Reviews For Monster to Monster
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 13/06/11 - 01:57 pm · For: Join up!
Yikes, there are so many reviews that I can't tell which positions aren't needed anymore! Ugh, if I accidentally pick a squad/position that is already taken, please forgive me.
Name: Sora Shinku
Gender: Male
Age: 212 looks 21-ish
Squad: 7
Position: Captain
Zanpakuto name: Kurai Honoo
Shikai call: Burn them to the ground, Kurai Honoo!
Shikai appearance: A black whip made from dragon leather that extends about 7 feet.
Shikai ability: The whip conducts fire, allowing it to whip fire at its enemies. If someone is hit with the flaming whip, it leaves a terrible burn.
Bankai: The whip can use other fire attacks, creating flaming tornadoes as well as extending its fire to reach long distances.
Personality: Very serious and does not talk to others. He is strict with his underlings. But he does admire his lieutenant (Akemi... I think). While others are frightened by her scary attitude, he finds it more and more attractive, even though he would never admit it. (Crimsonfighter3 inspired me for romance within the ranks :D)
Appearance: Standard Shinigami uniform with the frong showing his muscles. Thick dark brown hair, red eyes, tan skin.
Handy facts: none, really
How's this? Let's hope I didn't pick a position/squad that was already taken...
Author's Response: I don't think it has been taken yet. Anyway, thanks for the character. Don't expect amazing romance though. It won't be any different from the romance I normally write. It'll just be kind've a break from the main story now and then.rnThanks again!
Name: CrimsonFighter3 (Signed) · Date: 13/06/11 - 11:41 am · For: Prologue
Yeha he has a lot of reiatsu, and I totally agree with the whole concept of the stopping ability not being able to affect high powered things, and how long do you think the break should be between the stopping ability?
Author's Response: I don't know, five minutes maybe. I just don't want it to be like, freezing time, slashing the crud out of a now defenseless hollow, then winning. Its just kind of too easy, ya know?
Name: CrimsonFighter3 (Signed) · Date: 13/06/11 - 07:01 am · For: Prologue
K I might mess up since I'm doing this from my phone but here I go
Name: Takuya (no last name)
Squad:6th
Position: leutinant
Shikai: Akuma
Shikai call: bloody Akuma
Shikai appearance: (do you know how soldiers have like those long clips of bullets that are.so long that they go around the body and kind of form an X) yeah.its that except instead of bullets its throwing knives. And then he has his two knives that he doesn't throw but fights with.
Shikai ability: whenever his blades make contact with a person and cuts them it stores the blood. And he is able to harden his blood to reduce damage
Bankai: Akumas Bloody Revolt, now he is able to harden all the blood stored in his blades, freely control it, whether he makes a.slice of hardened blood like ichigo, or makes a sheild. Or makes a bigger blade out of.blood
Appearance: shinigami outfit except no sleeves. And both of his arms.are covered in bandages. White spiky hair tan skin .and crimson eyes
Handy facts; since he always gets hurt he never takes his injuries seriously
Author's Response: Excellent! Good thing I have this rated 15. ;)
Name: masterd1 (Signed) · Date: 13/06/11 - 06:21 am · For: Prologue
yay this is fun!
Name: Tomi Drakan (people usually cal him by his last name though
Gender: Male
Age: 221 looks 19
Squad: 12
Position: lieutenant
Zanpakuto:Doramashi
Shikai Call: Roar Doromashi!
Shikai Apperance: a glove on each fist but each fist has a fang betweens its middle knuckles so each gloves has three fangs (like wolverine) but smaller and red.
Shikai Ability: the fangs can set things a blaze in a dragon like flame if they touch you, and they also slash
Bankai: if you wish Roar,Ryu Doramashi!
has a dragons mouth on each hand made out of metal and dragon skin, and can nshoot dragon fire blast and set multiple things a blaze. (it would be interesting if he had bankai and his captain doesnt which she doesnt)
Personality: young and hot headed which is often why people can't see him as captain even though he has amazing strength. He is schooled by his captain even though she is blind, and feels the need to protect her and be her eyes in battle, which often leads to her having to protect him.
Appearance: spiky orange red hair, its short he is 5'9 and built. regular shinagami uniform except the the sleeves are gone, and the lower half is cut off so its look like this style http://www.approvedgasmasks.com/strike-vest.htm
Handy Facts: even though he can be hard headed he has a big heart inside, and will try to protect his comrades anyway or how
Author's Response: Cool.
