Reviews For Monster to Monster
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 03/07/11 - 04:28 am · For: Chapter 7
Hm. Deathclaw. Nice Hallow name. It fits well. Anyway, great chapter. I think you did wonderful with the characters you introduced in this chapter. I loved how Sasuke is having so much trouble with his zanpakuto and fighting. Now he's not a little Mr. Perfect. Wonder how he feels about that...... Then you had his zanpakuto talk to him, and when he explained why he wasn't talking, it was an awesome reason. Please write more soon!
Author's Response: Thank you.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 02/07/11 - 09:23 pm · For: Chapter 7
Nice! I like how you're slowly introducing the characters. Good work. And I really like how you're describing Sasuke's dilemma. It really flows well, and it is a good contrast to what Naruto is actually going through right now. Nice work on this chapter! Oh, and don't worry about your other story. As long as you update something, your fans will be happy :)
Author's Response: Thanks as always.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 29/06/11 - 07:45 am · For: Chapter 6
This chapter was great. I can't wait for you to write more. You did great with my characters. Now all that's left is Zakaru. I know you'll do great just like with them. Please write more soon!
Author's Response: Thanks! Sorry it took so long to reply.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 28/06/11 - 08:36 pm · For: Chapter 6
Wow! Loved it! I think you're doing very well with the characters, good job! And the plot is really moving along, I really really like where this is going! I think things are going very well, and you're writing everything very nicely as well. Great work! Keep it up, it's definitely going good so far!
Author's Response: Thanks as always.
Name: masterd1 (Signed) · Date: 24/06/11 - 06:45 am · For: Prologue
PHEW, okay that was AAAAMMMMMAAAZZZZIIINNNNGGG, haha you totally got drakans attitude right, and the three lieutenants, you also got docs personality right too! MAN YOUR GOOD! i can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 23/06/11 - 08:03 pm · For: Chapter 5
Ooh, Squad Zero? I wonder who they are. I can't wait until you write more so I can find out. I loved this chapter. I can't believe that none of my ocs have been introduced (then again, I only gave you three out of about thirty-six). I loved the scene with the rebellious captain. Write more soon please! I think I've become addicted to your story (like most of the stories that have been posted lately).
Author's Response: I think you can expect at least one of your oc'c soon. ;) Thanks again.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 23/06/11 - 08:00 pm · For: Chapter 5
O_O Squad Zero... what to say, what to say... how about just wow? Yeah, that'll work. Wow!
That was an intense chapter. I though Kin Ko was going to die! Thank goodness he didn't so early into the story. That would have sucked.
You're doing awesome with my characters, just so you know. Great work with them!
Of course, the best scene was with the three rebellious lieutenants. Juro was hilarious.... good work with him, I couldn't stop laughing. I read that scene three times before finally continuing to finish the chapter :D
Excellent work. This was well worth the wait. I can't wait for more. Update as soon as you can, this is going very well. It's just plain awesome!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Name: masterd1 (Signed) · Date: 22/06/11 - 08:28 am · For: Prologue
no more stories?
Author's Response: What do you mean? Its only been like a week. :P I've started work on it, and it'll hopefully be done by Sunday. Tomorrow at the earliest.
Name: shadow4000 (Signed) · Date: 17/06/11 - 09:09 am · For: Prologue
hope it isn't too late to join...
i wanna add a character....
Author's Response: It kinda is, sorry.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 16/06/11 - 07:35 pm · For: Chapter 4: The Message
Ho-ly crap! That was amazing! I loved this chapter, and the message sure has me excited to see what happens next. Please update soon. This story is amazingly awesome. The thing about Naruto being on the bad guys side and Sasuke being on the good guys side is kinda funny to me, but I like the change. It's interesting.
Author's Response: Thanks.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 16/06/11 - 05:11 pm · For: Chapter 4: The Message
Wait, captain Ko is going to die already?! Man, you don't mess around if he is.
Great work with Sasuke's inner battle. It's good to see him FINALLY turning over a new leaf, and I think you described it very well. Actually, the same goes with Naruto's inner conflict. I almost truly believed that he would give into the hate, but then he surpassed it, and now he is the Hollow who will change everything.... can't wait to see how that works out :D
Great work with this chapter, I've been waiting for this forever! And it was so worth it! Excellent job, I definitely can't wait to see what happens next! Keep up the fantastic work with this story!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Name: masterd1 (Signed) · Date: 15/06/11 - 08:17 am · For: Prologue
I am really excited to read your stories since i have never done anything like this before.
Author's Response: Thanks. A bingo book is on the way, then I'll start working on the next chapter. One thing to note is that not all the new characters are going to be in the chapter, so if you don't see a certain character don't be surprised.
Name: masterd1 (Signed) · Date: 14/06/11 - 06:26 pm · For: Prologue
yup he was
Author's Response: Okay then. Looks like we're pretty much good for characters.
Name: masterd1 (Signed) · Date: 14/06/11 - 04:26 pm · For: Prologue
Name: Riku Sowashi
Gender: Male
Age: 265
Squad: 6
Rank: Captain
Zanpakuto: Balapro
Shikai Call: Balance, Balapro!
Shikai Apperance: the hilt is see through and the blade, is a triangle prism, it looks like one half of an hourglass.
Shikai Ability: It can absorb the life energy of an enemy but not enough to kill them.
Bankai: The other end of the sword grows a triangular prism now looking like a full hour glass with a handle in between it can now absorb and give out the energy it takes in.
