Reviews For Next Generation
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 04/09/11 - 09:22 am · For: The Seken
Alright, I'm making the second jounin now!
Name: Hotaru Hyuuga
Nickname: None
Gender: Female
Age: 24
Clan: Hyuuga
Village: Leaf
Personality: She's very, very strict. She gives no leeway to her students. Her training is brutal to the point where others literally feel like they are dying. She takes hard work to a whole new level, as she takes to heart the saying, "Whatever doesn't kill you makes you stronger."
Appearance (pictures accepted): (Sadly, not my picture)
Team: 9
Family: She's a random membere of the Hyuuga branch family.
Crush: None, unless a jounin needs one...
Reason for fighting: To show the strength of the Hyuuga branch family
Dream: To break the stereotype that says the Hyuuga branch family is inferior to the main family.
Chakra Nature: Fire
Fighting style: She utilizes more offense than defense. She can use the Hyuuga clan's Eight Trigrams and Gentle Fist techniques, but she usually combines them with her fire-release attacks.
Kekkei Genkai: Byakugan
I hope this works! Tell me if I need to change anything!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 02/09/11 - 04:01 pm · For: Misora Hatake
Okay, I'm changing Sora's name to Minoru.
Name: theez (Signed) · Date: 02/09/11 - 05:22 am · For: Misora Hatake
Do you want me to submit someone else, or is my Seken member and other Genin alright?
Name: theez (Signed) · Date: 01/09/11 - 06:25 am · For: Misora Hatake
Alrighty, now for another Genin!
Name: Hoshi Ikamazu
Nickname: None
Gender: Female
Age: 12
Clan: Ikamazu
Village: Sand(I think this one is an obvious answer, but still)
Personality: Doesn't enjoy much company, and almost never hangs out with anyone. She hates it when people stutter. She hates Akira, but won't let her sister beat her to the punch, even if it means to kill Arika.
Appearance (pictures accepted): Purple Hair, Purple Eyes, Purple Jacket, and Purple Sweat pants.
Team: 1 slots for 2, 2 slots for 5, and 2 slots for 9: 9
Family: (if you want and discuss it with them, the ocs can be each others' siblings. Such as if you wanted to have you oc be my sibling. So basically you'd be making Takashi and he's too young, but still. And if you don't want there to be anyone to add ocs, please state so in your description) Arika seemed slightly lonely, so the main bad guy [is that Madara?] created Hoshi. But she betrayed Arika, and left. She became a Genin to track Akira, but soon realized that it wouldn't be that simple. Gaara recongnized this hatred, and kept her under guard.
Crush: Uh................Anyone BUT Akira!
Reason for fighting: To end Akira for splitting Arika and her up.
Dream: For her sister to realize that Akira isn't the only one they need to finish.
Chakra Nature: Wind, Earth, and Lightning, as a Hybrid of Arika and Akira.
Fighting style: Always attacks, but at some point, blocks and dodges around.
Kekkei Genkai: None
Hope this Works! If you need someone else, just ask!
Name: theez (Signed) · Date: 31/08/11 - 08:26 pm · For: Misora Hatake
Shoot, forgot Arika's chakra nature: earth
Name: theez (Signed) · Date: 31/08/11 - 07:55 pm · For: The Seken
Name: Arika Ikamazu
Nickname:Air
Gender: Female
Age: 12
Personality: Cold, hard, and wouldn't give a second thought to killing.
Appearance: Straight red hair that come down to her thighs, red eyes, blue jacket, and bright red sweats.
Team 1
Reason for fighting: Akira's heart extracted it's darkness. But the darkness created Arika, who was given her name by Madara. As the second member of the Seken, she is highly praised. But she wants to end Akira, and end their co-existence.
Fighting style: Constantly on the offensive, never blocking or anything.
Kekkei Genka: none
Personality:
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 31/08/11 - 07:00 pm · For: The Seken
Alright! I'm going to make another genin!
Name: Sora Sato
Nickname: none
Gender: Male
Age: 12-13
Clan: Sato
Village: Leaf
Personality: He's a loner. He doesn't let anyone close to him. He's very cold toward others. He's also very serious, whether it be training, missions, or with comrades. He's only nice and caring when he's with his mother.
