Reviews For Monster to Monster
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 08/06/11 - 05:05 pm · For: Join up!
Okay then.
Bankai: She keeps her other scythe, but it has a chain at the bottom of it that links to a second scythe. It looks like what's shown on this link (disclaimer: belongs to Sathiest Emperor of deviantart)
http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs28/i/2008/146/c/8/Scythe_of_the_Death_King_by_Sathiest_Emperor.jpg
It has a ball of energy in the bottom of the handle. This scythe feeds off the darkness in the person hearts, and it uses that as the energy within the ball. When she wants to, she can join both the light and darkness part of Mitsukai Teishi to form a shadow scythe that is basically like the light one but is gray and has the darkness one's handle. The sun is there instead of the mechanical part on the darkness one. When she does this, she uses shadow attacks. When she uses one scythe to swing the other around by the chain, she can create a tornado of either darkness or light, depending on which one is spinning.
That's what I came up with (in one minute) just now so it's probably flawed. If so, I'll try to fix it.
Author's Response: So, its like two of those scythes, connected by a chain except one (the light one) is like white. They can combine into one that is grey, and it can use shadow attacks. If she uses them separately and swings them around, they can create dark/light tornados. That's how it is, right? It doesn't need any refining. In fact, its quite good.rnThanks.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 08/06/11 - 02:29 pm · For: Chapter 2: Knowledge and Itachi
*face palms* Yes, I meant squad 2. I was looking at CrimsonFighter3's thing and accidentally put 11. Sorry about that. Okay, now to the story. It's amazing. I can't believe how great this is. It combines my favorite two anime shows together perfectly. Please write more soon!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 08/06/11 - 01:24 pm · For: Join up!
Okay, keep in mind I haven't watched Bleach in forever, so correct me where I make mistakes and I'll try to fix them.
Name: Tenshi Ikimomo
Gender: Female
Age: 173 (appears to be 17)
Squad: 11
Position: Lieutenant (unless Silverwolf wants me to change it)
Zanpakuto: Mitsukai Teishi (light type)
Shikai call: Answer the call of the light, Mitsukai Teishi!
Shikai Appearance: It turns from a katana to a scythe with a white blade. There's a star like object that has a big hole in the middle. The handle connects to the bottom while the blade comes out of the left. In the middle of the sun object is a bright light that can blind one if someone looks at it.
Shikai ability: When unlocked, light comes from the sun object that Tenshi can use for attacks. If she wants to, she can make another blade come out from any of the sun's spikes or rays or whatever you want to call them.
Bankai: Tell me if you want her to get one. Then I'll tell you.
Personality: She's really happy at times, but when things are serious, it's hard to get her to laugh or smile. She's very trusting, and she tried to look past the darkness in people, no matter what they've done in the past. This can be a really bad thing for her and has put her in bad situations before. When it comes to protecting ones she cares about, though, her true skills come out. Even when scared, she can overcome it to protect her friends.
Appearance: She wears the same soul reaper uniform as everyone else. She also has a chain necklace with an angel wing attached. Tenshi's hair is as white as snow and her eyes are a golden color.
Handy facts: She'll try to find a way out of fighting before she actually fights. Tenshi wants to avoid conflicts so she doesn't hurt her opponents. Yeah, she cares too much sometimes.... She loves most things that others find creepy.
Romance: Anyone who's willing I guess
Author's Response: Well... We kinda already have a Squad 11 Lieutenant. :/ Did you mean Squad 2? I'll contact you and see what we can do.rnrnOther than that, excellent! I think the romance thing is shot, though, but it wouldn't effect the story anyway. Anyway, thanks for the character!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 08/06/11 - 12:51 pm · For: Chapter 1: New Life
=O No. Way. That was awesome. Sorry it took me so long to read this chapter, but I'm glad I did. It was amazing. I'm going to have to readjust to the terms because it's been a while since I watched Bleach, but I'm willing to do it just to read your story. You rock!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 08/06/11 - 11:28 am · For: Chapter 2: Knowledge and Itachi
What?! Is Sasuke dead? Oh man, Itachi got him really easily. I wonder what shall happen to him....
And oh, I feel bad for the Vasto Lorde, he has to teach Naruto everything. What a fun lesson that should be *insert sarcasm here*
Yup, definitely want to read more. Keep up the great work, this is getting very very interesting! I can't wait to see what happens next for this story! I'm so excited!