Name: CrimsonFighter3 (Signed) · Date: 13/06/11 - 06:00 am · For: Prologue
Name: Aimi Muchina
Gender: Female
Age: 110 looks like she is about 19
Squad: 8th
Position: Captain
Zanpakuto name: Tenjin
Shikai call: Destroy all boundaries, Tenjin
Shikai appearance: Two swords, one is on her back while the other is on her left side. The one one her back extends like renji's sword
Shikai ability: She is able to rip small holes,creating a small portal to another dimension. If she has to holes open at the same time then, what ever goes in one whole come out of the other(kind of like portal or portal 2 if you ever played)
Bankai: No Bankai as of now
Personality: Kind to all people, she easily trusts people. Sometimes ignorant to the feelings of those around her
Appearance: Regular shinigami Captain outfit, Green eyes, Short Black Hair
Handy facts: when she is being professional with other captains and others she seems kind and super nice. But when she is with those she fels comfortable with, she actually acts like a tom-boy, and she loves to joke around and have fun
Hope that was good enough
Author's Response: Yep, its good.
Name: masterd1 (Signed) · Date: 13/06/11 - 05:45 am · For: Prologue
so aoi already has an lighting element weapon so i think ill change my leiutenants element to dark reiatsu so anything lighting just change to dark reiatsu if thats okay
Author's Response: Its fine.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 13/06/11 - 05:44 am · For: Join up!
Name: Yumiko Shiba
Gender: Female
Age: 174 (looks 17ish)
Squad: 13
Position: Lieutenant
Zanpakuto Name: Hinote Uchiwa
Shikai call: Blaze to life, Hinote Uchiwa
Shikai Appearance: It turns into two fans with a fire designs on it. There's tiny blades at the end that she can use to slash at people.
Shikai Ability: She can make fire come out from the tips when she slashes.
Bankai: None
Appearance: (disclaimer: doesn't belong to me)
http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/079/1/3/137e4420b547c898038a440121546be4-d3c3azj.png
Personality: She's very shy around a lot of people, but when she gets to know you, she's really nice and caring. When she sees someone who is down in distress or sad, she'll do whatever she can to help whether she knows you or not.
Handy Facts: None
Hope she's good.
Author's Response: She's good!
Name: CrimsonFighter3 (Signed) · Date: 13/06/11 - 05:43 am · For: Prologue
Name: Daisuke Hogo
Gender: Male
Age: 100 looks like he is about 18
Squad: 8th
Position: Lieutenant
Zanpakuto name: Omoikane
Shikai call: No call, it is permantly active (like Ichigo)
Shikai appearance: A watch on his right wrist, and a knife that he keeps in his left sleeve
Shikai ability: He is able to stop or accelerate time. On a specfic target. He is only able to stop up to 3 things at the same time. and he is only able to accelerate 2 things at the same time. When he stops something it only stops for 10 secs, and when he accelerates something its accelerated for 20 secs. He can only use his stopping ability every minute and 30 secinds, and his accelerating ability every 5 mins.
Bankai: No Bankai
Personality: Playful and fun when he is with his captain, is a dick to anyone who tries to mess with his captain. Most people tease him because he is really protective of his captain
Appearance: Regular shinigami outfit, execpt his right sleeve is gone
Handy facts: He tries to not use his abilities all the time because he is scared that he will get dependant on it. He loves his captain, she doesn't know it, and if hes not doing work, he is usually training. and he has declined the oppertunity to be a captain so he can be with his captain
I hope that wasnt too much, and I tried to put restictions on his shikai, cuz I felt it would be to powerful without them, and just tell me if you need me to change anything
Author's Response: You're the first to actually have a set romance. Anyway, I'm glad you put restrictions yourself. I might kick up the time between time freezing ability and maybe have it uneffective against things with ridiculously high reiatsu.(think powerful captain levels) rnOtherwise, its great. I'll assume that he had a very high reiatsu for his zanpakuto to be in constant shikai.
Name: masterd1 (Signed) · Date: 13/06/11 - 05:14 am · For: Prologue
Here are the links seperate:
Bankai Horse mode: http://jeyen.typepad.com/.a/6a00d8346ddd0f69e2013485acc84a970c-pi
Bankai sword mode: http://gadgetsin.com/final-fantasy-xiii-transformable-odin-action-figure-from-play-arts-kai.htm
Sword and gun:http://powerrangersfanfiction.wikia.com/wiki/Lightning_%28Grid_Series%29
Author's Response: The top one wasn't working for me, but I think I get it.