Appearance (pictures accepted): (not my picture)
Team: 5
Family: His father, Hiro, died when Sora was ten. He died from a chakra disease that ate away at his brain. Hiro and his wife, Aika, were on the same mission together when they were ambushed, leaving Hiro with a disease that ate away at his brain. Aika also has the same disease, but it is slowly eating away at her brain, so she is kept in the hospital at all times. Sora visits her as often as he can, and she is the only person he can show affection for.
Crush: Whoever works
Reason for fighting: To make his father proud
Dream: To be a great medic ninja so he can heal his mother
Chakra Nature: Water
Fighting style: He's studying to be a medic ninja so that he can heal his mother. His weapon of choice is a spear, and he uses water-release techniques to enhance his weapons(s) as well as a few jutsu.
Kekkei Genkai: water-release techniques
I hope this works! Tell me if something needs changing!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 31/08/11 - 02:59 pm · For: The Seken
Alright then, here's a jounin :D
Name: Satoshi Yaiba
Nickname: None
Gender: Male
Age: 25
Clan: Yaiba
Village: Leaf
Personality: He's a strategist. He likes to plan things out with great detail. He's pretty strict when it comes to performing missions, though he'll take the time to make sure his comrades are alright. Outside of missions, he has a bit of a sense of humor.
Appearance (pictures accepted): (not my picture, sadly)
Team: Um... let's go with 5.
Family: He comes from the same clan as Tenten. She is actually his cousin. He has no siblings, and his parents are deceased.
Crush: Eh, I'm not sure a jounin needs one?
Reason for fighting: To protect his village
Dream: To master as many weapons as he can and use them to protect his comrades
Chakra Nature: Lightning
Fighting style: He plans out each step thoroughly before charging in. He uses traps and weapons to fight. His favorite weapons is his katana.
Kekkei Genkai: His clan is gifted in their usage of weapons, but that's it.
I hope this works. Good luck!
Name: tigerseye (Signed) · Date: 23/08/11 - 12:10 am · For: Misora Hatake
Sounds like fun!
Name: Naomi Yamanaka
Nickname: Unknown/ she doesn’t have one
Gender: Female
Age: 12
Clan: Yamanaka
Village: (I think this one is an obvious answer, but still) Leaf
Personality: She is very perceptive and notices when someone is acting strange, always loyal to her friends. She doesn’t like lying or deceiving people.
Appearance (pictures accepted):
if it doesnt show up here's the link: http://animeclubfpu.files.wordpress.com/2010/11/anime-lisa.jpg
Team: whichever
Family:Her mother is a random person from the Yamanaka Clan, now dead. Konohomaru is her father and the one who raised her.
Crush: Rikuto Takahashi
Reason for fighting: she fights for her village and her friends
Dream: To become strong and protect people important to her
Chakra Nature: Earth
Fighting style: Uses sebon, prefers to immobilize her opponents and not harm them seriously
Kekkei Genkai: She can read minds, unless she focuses she can only tell what sort of vibe someone is sending off. She respects people’s privacy and doesn’t use her ability to invade peoples minds unless absolutely necessary. The more she uses her power the more it overwhelms her, She has to be careful not to crush her own mind under the thoughts of others. (She has control of her powers but doesn’t use them much)
Name: Rainbow Fire (Signed) · Date: 22/08/11 - 10:41 am · For: Misora Hatake
Well, I've never joined a joint story before, so let's see how this submission goes.
Name: Rikuto Takahashi
Nickname: Riku
Gender: Male
Age: 12-13
Clan: Takahashi
Village: Leaf
Personality: He's very calm and laid back. He doesn't take anything seriously, even if it's the most dangerous thing in the world. If possible and appropriate, he'll crack a joke to lighten the mood to keep people calm and from freaking out. Even though he is fairly laid back, he believes people should act peacefully instead of using brute strength. He's a lover, not a fighter, type of thing.
Appearance (pictures accepted): (this is not mine)
If it doesn't show, here's the link:
http://owen21.webs.com/loka.jpeg
Team: 9
Family: His parents died on a mission, so he lives with his grandfather, Haru, who is actually a very devious old man, despite his innocent appearance.
