Reviews For Rekindle the Lost Flame
Name: cvhoneybee (Signed) · Date: 12/06/11 - 09:48 am · For: Blossom Into What You Were Meant to Be
AH! Great job, but you're making me anxious for my character.
Poor Riku those people were such jerks to him!
And the end was intense!
Author's Response: Haha, thank you so much! And no worries about your character, she's coming up next! Yeah, Riku leads a tough life, I'm glad I got that part right. And I'm glad you thought the ending was intense; just as I had planned it ;D Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I'll try to get the next chapter out asap so you can see your character!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 12/06/11 - 09:33 am · For: Blossom Into What You Were Meant to Be
Wow..... wow.... Sorry, for a second there, that was the only word I could think of. It's so hard to find words to even begin to describe you awesomeness. I can't wait to read more of it. You did perfectly on all the ocs, and I absolutely loved Kohana. I don't think I could have written her better myself. Since I'm not sure Krina will bother getting on (she rarely gets on) Riku was awesome as well.
Author's Response: It's okay, 'wow' is usually the only word I can come up with when I read stories *coughyourstoriescough* I'm always really flattered when you call me awesome. Thank you so much! I'm so relieved to hear that you liked Kohana. I'm always nervous about introducing the characters. And since you are Krina's sister, I will gratefully accept your comment on Riku. Thank you for enjoying my portrayal of the characters. Thank you so much for reading and thanks even more for reviewing! You are the awesome one, Sasaui!
Name: Konan (Signed) · Date: 11/06/11 - 09:40 pm · For: Blossom Into What You Were Meant to Be
Wow, I'm surprised you updated so late at night... it's late here anyway. I just returned from a college forum trip today, exhausted and I was just about to go to sleep when I saw your update.
Awesome job, I'm glad I read this. Eternal Youth Jutsu? Cool! Riku's byakugan sort of activating was pretty awesome. Anyway, I hope you continue to update soon!
Author's Response: Yup, it was about 12:30 at night when I updated, but that's early for me, considering that last couple chapters were posted at 2 in the morning. Haha, I'm happy you read this too! I'm glad you liked the jutsu I made up. I personally think the name is a little cheesy but I couldn't think of anything else. Riku's Byakugan activating was really fun for me to write, just because of all the anger he was feeling. I'm really flattered you stayed up so late to read this, thank you so much! Thanks a lot for reading and thanks even more for reviewing! You're an awesome fan!
Name: Konan (Signed) · Date: 06/06/11 - 02:16 pm · For: Time to Embark on Destiny's Journey
It. is. so. amazing!! I loved it!!! I loved how you portrayed my character! Perfection. That's the only word that fits. I'm soo excited for the next chapter!!! :D
I'm so sorry I haven't been reading any stories lately. I've been kinda busy, but since school's out, I've had more chances to read and this chapter was totally worth it.
Author's Response: Oh gosh. I was worried when you didn't review, honestly. I thought I had written your character wrong. Phew, I'm glad liked it. Perfection? Wow, I can say that I've never thought any of my work was perfection, but I'm glad you think so. And what the heck, why is everyone finished with school already?! Gah, I still have two more weeks! Ridiculous I say, ridiculous! Anyways, I'm glad you really enjoyed this! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I hope you continue to enjoy!
Name: Starless__Night (Signed) · Date: 05/06/11 - 03:13 pm · For: Will You Join This Story?
yeah, he's a villian
Author's Response: Cool, thanks a lot! And thanks again for joining, you rock! I hope I can do him justice when I include him.
Name: Starless__Night (Signed) · Date: 05/06/11 - 02:51 pm · For: Will You Join This Story?
Name: Yoru Saito
Gender: Male
Animal Partner: A three headed demon dog named Cerberus (I'm a Greek geek)
Ancestor: not the descendant but from the same clan as Kimimaro.
Village: Waterfall
Age: 18
Personality: He's calm no matter what the situation. Sometime his calmness annoys people, though. He enjoys being in quiet places, and he rarely talks. He can be a really good friend to have, though, and will protect your back even if he wants to slit your throat.
Appearance: Disclaimer: pic doesn't belong to me!
Link: http://media.otakuzone.com/store/user/187497/T1302921399741c568f74adff8964e101034e2c326728.jpg
He also has a red tear drop tattoo under his left eye.
Unlocked Kekkei Genkai: the bone kekkei genkai
Unlocked Special Abilities: He can fracture ones entire bone with a simply touch if he adds chakra to it.
Author's Response: Oh, another character, eh? Cool! He seems really interesting, thanks for joining! I can't wait to write about him. Hmm, he is a bad guy, right? Because all of the hero positions have been taken, but I'm still accepting villains if he is one. I'm just confirming.
