Reviews For The Perfect two.
Name: nightninja (Signed) · Date: 14/11/20 - 07:54 am · For: Chapter 1- Lights
saskue is hott
Name: Kristie (Anonymous) · Date: 06/08/11 - 01:50 pm · For: Chapter 4- Buddy Press.
I love this series, it's the only interesting SasuSaku fan-fiction I can find on this web site! Keep writing please, do me a favor! ASAP!! :D *in love*
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 03/06/11 - 07:29 am · For: Chapter 3- Plan by plan...and pigs.
First off, the way to spell his name is Orochimaru. Just thought you would like to know.
Anyways, this was a pretty interesting chapter. More and more is being revealed about Sakura's past, which is good. And Sasuke and Sakura are completely at each other's throats, adding to the intensity of their relationship. Definitely cannot wait for more. I really hope you give the next chapter some more detail. This one was better in terms of humor and creativity. Just be sure to add more description. There really is no need to rush.
But this was good. Nice job on it. Can't wait to see what you come up with next. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thanks (:rnThe spell checker kind of corrected it =.=' - Thanks thought Ill be sure to correct it :PrnI will, thanks for you support I wont rush this chapter, since I have finals and all.rn
Name: Cool Gal (Anonymous) · Date: 25/05/11 - 12:03 am · For: Chapter 2 - Just more.
The story is really nice. I just can't wait until the next update.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 24/05/11 - 07:17 pm · For: Chapter 2 - Just more.
Hmm, yeah this was a little rushed. At least you know that, that way you can make the next one better. Just be sure to keep Sasuke in character, he seems kind of OOC. He is a difficult character to pinpoint, but just be sure to make him serious and mysterious.
I do like what you are trying to do with this story. The plot is really good, and the events seem really realistic for a story such as this. I hope to see some improvement in the next chapter, keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thanks (:rnI am gonna be SURE to take my time on the next chapter - I kinda realized he was OOC.rnI will of course try to keep him in character :xrn- got the initial idea of Sasuke characteristically, ect. rnSo im gonna be sure to keep him in character :}
Name: Dawnxweforever (Anonymous) · Date: 22/05/11 - 10:20 pm · For: Chapter 1- Lights
Hey gem! When I heard you wrote a fanfic I had to see it, well this is pretty good for your first- I must agree with silverwolf's review though, slow down and describe the feelings the goings on! But I really love the idea , glad you could finally think of one :) overall, I cant wait to see where this fanfic goes.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 22/05/11 - 01:10 pm · For: Chapter 1- Lights
Hmm, not bad. Your first fanfiction, right? Yeah, not bad.
I like the idea of this. The fact that Sasuke wants to hire Sakura as his pretend girlfriend is really original and very creative, considering she seemed to not be interested. I like what the plot appears to be, it seems really intriguing.
I will say that I think it was only a tad rushed. You could use some more elaboration on Sakura's feelings and Sasuke's plan. Some of it seemed a little random, like it sprung out of nowhere. Just be sure to include more descriptions on emotions, feelings, and insight, and you'll be good.
Anyways, this was a really good start. I look forward to seeing where you take this. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thanks, and for the constructive critism, - I was actually planning on adding the plans in the next chapter- Im gonna be sure to slow down :)rnthank you once again.