Name: CrimsonFighter3 (Signed) · Date: 08/06/11 - 10:37 am · For: Join up!
Name: Yosai Kuroshi
Gender: Male
Age: 113
Squad: 11th
Position: Lieutenant
Zanpakuto: Fujin (Air Type)
Shikai call: Devaste Fujin
Shikai appearance: Claw-Gaunlets, and shin gaurds(like those gaurds that go on your legs I have no idea what they are called)
Shikai ability: Able to control winds(to the point where it is either around him, around his weapons, or being shot in front of him)
Bankai: None at the moment (if you want him to have one then go ahead, I suggest it gives him the ability to freely control the air)
Personality: Playful, likes to have fun but is serious when in a fight or when his comrades need him
Appearance: Black spiky hair, appears to be 16
Handy facts: He hates docters, like he refuses to be in a hospital or a docters office
Romance: he isnt really good with being able to express his feelings for girls that well since he never really had to (he is into girls not boys)
Author's Response: Nice! Don't worry about the romance, though. I don't do the homo thing. In fact, I barely write real romance. rnI'm looking forward to writing this character.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 07/06/11 - 06:55 pm · For: Join up!
Gosh, look at my life! I have no time to even make a character. Sorry for the delay. But from before, that wasn't my review.
Name: Akira Suzuki
Gender: Female
Age: 431
Squad: Second
Position: Captain
Zanpakuto: Rakuyo
Shikai call: Dance the dance of death, Rakuyo!
Shikai appearance: A long sword, with a deep green hilt, enscribed with a vine and leaf design that goes the entire length of the blade and hilt, which come off the end in two long vines
Shikai ability: Can control any form of plant and can even make plants grow or die, depending on the situation
Bankai: Vines and leaves move from the hilt to the the blade, making it sharper and more deadly.
Personality: Quiet and calm. She's very nice and collected in everything she does, but in battle, she's deadly and becomes scarier.
Appearance: Standard Shinigami uniform. She has red shoulder length hair and green eyes.
Handy facts: She loves everything about nature. Animals, plants, life
Romance: It does not matter.
Tell me if I must change anything!
Author's Response: Hmmm... strange. I seem to have a missing review then. Eh, anyway...rnrnAwesome character! I wouldn't have even thought of a Plant-based Zanpakuto!rnNothing needs changing here. I just hope I can get enough characters for the story. :/
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 06/06/11 - 06:43 am · For: Join up!
Oh wow! Naruto's a Hollow, I really like how you are describing that part. It's very creative of you to throw Naruto into a such a different world like this. And I really liked how Sasuke was trying to take the Kyuubi. And the reference to Itachi? Genius. They never did anything with that in the manga, and I like how you brought Itachi in to stop Sasuke. Excellent idea. Can't wait for more, definitely!
I don't have time right now to make a character as I am using the library computer at my school (oh crud, I'm about to get caught!) But don't be afraid to add this to the challenge ;D Keep up the great work with this story!
Author's Response: Thanks as always. The story should now be in the challenge.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 31/05/11 - 04:42 am · For: Prologue
This is interesting. I like how Naruto died. It's a nice twist to things. I understand how he died, but where did he and Sasuke have his battle in this, because I can't think of any time they battled after he learned the new Rasengan move. Well, seeing as it is your story, you probably made it up. Okay, Sasaui, back on track. It's amazing so far. I can't wait to read more of it.
Author's Response: Yeah, I made it up for after the 4th Great Ninja war. rnrnThanks for the review.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 29/05/11 - 10:50 pm · For: Prologue
Oh man. Not quite sure what's going on, but I do like it. I'm excited now, what happened to Naruto? And wait, did he die?! I'm so confused, I need more!
Oh, and what's this I hear about this being a joint story? Interesting.... If it is, respond to the challenge under my name!
Ahem, back on track. I cannot wait to see what is going to happen. I'm bewildered, but in a good way. It makes me want to keep reading. So I hope this is updated soon!
Author's Response: Yep, Naruto died. Not exactly what most people expect from a Naruto Fanfiction, but for this story I needed him to die. *insert devil face here*rnI do plan on entering this in the joint story challenge just as soon as I get to the joining part. rnP.S. I hope you've watched Bleach, otherwise it'll be harder to figure out some things.rn