Name: Star of the Sky (Signed) · Date: 05/06/11 - 06:02 am · For: Will You Join This Story?
>=) Bad guy, huh? Well, one bad guy coming up!
Name: Rin Takahashi
Gender: Female
Animal Partner: None
Ancestor: Kabuto
Village: Sound
Age: 17
Personality: She's empathetic about a lot of things. The only time you see real emotion on her is when she's killing, and that's joy. Yeah, I know, now right, but that's how she is. She can fake acting to care though. One second she'll act like the best friend you ever had, the next you have a dagger though your heart.
Appearance: She has inky black hair, cold red eyes, and tan skin. Most of her looks are from her father's side of the family, who wasn't a descendant of Kabuto. She wears a dark blue hoodie that stops a little below her chest, black pants, and combat boots.
Background (it doesn't ask for it, but I want to give it): She grew up with parents who couldn't care less about her. She locked all of her emotions away when they were killed by some freak boating accident. Then some desperate people tried to kill her for money since her parents had been rich, and she made her first kill. It was then she realize that killing let all of her emotions come out without hurting her. So she continued, taking out all her pain on the people she hated. And enjoying every second of it.
Unlocked Kekkei Genkai: Blood chakra nature
Unlocked special abilities: Whatever blood jutsus you can come up with.
Oh, and I was wondering, can she have a fight with Sasaui's character. I want her to fight my friend.
Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad you still joined this story. And wow, what an awesome villain! She sounds really cool! You put a lot of detail into her, which helps a lot, thanks. I only hope I can do her justice. And I was planning some of the battles, but since you have a request, I will fulfill it. I don't know when it will be, but it will happen, I promise. Thanks again for joining this story, you're awesome!
Name: shadow4000 (Anonymous) · Date: 04/06/11 - 05:58 am · For: Will You Join This Story?
Villain
name: Kazuki Uchiha
petname: Kaz
gender: male
animal: Ushiro: a small cat which wen fir
ed up....... turns into a ferocious Tiger
Ancestor: Madara Uchiha's Son
village: leaf or whereva madara is.....
age: 17
personality: Happy-go-lucky attitude... slightly perv..... digs on chicks
trying to prove his worth to his Uchiha dad.....
appearance: cool, handsome, black hair, until the sharingan is used.......
wears black clothes...
abilities: similar to that of madara's.....
n bout the story..u r an awesome writer!! :D
Author's Response: Hmm, so I saw the word 'Anonymous', and I instantly went into depressed mode, since I had placed a rule about no anonymous participants. But you're lucky I saw that you had joined the site. I did happen to see your name the day you joined, so I will let you join. Just next time, be sure to use your actual account and not the anonymous method of reviewing, since its easier to communicate with people through their accounts. And about your character, awesome! I already have Madara's daughter in this story, so your character will have to be related to her, I suppose. If you have a problem with that, tell me. I can't wait to write about your character, and thanks for being a villain (since I kind of need them >_<). Can't wait to write about Kazuki! And aww, thanks for complimenting me on my writing, you rock! Thanks for taking interest in this story!
Name: krina (Signed) · Date: 02/06/11 - 01:29 pm · For: Prologue: It Begins
It's terrible. I'm the one asking when you'll write more, and I'm the last person to review. That's just plain bad on my part. Then again, Sasaui's been pretty busy typing the next chapter of our story. Anyway, this story is unbelievably awesome. I can't wait to read more, but I can't stay on long enough to read another chapter =(. I'll read more as soon as I can, though. I know it will be just as good as this one.
Author's Response: Oh gosh. I saw 'It's terrible' and nearly had a panic attack. And then I read the rest, and I just had to smile :) It's okay, don't sweat it. I appreciate that you cared that much when it came to reading the story. I was really slow, sorry. I'm glad you liked it anyway. And I really do hope the rest of this lives up to your expectations. I'm happy you enjoyed this! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Name: cvhoneybee (Signed) · Date: 01/06/11 - 07:33 am · For: Time to Embark on Destiny's Journey
That Karasu girl is a creepy one, but that adds some spark to the story I think. =)
Good chapter, it was smooth and interesting. Keep writing my dear.
Author's Response: Yeah, Karasu is definitely creepy. You can blame Fantasy Madeline for that, I just write the character ;D Nah, she was actually fun to write, so it's all good :D I'm glad you liked the chapter, I'm very happy now. Thank you for the support! Thanks for reading and reviewing, you're awesome!
Name: Fantasy Madeline (Signed) · Date: 29/05/11 - 08:37 am · For: Time to Embark on Destiny's Journey
Right now I am grinning. A) YOU UPDATED!!! And now, more importantly, B).