Crush: Whoever fits
Reason for fighting: To keep peace between others
Dream: To make his parents proud
Chakra Nature: Earth
Fighting style: He tends to think things over before jumping into battle. He'll choose the easiest and less dangerous approach so that his comrades and opponents don't face too much danger. He uses his earth-release techniques usually for defense, but he'll use it for offense if necessary.
Kekkei Genkai: none
Does this work? Tell me if I messed something up. Well, good luck with this then!
Name: theez (Signed) · Date: 21/08/11 - 06:10 pm · For: Misora Hatake
Sasaui, you can definitely have your character be Akira's brother!
Author's Response: She says thanks!
Name: Fantasy Madeline (Signed) · Date: 21/08/11 - 04:19 pm · For: Misora Hatake
Name: Drucilla Uchiha
Nickname: None
Gender: Female
Age: 14, almost 15.
Clan: Uchiha
Village: No village aware that she exists
Personality: Is cold, unemotional. From a young age she learned the ways of a shinobi, and understands that killing is life. She knows it, and likes it. She is sadistic, and ruthless in her genjutsu. She is kind and respectful to her father, but no one else. She is mean and cynical.
Appearance: Black hair that is held back in a blood red hair band. Onyx eyes usually. Black long sleeved shirt, and black pants. The uchiha crest is on the back of her shirt. She has a natural uchiha glare to her.
Team: To be found out
Family: Itachi Uchiha is her father. She does not know her mother, who died in childbirth.
Crush: To be discovered.
Reason for fighting: To protect her existence, any shinobi that knows that Itachi had a daughter she shall kill.
Dream: To please her father, and to become powerful. Eventually revive her clan.
Chakra Nature: Fire and lightning
Fighting Style: Genjutsu mainly. When fighting she uses taijutsu, but prefers long ranged genjutsu attacks.
Kekkei Genkai: Has unlocked her sharingan to the extent of almost knowing Tsukliomi. She still needs to work on it a bit, but has the fundamentals down, and knows more complex ways to use it.
Is that ok?
Author's Response: Actually, there is one problem. With the one genjutsu thing, I read on a Naruto wiki that she needs Mangekyo sharingan for that, and so I was wondering if she did because then she would have had a best friend that she killed, but she doesn't seem like the type to have one, so......?
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 21/08/11 - 03:55 pm · For: Misora Hatake
Name: Zakaru Arushi
Nickname: None
Gender: Male
Age: 12 - 13
Clan: Arushi
Village: Leaf
Personality: He's really caring and has a soft heart. He puts others needs before his own. He values everything, not matter how little it is, because he grew up on the streets. He loves animals, especially his pet hawk, Tsubasa.
Appearance: Spiky black hair, a scar on his cheek, and gray-blue eyes. He wears a cross shirt that has the cross being white on the left and black on the shirt while the right side of the cross is black and the shirt is white, and white shorts.
Team: Whichever one will need one in the end.
Family: Naruto as adopted father, Hinata as adopted mother, and Akira as adopted brother IF Theez says I can. If not, then just have him be an orphan.
Crush: Hm..... Anyone willing?
Reason for fighting: To protect his loved ones and to do it as a way to train so that he can master his kekkei genkai.
Dream: To master his kekkei genkai so it never endangers people again.
Chakra Nature: Water
Fighting Style: A mostly balanced fighting style with nin- and taijutsu.
Kekkei Genkai: When either in a really bad situation or close to dying, he activates Berserk. It's like he becomes possessed. His chakra and everything else skyrockets. He can't control it yet, so he often attacks whoever is in sight.
Author's Response: Thanks for the character, sis. He's awesome. He's a lot like your real character, huh?
Name: Demon Fox (Signed) · Date: 21/08/11 - 03:42 pm · For: Misora Hatake
Ooh, I would like to join! XD
Name: Akemi Nara
Nickname: Mimi
Gender: Female
Age: 12-13
Clan: Nara
Village: Leaf
Personality: She's very carefree and loves to have fun. She doesn't like work, but she'll do it if she has to. She's very friendly, but little things tend to bother her sometimes. She's pretty smart, but not as smart like her dad.