Name: masterd1 (Signed) · Date: 13/06/11 - 05:09 am · For: Prologue
shikai appearance: looks like the link (not my pic)
SkiKai Ability: It slash and burns in sword mode with the element of lighting but in gun mode it shoots lighting bolts, and it takes 5 seconds to switch between each mode.
Bankai:(if you want but if you do)
Slash and burn,Shomei Odinsufia!
Same weapon but a furious spirit is show down from the heavens and in sword mode it looks like this http://www.google.com/imgres?imgurl=http://gadgetsin.com/uploads/2010/01/final_fantasy8_odin_action_figure_1.jpg&imgrefurl=http://gadgetsin.com/final-fantasy-xiii-transformable-odin-action-figure-from-play-arts-kai.htm&usg=__BrXrUlYdNtY977CnKimIH13KKRI=&h=613&w=450&sz=52&hl=en&start=0&sig2=AhbNL0BCMX87sm8Trm_CvQ&zoom=1&tbnid=zvl2I3KuMKD71M:&tbnh=180&tbnw=133&ei=W_z1TZD0AYfZgAe1oO2lDQ&prev=/search%3Fq%3Dodin%2Bfrom%2Bff13%26um%3D1%26hl%3Den%26safe%3Dactive%26sa%3DN%26biw%3D1152%26bih%3D667%26tbm%3Disch&um=1&itbs=1&iact=hc&vpx=139&vpy=251&dur=204&hovh=262&hovw=192&tx=105&ty=115&page=1&ndsp=14&ved=1t:429,r:5,s:0&biw=1152&bih=667 (not mine) and in gun mode it looks like this http://www.google.com/imgres?imgurl=http://jeyen.typepad.com/.a/6a00d8346ddd0f69e2013485acc84a970c-800wi&imgrefurl=http://jeyen.typepad.com/blog/toys-urban-vinyl-art/&usg=__E4NAcWKhjp1EApaXBdWgB7ZKskk=&h=468&w=500&sz=41&hl=en&start=15&sig2=Gs7t9g2d1Sgvodfj52SLAw&zoom=1&tbnid=ftQkELdENnXa9M:&tbnh=147&tbnw=133&ei=kvz1TfSQE4r1gAeVz5ivDQ&prev=/search%3Fq%3Dodin%2Bfrom%2Bff13%2Bin%2Bhorse%2Bmode%26um%3D1%26hl%3Den%26safe%3Dactive%26biw%3D1152%26bih%3D667%26tbm%3Disch&um=1&itbs=1&iact=hc&vpx=328&vpy=250&dur=370&hovh=147&hovw=133&tx=129&ty=109&page=2&ndsp=15&ved=1t:429,r:6,s:15&biw=1152&bih=667 (not mine) and when in gun mode the horse can shoot its own blast or magnify hers. she can only control it for a minute
Personality: She is a very kind person and loves to help although she isnt sure if she should because she has low confidence, that's why she believe she can only control her bankai for a minute. She often depends her higher ranked leaders, and use their confidence to fill in for hers.
Apperance: normal shinagami robe with a purple scarf. has long black hair, and purple black eyes. about 5'5 and looks like she is 18.
Handy Facts: she doesn't usually drink because she gets drunk from the first cup but, if she does she loosens up and switches like her weapon,ironic! and with the bankai it switches from sword mode to horse mode when she switches from sword mode to gun mode.
Author's Response: Well, even though I don't think Bankai would be appropriate in the beginning... don't think its impossible. ;)
Name: masterd1 (Signed) · Date: 13/06/11 - 04:56 am · For: Prologue
yup you got it right
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 12/06/11 - 07:16 pm · For: Join up!
Name: Zakaru Noshiro
Gender: Male
Age: 238 (looks like 24)
Squad: 13
Position: Captain
Zanpakuto name: Hisan Ken (wind type)
Shikai call: Howl into the sky, Hisan Ken!
Shikai appearance: (disclaimer: doesn't belong to me)
http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs13/i/2007/009/4/3/Double_Bladed_Sword_by_Lockencopp.jpg
Shikai ability: Zakaru can make it split into two different blades. With a simply swing he can make tornadoes form.
Bankai: The second part of the sword disappears, forming wings on his back. The other sword becomes wings while the other one looks like the one in the link below.
(disclaimer: not mine)
http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs40/i/2009/038/9/a/The_sword_of_Abyss_by_Firedragon1993.jpg
Personality: He's got a kind heart and always tries to make people see the hope in hopeless times. Most of the time he holds back in fights. When he protects his friends, he can fight like a lunatic, though.
