Reviews For To Shatter A World (INFINITE BATTLE-MIX)
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 13/06/12 - 11:29 am · For: 1. Chapter 1: Death And Homecoming
So I didn't read this completely. I skipped all the parts that weren't Naruto, Sasuke, or Kakashi. Occasionally I would look at others.
But might I say the parts I did read were absolutely amazing. Everything was perfect to me. I really did enjoy it and I can definitely feel Naruto's despair. Good job. Can't wait for the next update.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 12/06/12 - 01:22 pm · For: 11. Chapter 11: Battle Two (Danger Gauge)
Wait a minute... IS SAKURA ALIVE?! First Naruto hears her voice, and now a bubble gum pink haired person is healing someone? This is getting so freaky!
The fights are getting so intense though, I really can't wait to read more! Nice job, Tragedy-san! I am so hooked, I need to see what happens!
Name: Mikagami39 (Signed) · Date: 23/04/12 - 08:06 am · For: 1. Chapter 1: Death And Homecoming
Okay, I am impressed. I think I've found a story to keep track of...Excellent work! Good strong characterization and the empathy being shown is amazing! Good work!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 18/04/12 - 06:18 pm · For: 10. Chapter 10: Of Blowing Sands And Faltering Hearts
Oh my gosh, such epic fights, I love them all! They all had an excellent flow with great description of the characters. But of course, I absolutely loved the Naruto vs. Gaara fight. It was a bit short for me, but that's because I wanted more :P But the ending was just great! You did really well with this chapter, Tragedy-san, good job!
Oh, but it looked like you had cut off something at one point. The sentence is: Baki released the air bubble of black smoke that had, and then it jumps to the next paragraph :P
Name: Rowanrose (Signed) · Date: 18/04/12 - 03:40 pm · For: 2. Chapter 2: Funerals And Departures
I will enjoy it! ^^ I am already XD
Sasuke seems so far gone awry, in those thoughts, i just can't believe it. the guy...
I liked the way you described Naruto through the eyes of his friends. It made sense to do that. Perhaps, though, it would've made the first person narratives more personal if a bit of their abilities were mentioned? eg, Kiba's sense of smell, Shino's bugs.
I also liked the way you "percieved" (i'm not really sure if that's the word I'm looking for) Sakura's death. She was another shinobi lost, and that was that.The hurt, the pain, the sorrow; it made me feel that these guys were feeling it but it was expected for them... she was a shinobi. she was going to die anyways.
What's interesting is that I've written a fanfiction along the same lines, except it's about Naruto's death. ^^ I think it's interesting to see the reaction to a teammate's death from your pov after writing it from mine.
Name: Rowanrose (Signed) · Date: 18/04/12 - 07:24 am · For: 1. Chapter 1: Death And Homecoming
That....Is....Amazing.
An awesome first chapter. You conveyed everyone's emotions perfectly. It made me sad, haha.
Nice to meet you ^^
Author's Response: Thank You, Miss Rose. It's Nice To Meet You, Too. Please Enjoy The Story.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 10/01/12 - 03:43 am · For: 9. Chapter 9: Battle 2 Pt.1 (Unknown Power)
Awesome! It was a great buildup to some epic fights, I can't wait to see the battle scenes.
The first thing I thought of when I read about Naruto's team was: cool. They're actually kind of cool (and evil, yes), and I want to learn more about who they are, where they came from, etc.
Great job on this chapter! I'm looking forward to more, keep up the awesome work!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 24/11/11 - 08:37 am · For: 8. Chapter 8: Chasing The Uncatchable; The Breaking Broken
Oh my gosh, poor Ino. Her mentally unstable condition makes me feel so sad for her. I hope she eventually gets better...
Wow, the teams have set out. The intense part is about to start, I can't wait to see what happens.
Great job on this! Keep up the awesome work!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 05/10/11 - 04:54 am · For: 7. Chapter 7: The Sand, The Leaf, And The Warning
Gosh, I feel so conflicted! I'm excited that the story is heating up, but I'm still so upset that it's because Naruto is a bad guy! Ugh, I want him to avenge Sakura's death but I also want him apprehended so he doesn't actually kill anyone else. Ah! I'm so confused.