You did a great job on my character, and did her perfectly! The snake was perfect, and Karasu's attitude about killing is perfect. I love the hesitation of her own father, and you could actually feel the fear. It excites me to know who else she will scare. You did an awesome job on her, and by the way, love the flying pink fairies. =D
Author's Response: *fist pump* YES!!!! I did a good job! I was honestly terrified that I would mess Karasu up completely. I've never written a character like her, so I'm glad I got her right. I honestly had a good time writing about her, though. It was a challenge, and I'm glad you thought I succeeded. And, of course, everybody loves flying pink fairies. Who doesn't? ;D I'm very happy that you liked the way I wrote Karasu. Thanks a lot for reading and thank you even more for reviewing! You're awesome! And I'm glad you enjoyed this!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 29/05/11 - 06:11 am · For: Time to Embark on Destiny's Journey
Only one word I can think of...... No, actually there is no word to describe the extent of your awesomeness. I loved this chapter. And I understand why Shin would want to keep his distance from Karasu. She even scares me and she's just a story character. I feel bad for the bore and the fake little pink fairy. She probably slashed it to pieces.... Now I have to wonder how you'd do that. Okay, back on track. Please write more soon. I think I'd die without you coolness. Both you and cvhoneybee are so good at writing joint stories. Keep up the great work!!
Author's Response: Wow! My writing doesn't even have an adjective. I'm flattered about that. Yes, Karasu is a very scary person, I will admit that I was a bit afraid while writing about her, but it also sort of fun. Poor Shin. Hmm... how does one slash a fake flying pink fair to pieces?.... I'll try to update soon. I don't want you to die! Oh, and thanks for calling me cool, I'm so touched :D And you know, your joint story is excellent as well, so don't worry about it ;) Thank you so much for reading this, and I'm happy you enjoyed it! You're an awesome fan, you know that, right?
Name: cvhoneybee (Signed) · Date: 28/05/11 - 10:51 pm · For: Adventure Starts in the Mist Village
haha Ayame is funny, some teachers are just bitches lol. Great chapter!
Author's Response: Haha, yeah, I enjoyed that scene. Amaya was fun to write about, and Masuyo-sensei was just mean. Thanks for reading and enjoying, I'm glad you liked it! And thanks so much for reviewing, you're awesome!
Name: Konan (Signed) · Date: 28/05/11 - 07:40 pm · For: Adventure Starts in the Mist Village
It's great! Love the characters so far!! Awesome job!
I'm excited for when all the characters meet up!
Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad you like the characters so far. I, also, am excited for when all the characters meet up. But first, I have to introduce them all, so we'll see how the rest of the introductions go first. Thanks for the support by reading and reviewing! You're awesome!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 28/05/11 - 05:47 pm · For: Will You Join This Story?
Can I change kohana's animal into a white tiger with black stripes? I've been reading Tiger's Curse and it's got me wanting her to have a tiger. The name is still Shiro. Oh, and he has bright blue eyes.
Author's Response: Oh, sure. It's a good thing I didn't start writing about Shiro yet >_< Okay, a white tiger it is. I kind think that fits her better anyway, actually.
Name: cvhoneybee (Signed) · Date: 28/05/11 - 08:15 am · For: Prologue: It Begins
And tragedy strikes while it's barely the prologue, poor girl...My character can be her friend! Lol awesome work.
Author's Response: I know, but I mean, the prologue has to catch the readers' attention somehow, right? Hmm, oh my gosh, your character could totally be her friend ;D Haha, thanks for the support. I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for reading and reviewing, you're amazing!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 27/05/11 - 05:11 pm · For: Adventure Starts in the Mist Village
Ho-ly Crap. That was pure awesomeness. It was an awesome chapter. I can't wait to read more. After seeing how you introduce Yuu and Ayama, I can't wait to see you introduce Kohana. And thanks for the character. Just to clarify, does the demon take control of him and then kill the person or something else. Oh, and if you don't read review answers, hell isn't a bad word when used as a place like demon of hell (I think that's what it is).
Author's Response: Oh gosh, thank you for liking this so much! It's so great to get positive feedback so far. And don't worry about Kohana... seriously, don't. It'll make me nervous when I go to write about her >_< And no prob about Chishio, I'm glad to help. Actually, I'm quite pleased how he came out, considering I was actually writing about him on my boss's computer at work... eh, don't tell anyone I said that... Oh, for the Demon of Hell, think of it like this. It like a beast living inside his brain, lying dormant until it is called. And it is called only when the person confirms that he has a bond. The beast takes control of the brain, controlling the body, and killing those who are the loved ones. Chishio's parents died right away because they're, well you know, his family: automatic loved ones. You could probably consider the Demon of Hell as an inner demon, but it is actually a mental part of Chishio. I hope that makes sense and clears it up. And yeah, I read your review response, so I'm glad to hear that you chose the Demon of Hell, I liked that one better anyway. Speaking of your review response, yes, 'awesomely' is a word ;D Anyways, I'm glad to help, and thank you for reading and reviewing thus far. You rock!