Appearance: Standard captain uniform. He had slightly long spiky bluish black hair, sapphire eyes, and pale skin.
I wrote this in a hurry, so sorry if there's any mistakes.
Author's Response: Nothing needs changing here. *thumbs up*
Name: masterd1 (Signed) · Date: 12/06/11 - 06:59 pm · For: Prologue
so i dont kow where the rest went but if it doesnt appear i the morning ill type the rest for the third leuitenant
Author's Response: Okay, I was wondering where the rest went
Name: masterd1 (Signed) · Date: 12/06/11 - 06:56 pm · For: Prologue
Name: Loari Izukishima
Gender: Female
Age: 197
Squad: Third
Position:Lieutenant
Zanpakuto: Odin (lighting type)
Shikai Call:Slash and burst, Odin!
Shikai Apperance: http://images.wikia.com/finalfantasy/images/3/3f/FF13Blazefire_Saber.jpg
Name: masterd1 (Signed) · Date: 12/06/11 - 06:25 pm · For: Prologue
Name:Luxian Tsukima
Gender: Male
Age: 245 years old
Squad:Third
Position:Captain
Zanpakuto: Gosuto (spiritual type)
Shikai call: Dream, Gosuto!
Shikai Apperance: Circle blade with opening in the middle, it has a cross of bars in the middle so that it can be held from the inside,the circle is turqoise
Shikai Ability: By hitting you atleast once with Gosuto, your mind becomes traped in a wolrd that can be changed accourding to Luxian. The more he hits you the stronger the dream, and willpower can break you out of the dream
Bankai: Dream, Gosuto Okoku! The circle blasdes multiplies now having 7 circle blades all connected by a grey spiked chain. The dream now gets stronger and if you hit the person with all seven circle blades, his mind becomes permanetly trapped(only luxian can break it.) his eyes can turn turqoise in bankai form and if he locks eyes with your mind will be trapped but using the eyes drains his reiatsuso he only uses it in dire situations.
Personality: smart since his shikai ability is more passive, he thinks of situations to better himself seing as if his blade doesn't hit, no dreams! He loves girls and his judgement can be clouded if faced by a pretty girl, but he is a pretty good flirt. His priorities from most important to least are his team-his mission-girls-sleeping
Apperance: standard shinogami uniform with captain robe, light brown skin, with greyish hair, his eyes are black(turns them turqoise if wishes in bankai mode) turqoise sandals, and he looks like he is 23.
Handy Facts:loves girls, doesnt drink or smoke, was a breakdancer when he was alive, when he wasnt dancing he was dreaming about girls.
I hiope i gave enough info :]
Author's Response: Ohhh... a new reviewer! Nice character. Correct me if I'm wrong. His Shikai causes illusions/dreams when he is hit, and his bankai multiplies the blades to 7 and gives his eyes a genjutsu type thing, correct?rnrnGreat character!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 12/06/11 - 04:08 pm · For: Chapter 3: Soul Society
???? That last ones got me asking questions. I want to know what the message is! I can't wait to read more. It's wonderful so far. I love it. Please write more soon!
Author's Response: I hope to. ;)
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 12/06/11 - 02:42 pm · For: Join up!
Yeah, I'll make another one just for kicks.
Name: Kyoshi Matsuda
Gender: Female
Age: 181 looks 19-ish
Squad: 12
Position: Captain
Zanpakuto name: Ryuusei
Shikai call: Aim true, Ryuusei!
Shikai appearance: The actual zanpakuto is the bow (in archery), and it can pretty much shoot anything. Tsubame always has a stash of arrows, though. The bow is black with prints of red dragons lining it.
Shikai ability: When an arrow (or anything really) is shot from the bow, an energy of fire engulfs it, creating a flaming bullet.
Bankai: none
Personality: Very cautious of people. She is not very trusting, especially since she lost her eyesight in battle. In a normal and calm scene, she is very timid and shy. But in the heat of the battle, she is in her element, determined and focused.
Appearance: Standard Shinigami uniform. She is blind. Her eyes are pale blue, and she has deep brown hair that hangs in loose curls down to her shoulders.
Handy facts: Since she is blind, her other senses are amazingly enhanced.
How is this? Tell me if I must change something.
Author's Response: Actually its really good and creative! A captain without Bankai but has a Shikai- I would've never even thought of that!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 12/06/11 - 02:16 pm · For: Join up!
