Reviews For Rekindle the Lost Flame
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 22/05/11 - 01:14 pm · For: Will You Join This Story?
Two things: One, I may be deleting Never Too Late because I can't get back into it, so I may or may not have Sasaui go there. You don't have to answer this if you don't want to, but what else would be good. Two, me and my sister (Krina) were wondering if we could do a story like this where people send in ideas. I'd feel rude if I didn't ask, so I'm going to.
Author's Response: Hmm, well that's upsetting to hear, I liked Never Too Late. Oh well, you're the author, and if you lose interest, then there is no point in writing it anymore. Okay, so I think Sasaui should visit your story, Cursed Saint. Sasaui is friends with Naruto in her story, and Ryu was pretty good friends with Naruto in is story, so there's one controversy that Sasaui would have to deal with. Also, it would be really cool if their Sasaui's and Ryu's powers clashed or something. Yeah, Sasaui just seems to be the kind of person who would be sent to another dimension. How's that sound? And of course you and your sister can do a story like this, where people submit ideas. cvhoneybee already posted one super quickly after submitting a character for this story, so I would feel honored if other writers use the idea. I feel so flattered for inspiring this idea in other people! But you're very polite for asking, so of course I will say yes ;D Good luck with your stories!
Name: krina (Signed) · Date: 22/05/11 - 12:10 pm · For: Will You Join This Story?
Name: Riku Hyuuga
Gender: Male
Animal Partner: None
Ancestor: Hinata Hyuuga
Village: Leaf
Age: 16
Personality: He's the rebellion type. His mom, who everyone thought was crazy, said he couldn't belief their lies. He acts like he does because of how everyone bad mouths his mom. The only person who doesn't (and Sasaui said this was okay) is Kohana, one of his only friends. He loves to be the center of attention just because he usually annoys people while being in the spotlight. When you get to know him, though, you can see the pain within him from both being alone and his mother's death. Another thing is he gets distracted easily. He can be telling you the most important thing in the world and then he's like "Hey, there's a fly!" when nobody can see it it's so far away. Because of this he tends to notice little things, which can be both good and bad.
Appearance: He has spiky blond hair, Hyuuga eyes, and usually wears a black shirt with one long sleeve and one sleeve cut off, black pants with green lines, and black shoes. Yeah, his clothes contrast with his hair.....
Unlocked Kekkei Genkai: Byakugan
Unlocked Special Abilites: Good at Eight Trigram Jutsu, and he also knows some water type ninjutsu, but only knows a couple techniques.
Romance: (Sasaui also said this was okay) Kohana Sarutobi.
Let me know if there's any problems I need to fix!
Author's Response: Oh my gosh, that's so cool that you're making your character friends with Sasaui's. Very creative, and here I thought I would have to make every single character strangers to one another. This adds a whole new perspective to these two characters, very nice. And your character seems really cool. Can't wait to write about him! Thanks so much for joining!
Name: enchanted_ninja_girl (Signed) · Date: 22/05/11 - 11:44 am · For: Will You Join This Story?
I know my stories aren't up anymore, but I'm so busy I can never write them, so I'm just gonna stick to reading and writing one shots =) I'm sorry.
Anyways I can't wait to see how my character is in the story!
Author's Response: *cries slightly* Aw, I'm so sad that your stories are no longer around. But it's completely understandable. Life is just completely busy anymore. Anyways, I hope I do your character justice in the story!
Name: enchanted_ninja_girl (Signed) · Date: 22/05/11 - 08:31 am · For: Will You Join This Story?
I like the story idea, so I shall create an OC for it =)
Name: Yuna Nara
Gender: Female
Animal Partner: White Stag (rideable too =D haha)
Ancestor: Shikamaru Nara
Village: The Leaf
Age: 16
Personality: Yuna is creative, but very laid back. She has a wild imagination. Charming, sweet, fun-loving, sarcastic.
Appearance: Yuna is a petite girl that wears a mini green a black kimono and has chocolate brown hair that goes just past her mid back, her eyes are a rich hazel color, and she has lightly tanned skin.
Kekkei Genkai: Shadow Manipulation
Special Abilities: she's pretty savvy with archery
Author's Response: Whoo, Shikamaru's descendant! Yay, thank you a lot for joining. And she seems like a really interesting character, so I can't wait to write about her. Cool! Oh, and on a different matter, what happened to your stories? Did you delete them? I was so upset to see them all gone! But yeah, anyways, thanks a bunch for joining! You're awesome!
