapter and possibly the plot. With how you went with it we were able to get a better view of the interaction between Shizake and the others. I loved the fight between Black Star and Shizake. Ninja versus assassin. Fun XD. Hehe. Shizake and Tsubaki? So much fun.
If you continue this I can't wait to see Shizake's affect on the Soul Eater world and how he'll get home in the end. Sorry if this is shorter than my usual reviews, but I have a lot of stuff to read......
Author's Response: Thanks :) it's refreshing to get a review haha. I'm glad you liked it though! I was afraid how I did it but I felt that dr stein is smart enough to read people and figure out if they're lying or not and that he's smart enough to figure out the alternate reality but I'm glad you liked it it definitely would've been a different plot twist if they jailed him huh? Yeah! I hope I don't mess up too much but I hope not to alter things drastically.. Don't worry about the length of the review because they're always appreciated. Thanks for the review!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 22/12/12 - 06:22 am · For: Faster Than the Speed of Light
Okay, I read this a while ago but never reviewed, so I'll just comment on what I remember I was going to write. It was a really nice fight, and I still love seeing Shizake. Haha. I just had to see guitar and then I knew who it was. Sheesh. For a dead Mizukage, he's in a lot of places. And now Shizake is doing a job for Yushin? I can't wait to see how this turns out.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 04/12/12 - 02:03 pm · For: Words of Emptiness
Yeah for 3000+ words. Why? It means more awesomeness!!!!! I reall enjoyed this, and it was great to see Shizake and Sasuke fight. I wonder what would happen if the curse mark hadn't paralyzed him..... Anyway, I really did enjoy this. It's still so nice to see Shizake alive.
Name: Hazard (Signed) · Date: 30/11/12 - 12:30 pm · For: Faster Than the Speed of Light
Great little arc I see you got going! Nice little setup and I can't wait to see more, so keep it up man!
Author's Response: Knew you'd like it :P Thanks!
Name: DARKTRANQUILLITY (Signed) · Date: 29/11/12 - 03:45 pm · For: Words of Emptiness
I really liked it bro, and yeah it did seem longer than the other chapters. I give you three thumbs up! as to why, I don't know. I felt like going odd instead of even today. but all in all good work.
-DARKTRANQUILLITY-
Author's Response: Hello newest reviewer :D thanks for the awesome review and I'm glad you liked it :) keep reading if you like it or don't haha. Thanks again!
Name: nkbz (Signed) · Date: 18/11/12 - 09:34 pm · For: Shimmering Water
I like this quite a bit. You set up the scene off the start without trying too hard and get right to the action (and do it well). Might just be because I'm a guy but it's fun. Good job.
Author's Response: Thanks man! That means a lot coming from you. Glad you liked it.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 14/10/12 - 02:13 pm · For: Shimmering Water
Ooh. It seems like Shizake and the team are having fun XD. This was a very interesting start to the mission. I am very eager to see where it goes. Oh, and great fight there in the beginning. So much fun!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 14/10/12 - 01:38 pm · For: Those Eyes
It's terrible that I was probably the first to read this and last to review, but oh well. I shall just review now.
I'm very curious about how the entire Itachi meeting at the beginning will affect the rest , as well as what they will find in the Waterfall. And it is sooo nice to read about Shizake again. Yeah! This was a very entertaining start and I am off to read more.
Author's Response: Haha it's alright I don't mind at all. Ah the Itachi meeting was just for Itachi to "check up" on Shizake's skills. I'm glad you like reading about Shizake again :) I was kind of itching to write with him again :P Thanks for the review :)
Name: Hazard (Signed) · Date: 10/10/12 - 10:35 am · For: Those Eyes
It's a good mix to whatcha got going, keep it up! Sorry it took so long for me to sign in and post a review xD
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 09/10/12 - 09:35 pm · For: Shimmering Water
Ooh, it's a continuation of the first chapter. Nice, now I'm wondering how this whole mission will work out. Looking forward to seeing how this works out. Keep up the good work.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 05/10/12 - 03:00 pm · For: Those Eyes
So this is like... a bunch of one-shots about Shizake? Interesting.
This one came out very well, and of course, it was rather different to see a Shizake story without the script. I liked this, it was a nice little drabble. Good job.