Just because I love making characters, I'll give you another one ;D
Name: Arashi Mayonaka
Gender: Male
Age: 254 looks 24-ish
Squad: 11
Position: Captain
Zanpakuto name: Hakuran (storm type)
Shikai call: Strike from the heavens, Hakuran!
Shikai appearance: A sword with a golden hilt. The blade is black with a white zig-zag pattern running down its length from the point to the hilt.
Shikai ability: It has the ability to control weather-type energies. The sword can control the intensity of a storm. Depending on the type of weather/storm, the pattern changes different colors.
Blue = Rain, Red = Sunny, Gray = Dark Clouds, Gold = Lightning
The sword can also focus the weather/storm on one specific area; this is helpful during battle.
Bankai: The sword can generate the storm energies, such as conducting lightning or water to use against the enemy.
Personality: Unpredictable. He's smart, so he can seem mature most of the time. But suddenly, he can be very angry or hot-tempered. He can be on edge sometimes, even if he doesn't look it at times, so people seem to think he is unpredictable and unstable in personality.
Appearance: Standard Shinigami uniform with the sleeves torn off, showing off his lean and muscular form. He has black and white spiky hair. His eyes are deep blue, and he has tan skin.
Handy facts: He can get annoyed and bored really easily, which is a bad thing if he is involved in a really long battle.
Is it good? Need some more characters? I'm happy to help!
Author's Response: Nice! Yes, I need a lot more characters! Like, 15 more.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 11/06/11 - 09:25 pm · For: Chapter 3: Soul Society
Yay! I was so excited to see an update. Things just got a whole lot more interesting now that Sasuke has met some of the captains. Heehee, and two of my characters were already introduced. Good job with their personalities so far, by the way. Everyone seems pretty close to their personality. I am so excited to read more of this! I really am enjoying this, keep up the great work with this! I look forward to seeing what happens next!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 10/06/11 - 05:17 am · For: Join up!
Hmm, so I noticed that your little brother named his character 'Akira', and even though he's a boy, it's the same name as my first character. So I'll change her name to Hanabira Suzuki, if that's okay.
Now, another character! I love making characters, haha!
Name: Aoi Ikazuchi
Gender: Male
Age: 217, looks 22-ish
Squad: 5th
Position: Lieutenant
Zanpakuto name: Kamizuki
Shikai call: Rain with lightning, Kamizuki!
Shikai appearance: An average-sized dagger with a black hilt with a golden lightning emblem on it.
Shikai ability: The blade conducts electricity, creating lightning
Bankai: The dagger can change into a large sword (it looks the same, just bigger). It gains the ability the create thunderstorms and he can control the lightning in the sky.
Personality: Likes to have fun and does whatever he can to get out of any type of wor, whether it be paperwork or dealing with his team. But he likes having fun in battle, and he often doesn't take fighting seriously until he realizes that it is a worthy opponent.
Appearance: Standard Shinigami uniform, but it is cut open to reveal his muscles. His hair is dark blue, and his eyes are gold.
Handy facts: When he is dealing with his team and comrades, he often gives off the impression that he doesn't care and that he'd rather be doing something more fun. But he will glady lay his life on the line to save any of his comrades.
As always, tell me if there is something missing or if I need to change anything!
Author's Response: Sorry about that, I could've changed his name though...rnrnNice character! Its a really good match for Kin Ko's personality (5th's captain).
Name: lil flea (Signed) · Date: 09/06/11 - 06:06 pm · For: Prologue
Hi, this is flea's little brother with a character for this story.
Name: Akira Tatzuhi
Gender: Male
Age: 242
Squad: 10
Postion: Lieutenant
Zanpakuto: Zakurami (Ice Type)
Shikai call: "Reopen, Zakurami!"
Shikai appearance: Goes from a katana to a straight, double-edged sword with a streak of ice running down the center. Shikai ability: By swinging it, shards of ice can come from the swords ice part.
Personality: Easily excitable and eager to do anything but hard work.
Appearance: Standard Uniform, blond eyebrow length hair, blue eyes.
Handy facts: Wants Bankai and a captain's position more than anything.
Author's Response: Okie dokie!rnrnAll I need now is:rnBoth squad 3 positionsrnBoth squad 4 positionsrnSquad 5 LieutenantrnBoth Squad 6 positionsrnSquad 7 captainrnBoth squad 8 positionsrnBoth Squad 9 positionsrnSquad 11 captainrnBoth squad 12rnBoth Squad 13rnrnRemember, anyone can make as many characters as they want!