Name: cvhoneybee (Signed) · Date: 21/05/11 - 09:52 pm · For: Will You Join This Story?
I have decided to try out a story like this too and I would really love to be a part of yours so here it goes! =)
Name: Kaoru Shoten
Gender: Female
Animal Partner: none
Ancestor: Gaara
Village: Sand
Age: 16
Personality: Kaoru is one of those people who goes to the beat of their own drum. She has a very neutral view on things. Kaoru is a girl who is neither against nor with a certain affiliation, she kinda does her own thing.
Appearance: She has long blonde hair that is tied into a high ponytail onto her had with side swept bangs. She has a few random braided strands along with beading. Her eyes are a grassy green color and she has fair skin. She normally wears boots, a black tank top with a cammo green vest, a skirt with black shorts, gloves, and a long colorful scarf.
Kekkei Genkai: Wind Release
Special Abilities: Genjutsu is her strongest asset
Weakness: Kaoru always seems to meddle her way into things, which usually leads her into very dangerous situations and she tends to provoke people.
Author's Response: Oh, yay! And wow, I look forward to reading your joint story. I call first dibbs on joining! And very creative, Gaara's descendant, huh? Okay, cool. Nice character, I look forward to writing about her. Thanks a bunch for joining!
Name: MidnightStar (Signed) · Date: 18/05/11 - 09:43 pm · For: Will You Join This Story?
Name: Amaya Watanabe
Gender: Female
Animal Partner: none
Ancestor: Yuki clan (Haku's clan)
Village: Kirigakure no Sato
Age: 16
Personality: She is very independent and doesn't like to listen to others. She always speaks her mind and makes many sarcastic comments. Although she is usually very immature she can me mature when it is absolutely vital, and is very good at thinking on her feet.
Appearance: Unevenly cut black hair that barely reaches her shoulders, and pale blue eyes that stand out against her tanned skin. She is pretty, but not beautiful, and doesn't care about what she looks like. She usually wears all black.
Unlocked Kekkei Genkai: Hyouton Creation
Unlocked Special Abilities:none
Author's Response: Oh, Haku's clan huh? Okay, I'll take it. I can't guarantee that she will be Haku's direct descendant, since he was so young when he died. But yeah, Amaya is from his clan, so nice idea. She seems like a fun character to write about, so thanks for joining!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 18/05/11 - 07:56 pm · For: Will You Join This Story?
Name: Kohana Sarutobi
Gender: Female
Animal partner: If she needs one, I'm going to go with a white wolf named Shiro.
Ancestor: Asuma and Kurenai
Village: Leaf
Age: 15 or 16. You choose which would work best.
Personality: She's the type of person who tries to cheer everyone up when things look bad. She tries to hide her pain from others in fear of upsetting them, no matter how painful the fact is (would you consider that a flaw?). When she does have something locked inside, she usually isolates herself. If I can think of anything else, I'll tell you. If not, have fun with her and add to her personality as much as you want.
Appearance: Bluish black hair held up with a bright blue ribbon given to her from her mother, crimson eyes, and pale skin. (optional ->) She has a scar from her back to her shoulder from defending a person from a falling piece of glass. She wears a red shirt, pink armbands, and black capris.
Unlocked Kekkei Genkai: Blood Demon: yeah, she gets a little crazy when covered in blood. It unlocks a warrior instinct that's a rare ability from her mother's clan (you can figure out the clan name). When she learns how to control it, though, it's quite useful. It boosts ones chakra, speed, and strength.
Unlocked Special Abilities: She can use some really strong flower and fire related jutsus if that counts.
Oh, and something unrelated, could you read my challenge a meeting of ocs. Then you'll understand my question: Who should go to whose (or would it be who's?) universe.
Author's Response: Ah! Sarutobi, nice thinking! Yeah, your character can have a white wolf. I love wolves, so they are all welcome! Concealing pain from others is a definite flaw, so nice thinking on that one. Nice kekkei genkai, sounds very interesting and original. I love it! Oh, and I am on my way to check out your challenge. *looks at challenge* Oh, it sounds very cool. I might have to attempt that for myself one of these days. Now, for your question, are you asking about for your own OCs and who should go where? If you are, I say Sasaui should go into your story, Never Too Late. My reason: Sasaui is Sasuke's twin, so it would be really cool if she ended up in a universe where Sasuke has no idea who she is and he happens to be falling in love with a girl she doesn't know nor possibly like. I hope that helps. Anyways, thanks a lot for joining! I can't wait to write this story!