Appearance (pictures accepted): (not my picture)
Team: 5
Family: Her father is Shikamaru Nara and her mother is Temari of the Sand. Her mother is an ambassador for Sand to the Leaf Village, so she is often traveling between villages, which makes Akemi really close to her dad.
Crush: Whoever works
Reason for fighting: To protect her family and friends
Dream: To be a great strategist like her dad
Chakra Nature: Wind
Fighting style: She can use her mom's wind attacks and her dad's Shadow Imitation jutsu.
Kekkei Genkai: The Nara clan's Shadow Imitation jutsu.
I hope this is okay!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot for your character. She's awesome. She sure is okay.
Name: theez (Signed) · Date: 21/08/11 - 02:52 pm · For: Misora Hatake
Okay, before I do anything, when does this take place? Well, here's a character.
Name: Akira Uzamaki
Nickname: Aka
Gender: Male
Age: 12
Clan: Hyuuga
Village: (I think this one is an obvious answer, but still) Konoha [would put another, but the Hyuuga is a Konoha clan.]
Personality: Sweet, Kind, and Gentle like his mother, but contains the fighting spirit of his father. He loves to train and fight. Would protect his mother and father if it meant his life. He loves Lion's, and that is why he can summon them.
Appearance (pictures accepted): Electric Blue hair, and Blue Eyes. He wear's a Red Jacket with Blue on the sleeves, and Navy Blue sweats.
Team: 2
Family: (if you want and discuss it with them, the ocs can be each others' siblings. Such as if you wanted to have you oc be my sibling. So basically you'd be making Takashi and he's too young, but still. And if you don't want there to be anyone to add ocs, please state so in your description) Naruto Uzamaki is his father, and his mother is Hinata Hyuuga. His grandfather hates him, but that doesn't matter to him. He has no friends, so he normally just hang's out with his mom and dad, which is more of a reason why he is bullied.
Crush: Eh, uhhh........I want one, but you decide, since I don't know what my option's are.
Reason for fighting: Because he loves it, and to make his mother and father proud.
Dream: To become the strongest Ninja ever.
Chakra Nature: Wind and Lightning.
Fighting style: He loves to toy around with his opponent to see how to fight, and then start's to try, and uses his Justsu. Mostly is on the offensive, but dodges around when he want's to.
Kekkei Genkai: Can change his eyes to pale to use Byakugan. He created a Jutsu type: Storm.
Love the idea, can't wait to see this come into action!
Author's Response: Hahaha. He's a lot like Ezra, only slightly different. He's awesome, though. Thanks a lot!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 21/08/11 - 02:37 pm · For: Misora Hatake
Yay! This sounds so interesting!
Name: Megumi Inuzuka
Nickname: none
Gender: Female
Age: 12-13
Clan: Inuzuka
Village: Leaf
Personality: She's very tough. She has a short temper, but she has a good heart; it just takes a lot to get to it. She's often sarcastic with others, but when she is nice and genuine, it's a very valuable moment for her, since she tries to play the tough girl a lot.
Appearance (pictures accepted):
Team: 9
Family: Her father is Kiba Inuzuka. Her mother was Kaminari Ikazuchi, but she was killed on a mission. She's an only child, so when she's not with friends, she's with her father. When her mother was killed, the Ikazuchi clan decided that there was no reason to be tied with the Inuzuka clan any longer, so Megumi is shunned from her mother's side of the family. The Inuzuka clan is very fond of her htough. Her dog's name is Shiromaru.
Crush: Whoever wants to put up with her.
Reason for fighting: To be a strong kunoichi and make her mother proud
Dream: To be a great kunoichi who combines both her father's and mother's abilities together and be acknowledged by the Ikazuchi clan.
Chakra Nature: Lightning
Fighting style: She knows a few lightning jutsu. She also fights with Shiromaru, and sometimes, they use Ikazuchi's lightning abilities with the Inuzuka's combination attacks.
Kekkei Genkai: Other than the Inuzuka's ability to work with dogs, Megumi also has the Ikazuchi's bloodline of lightning-release.
Tell me if there's something that needs changing! Good luck!
Author's Response: Nope. Nothing needs changed. This is an awesome character. Thanks a lot for her.