But awesome job with this! I always feel so scared yet eager when I read this; it's always fill of suspense. Keep up the awesome work!
Name: SabakuNoAkane (Signed) · Date: 05/10/11 - 04:38 am · For: 7. Chapter 7: The Sand, The Leaf, And The Warning
Wow scary chapter. lol. Ok btw, this really doesn't affect your story, but I didn't know it until the recent manga chapters - that isn't Gaara's aunt, it is his uncle! I thought it was an aunt this whole timme too, but nope, its a guy. Just so ya know lol.
Anyways, I like this chappy (:
Author's Response: Yeah Me Too. I Fixed That Problem In One Of My One-Shots But I Guess I Forgot To Make The Adjustment Here. Will Do So, Thanks.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 04/10/11 - 05:47 am · For: 6. Chapter 6: Of Missing-nin And Fractured Dreams
Holy crap... Poor, poor Ino... Hearing about her is always so tragic... Her emotions and dreams and breakdowns are so understandable, but they're still really sad.
And oh man, Naruto is all ready for his plan to commence. I wonder who will be on his team...
Anyway, nice job! I'm really enjoying this story so far! Keep up the awesome work!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 03/10/11 - 12:42 pm · For: 5. Chapter 5: Nightmares And Plans Made
Holy crap. The meeting was so intense, especially through Kiba's POV, as he is the more aggressive thinker, unlike Shikamaru or someone. And poor Iruka... It is so sweet that he considers Naruto his son. But Kakashi, oh man, his nightmares really made me shiver and nearly had me in tears.
Excellent work on this! This chapter was awesome! Keep up the great work!
Name: tigerseye (Signed) · Date: 03/10/11 - 12:19 pm · For: 1. Chapter 1: Death And Homecoming
Wow... I feel so bad for every one. It's so sad. I'm really looking forward to more!!!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 03/10/11 - 03:49 am · For: 4. Chapter 4: After Thoughts And After Effects
:'(
It's.... so depressing.... Poor everyone.... You were right about the emotions, I started choking up once you started going on about the different characters. It was a very emotional chapter.
There were a few spelling errors. Just make sure to proofread a little. But this emotion-filled chapter totally made up for it anyway, I started tearing up in the end.
Great job with this, this was a very good chapter. Keep up the amazing work!
Name: Fantasy Madeline (Signed) · Date: 02/10/11 - 08:20 pm · For: 1. Chapter 1: Death And Homecoming
I love dark naruto fics, and I love this one. I can't wait to see where you take this, but it is turning into a dark powerful Naruto and I love it!
Name: SabakuNoAkane (Anonymous) · Date: 02/10/11 - 08:12 pm · For: 1. Chapter 1: Death And Homecoming
Geez! This is very suspensful! I am so sad for all of them, and I can't wait to see what happens! great job
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 01/10/11 - 07:19 pm · For: 3. Chapter 3: Battle 1 (Infinite Lost)
Good gosh, this story is so dark and suspenseful. It's amazing, I really enjoy this so far! This is definitely amazing, and I can't wait for more. Keep up the awesome work!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 01/10/11 - 07:03 pm · For: 2. Chapter 2: Funerals And Departures
D: Konohamaru... I loved his POV, it was so well thought out, and I liked it a lot! I just love everyone's POV, actually. But gosh, Naruto left! He's becoming a possessed demon... no pun intended? Eh, whatever, excellent work on this funeral scene, it was greatly written!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 01/10/11 - 06:46 pm · For: 1. Chapter 1: Death And Homecoming
Seriously... I love your writing. It's so amazing.
Right from the beginning to the very ending of this chapter was written with brilliance. It was so descriptive and elaborate and detailed, I love every moment of this. The dark and depressing atmosphere was excellent portrayed. Great job on this! I definitely look forward to more now!
Author's Response: Hey Silver, If You Write, I'd Love To See What You Could Do With My Challenge. It's On My Page.