Name: Fantasy Madeline (Signed) · Date: 18/05/11 - 04:53 pm · For: Will You Join This Story?
funfact: My name means Raven Pain Death. (my middle name is Itami)
Author's Response: Very cool name, by the way :D
Name: Fantasy Madeline (Signed) · Date: 18/05/11 - 04:50 pm · For: Will You Join This Story?
Name (first, last): Karasu Shi
Gender: Female
Animal Partner: a very deadly snake named Salyzar
Ancestor: Orochimaru
Village: Sound
Age: 14
Personality: Cold, mean, sadistic, cruel, evil, cynical, barbaric.
Appearance: Skinny. Long black hair. Dark blue pants, cream colored shirt. Modeled around what shippuden Sasuke wore, only in female form. She has a tattoo of black roses, that stretches around her arms, making large black dots in her palms. Later used to focus chakra.
Unlocked Kekkei Genkai: Curse Mark (not a kekkai genkai, but close enough)
Unlocked Special Abilities: Fantastic genjutsu user. She specializes in torture and investigations, being able to torture people in their own minds, sort of like tsuklimomi.
Romance: doesn't matter to me
Weakness: Is bad at hand to hand. Is a good senbon needle user, and uses medical ninjutsu to fight, like kabuto did. Bad at martial art part of taijutsu, and not the best at elemental jutsu, except for lightning type.
Author's Response: Oh, Orochimaru, huh? I thought you would go for your classic 'Kakashi-Anko child' Nice to see you're mixing it up a little. It adds more depth to this story, I can see it already XD Okay, Karasu Itami Shi, aka Raven Pain Death, is officially in the story. Nice character bio, I like it! Thanks for joining the story!
Name: Konan (Signed) · Date: 18/05/11 - 04:03 pm · For: Will You Join This Story?
Name (first, last): Shin Miyazaki
Gender: Male
Animal Partner: None
Ancestor: None
Village: Hidden Rain
Age: 17
Personality: He's fun and outgoing most of the time. He's super protective of his comrades and hotheaded. When he's mad, he gives people the cold shoulder. He falls asleep in class, but is good at taijutsu.
Appearance: He has brown, wavyish hair (Like Uchiha Shisui's sort of). He wears black wristbands. He has a dark gray shirt with a short collar(like the 4th's). The sleeves come to his elbows. He wears white capris.
Unlocked Kekkei Genkai: He has an eye ability. His eyes are usually dark black, but become blue with two black, dashed circles outlining his pupils and around his pupil. They let him put the victim under a genjutsu of their greatest fear. He cannot see their fear nor the genjutsu itself, only the victim's reaction. (Although in this story everything is peaceful...)
Unlocked Special Abilities: He excels at taijutsu and sometimes uses water type jutsu.
Weakness: His eyes use a lot of chakra, so he rarely uses it.
This is one of my OCs from a story I formed in my head, haha. Sounds fun!
Author's Response: Oh, very cool. Thanks for the nice description, it makes things easier. And wow, an OC for a story in your head? I hope my portrayal of your character will live up to the story you made up. I would be devastated if I made him not as cool as in your story. Anyways, thanks so much for joining!
Name: fleamichael (Signed) · Date: 18/05/11 - 03:49 pm · For: Will You Join This Story?
This is really cool! A good idea to!
Name (first, last): Yuu Terumi
Gender: Male
Animal Partner:None
Ancestor: Mei Terumi
Village: Mist
Age: 15
Personality: Generally calm, but when sugar hits his blood stream...
He also thinks alot, and is probably the least likely to attack first. He is easily annoyed by anything that isn't to his liking.
Appearance: Average build and height, Eyebrow-length dark brown hair, black tank top and baggy blue pants. He has a tatoo of waves that circle around his upper left arm (like an armband, but its a tatoo.
Unlocked Kekkei Genkai: Lava Release (Boil release optional)
Unlocked Special Abilities: Good with a sword
Romance: doesn't matter to me
This sounds really interesting. Can't wait to read it!
Author's Response: Yes! Nice character. And kudos for you for being the first reviewer. You are in the story, congratulations! Your character sounds interesting, I can't wait to write about him. Thanks so much for joining!