Name: CrimsonFighter3 (Signed) · Date: 09/06/11 - 03:53 pm · For: Prologue
We can make more Characters? this is so awesome
Name: Kin Ko
Gender: Male
Age: 200 looks like he is about 28-ish
Squad: 5th
Position: Captain
Zanpakuto name: Hachiman
Shikai call: Show them the fruits of war, Hachiman!
Shikai appearance: Long Double Egded Black Sword, and Black gloves
Shikai ability: He can make his sword destroy nearly anything that it is swung against(as long as there is some force behind it)(and I figured that if it could just break anything that it would be unfair), thats why he has those gloves, he sword is pure destruction
Bankai: The Blade now has a white engraving in the middle of it, and the gloves are now white. anything that he thinks of he can now create by channeling energy (totally forgot how to spell that word that begins with an R) and it appears in his glove(so he has the powers of destruction and creation
Personality: Lazy when it comes to commanding his officers, seems strict at times but when it comes to a fight he is the first one in. He enjoys fighting more then anything else, he has never left a single officer behind on the battlefield.
Appearance: regular captain outfit execpt for the fact that his captians robe is ripped in the front and is mostly flowing in the wind. Spiky hair in the front, straight hair once you reach his neck, his hair is about shoulder length. Black Eyes, White Hair
Handy facts: He is usually found relaxing at his desk daydreaming, loves to fight but doesn't pick meangliness ones. and he doesnt bother fighting weak people
Author's Response: Cool!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 09/06/11 - 12:12 pm · For: Join up!
Hmm, for my previous character, I forgot to say that she looks about 17-ish.
Okay, next character, yay! These are so much fun, haha!
Name: Akemi Mitsuko
Gender: Female
Age: 172, looks 20-ish
Squad: 7th
Position: Lieutenant
Zanpakuto name: Kawashi
Shikai call: Drown your enemies, Kawashi!
Shikai appearance: Two white fabric-made fans with blue designs of waves drawn on them.
Shikai ability: The fans have the ability to control water in bodies of water as well as draw water from the air and earth.
Bankai: The fabric hardens into metal, also giving the water the ability to turn into ice.
Personality: Very strict. She takes things very seriously, and often scares her team into doing their jobs. So just imagine what she's like on the battlefield.... Horrifying.
Appearance: Standard Shinigami uniform, long straight black hair that reaches down to her butt. She has black eyes, giving her an even scarier look. She rarely ever smiles, but when she does, it's usually in a battle.
Handy facts: She loves a good battle. The more challenging and difficult it seems, the more fun she has.
Just tell me if there is something that needs changing.
Author's Response: Nothing to change here. *Thumbs up*rnrnFeel free to make as many as you like.
Name: CrimsonFighter3 (Signed) · Date: 09/06/11 - 09:16 am · For: Join up!
Name: Jet Kaze
Gender: Male
Age: 169 Looks like he is 22
Squad: 10th
Position: Captain
Zanpakuto name: Kikai
Shikai call: Evolve, Kekai
Shikai appearance: His left Arm is covered by metal, with a retacble blade
Shikai ability:His blade becomes with him, it increases all of his senses, making him extremly sharp
Bankai: His entire body is covered in metal (like full body armored cyborg type thing, execpt it isnt fused with his skin, it can be broken off) blades come out of his feet,knees, elbows, and both hands,(they come out when he wants them, just like his shikai)
Personality: Calm, likes to have fun, and tries to keep his subordinates happy, tends to try to avoid the paper work of being a captain. When fighting he is a calm collected fighter,and he always follows heart
Appearance: Standard Shinigami Captain uniform, he wears his outfit a little loose so you can see a little bit of his chest covered by bandages. Red Spiky hair,not super spiky, and his hair reaches his shoulders
Handy facts: He knows how to use some kiddo, and he failed his shinigami entrance exam the first time because he slept through it
I hope I didnt add too much uneeded information
Author's Response: No, its all good.rnrnThanks for another character!
Name: CrimsonFighter3 (Signed) · Date: 08/06/11 - 06:39 pm · For: Chapter 2: Knowledge and Itachi
Now the Vasto Lorde knows how Jiraiya felt training/rasing naruto, jeesh I cant wait to see what kind of hallow abilites naruto gets. And I love that whole Itachi part(even though I am not a fan of the Uchihas in any way) wasnt too long or short, and was amazingly true to the characters, I cant wait to keep reading
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Feel free to make another character. And that goes to all my reviewers who are reading this!