Personality: Caring, doesn't like fighting but will do if necessary, minds his business
Apperance: (disclaimer not mine)
http://www.animekida.com/apps/blog/entries/show/6760780-dr-de-la-torre-died-at-the-age-of-62
Handy Facts: i tried my luck at a medical captain, change anything that doesnt seem right
Author's Response: So... I can assume the Doc character was meant for Squad 4? Anyway, sounds good.
Name: CrimsonFighter3 (Signed) · Date: 14/06/11 - 04:15 pm · For: Prologue
acttually, I did squad 6 lieutenant, so its everything u said but tht lol. not trying to prove you wrong, I just dont want my character or even worse people getting confused
Name: masterd1 (Signed) · Date: 14/06/11 - 04:12 pm · For: Prologue
so i checked stuff off for you and Squad4 captain is still open
Squad 6 captain and lieutenant are open
Squad 9 lieutenant is open
and thats it
Name: masterd1 (Signed) · Date: 14/06/11 - 04:05 pm · For: Prologue
it was the research squad which was supposed to be 12 but thats already taken som i guessing which ever one is still open
Name: CrimsonFighter3 (Signed) · Date: 14/06/11 - 02:40 pm · For: Prologue
Masterd1 what squad does tht captian doc belong to?
Name: masterd1 (Signed) · Date: 14/06/11 - 02:31 pm · For: Prologue
which spots are still open?
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 14/06/11 - 01:16 pm · For: Join up!
Name: Saetou Gushiken
Gender: Male
Age: 123 (looks 25ish)
Squad: 4
Position: Lieutenant
Zanpakuto Name: Taiyou Awai
Shikai Call: Reach for the sun, Taiyou Awai
Shikai appearance: The sword changes into a tonfa (yes, that's an actual weapon) with blades on both sides.
Shikai Ability: A trail of light absorbed from the sun trails its path, cutting even worse than the actual blade. He can shoot out beams of light or use them like whips.
Bankai: None
Personality: He's closed off from everyone else. He rarely talks unless he's around one of his few friends. He intimidates people with his cold stare a lot, but he's truly has a good heart.
Appearance: (disclaimer: not mine)
http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2010/089/6/f/Bleach_OC_by_DarkFlameOfTerror.jpg
He's basically like this and his shinigami uniform is like the cloak or whatever he's wearing.
Hope I'm not too late!
Author's Response: Nope, you still have until midnight tonight to make more. Cool character, although the picture says it can't be found. I'll try to find it myself since the url is pretty explanatory. Thanks.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 14/06/11 - 09:51 am · For: Prologue
Whoops....
I accidentally put Shikai ability twice... the second one is the bankai... my bad -__-
Author's Response: Ohhhhhh... okay.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 14/06/11 - 05:39 am · For: Join up!
Name: Kasumi Dokushi
Gender: Female
Age: 118 looks 18-ish
Squad: 9
Position: Captain
Zanpakuto name: Nichibotsu
Shikai call: Rise with the sun, set with the day, Nichibotsu!
Shikai appearance: A bamboo umbrella (or a Japanese paper umbrella, whichever helps you imagine it better) with a dark bluish color with a light blue design. The design is a light blue swirl that starts on one side and circles around toward the center. When the umbrella is spinning, it looks like a whirlpool.
Shikai ability: Kasumi spins the umbrella above her head or in front of her to create whirlpools and maelstroms.
Shikai ability: Kasumi can also make the umbrella spin to create poison. She usually uses it to make the area rain poison, but she is content with sending whirlpools laced with a poisonous venom.
Personality: Serious in battle but kind when she is on comfortable terms with people. She's very smart, and she uses her calculating mind very well in the battlefield.
Appearance: (not my picture)
http://browse.deviantart.com/?qh=§ion=&q=shinigami+girl+oc#/d378pjo
Ignore the katana in that picture.
Handy facts: none
Tell me if this spot is taken or if something is wrong.
Author's Response: That spot isn't taken, but you did forget Bankai-unless you don't want this captain to have Bankai. Other than that it's fine.
Name: masterd1 (Signed) · Date: 13/06/11 - 05:59 pm · For: Prologue
it should say two paint brushes my bad
Name: masterd1 (Signed) · Date: 13/06/11 - 05:58 pm · For: Prologue
Name:Doc Fukashi
Gender: Female
Age: 256
Squad: Research squad i dont know which number that is
Rank:Captain
Zanpakuto:Pazubrushi!
Shikai Call: Draw, Pazubrushi!
Shikai ability: Sword has a all black hilt, it turns in a mid sized pen that can draw on air to create kidou spells, and advance d forms of kidou spells.
Bankai: Draw my art, Great Pazubrishi! her arms disseapear leaving to paint brushes as arms and she can draw items and materialize them like swords rocks etc(tell me if its to OP)
Personality: creative, relaxed, really curious which can sometimes lead to her doing weird things
Appearance: Tallish, long purple hair raped up in a bun with a pen holding it in, tradition captain robe, except her robe has lots of words and drawings on it.
Handy Facts: i hope i didnt mess up, i tried to make someone who seemed medical like but could still fight.
Author's Response: I think it might be a bit too OP... if OP means over-the top. Not to say its bad or anything, just paint brushes for arms is pretty unusual. If you could come up with something a little different, or I could come up with something, that would be great.rnAlso, 12 is the research squad, but we already have positions for it, so...rnOther than that, its all good.
Name: CrimsonFighter3 (Signed) · Date: 13/06/11 - 04:01 pm · For: Prologue
5 mins sounds good, and I understand perfectly, it would be very unfair and wouldnt be that fun