Name: Fantasy Madeline (Signed) · Date: 27/05/11 - 04:11 pm · For: Will You Join This Story?
You did a great job with this, and I look forward to seeing how it plays out. So far, it looks like you are really doing personaalities well, and I can not wait for you to try my character's evil sadistic persona. This is great, and I prey to Jashin for a speedy update!
Author's Response: Oh, thank you very much! I am glad to hear that I am keeping close to the personalities given to me about the characters. I always feel nervous when writing about someone else's character. Oh, and hey, Fantasy Madeline, guess what? I'll let you in on a secret: Karasu is up next ;D I'm happy to hear that you like this, and I also pray to Jashin for a speedy update.... >_> Yeah, anyways, thank you so much for reading this, and thanks even more for reviewing! You're an awesome fan!
Name: fleamichael (Signed) · Date: 27/05/11 - 01:59 pm · For: Adventure Starts in the Mist Village
Sweet! My character is just like I imagined! Good job.
Author's Response: Yay, I am so glad I got him right! I feel so good now. I'm glad you liked it. Thank you for reading and reviewing! You rock!
Name: lilmissmindy (Signed) · Date: 27/05/11 - 01:40 pm · For: Will You Join This Story?
Well, I don't know if it's over yet, but.
Name: Lestelle Ufuru-Uchiha
Gender: Female
Animal partner: Spark
Ancestor: Madra Uchiha (father)
Village: Rain
Age: 12
Personality: Lestelle is loud, talkative, sarcastic, and stubborn. She always wants to get her point across, no matter what the cost. Spark (her wolf) is always on her head or side and can transform into a large wolf.
Appearance: Lestelle wears all black. Black hoodie, t-shirt, leggings, and shoes. She has curly dirty blonde hair and hazel-green eyes. Lestelle used a jutsu to be forever young, and is now working as a double agent.
Kekkei Genkai: Toketsugan (can see the future and freeze time)
Special Abilities: Controls everything electric.
I know this is straight out of my story, but I thought you could have wrote her better.
Author's Response: Oh... wow. Okay, she seems really interesting, and I do remember reading this character in your story. So, from what I gather, she starts out as a bad guy, since she is Madara's daughter, but actually wants to defeat him. Or am I wrong? Is she spying on the heroes to later betray them or does she betray Madara. If you could just clear that up for me, that would be awesome. But thanks for joining, I really appreciate it!
Name: enchanted_ninja_girl (Signed) · Date: 27/05/11 - 08:46 am · For: Prologue: It Begins
poor girl...can't wait to see all the oc's in action!
Author's Response: I know, right! It's so sad.... I also cannot wait to see all of the OCs in action ;D Thanks for reading and thanks a ton for reviewing! You're amazing!
Name: Konan (Signed) · Date: 27/05/11 - 08:11 am · For: Prologue: It Begins
It was amazing!! So emotionally packed and intense. It was very interesting. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: *dances around* Yes! I am so glad that you liked it. And hopefully, the next chapter will be out soon. Thank you so much for reading, and thanks even more for reviewing! You're awesome!
Name: fleamichael (Signed) · Date: 27/05/11 - 07:25 am · For: Prologue: It Begins
Excellent!
Author's Response: Hooray! Thank you so much for reading this, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 27/05/11 - 04:06 am · For: Prologue: It Begins
=) Yeah, I can't stop doing that. As soon as I saw you'd updated, I started smiling. This chapter has kept that smile on my face. You're an awesome writer. And sorry about Krina bugging you. I told her not to. Anyway, I can't wait to read more. You're chapter was absolute genius. I hope I can write my story as well as you do. I highly doubt I could match your awesomeness, though (is awesomeness even a word???? =(.... Oh great, now I frown)
Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad I kept you smiling. That's a real confidence booster, right there. I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter; thank you for such kind words. And I know you'll do great with your story, so don't fret. And no worries, I completely understand where Krina was coming from. Everyday, I was practically yelling at myself for not posting something. But I'm so happy that you liked this chapter! And I don't know if awesomeness is a word, but I've been using it all the time, so it's all good ;D Thank you so much for reading and thanks a bunch for reviewing! You rock!
Name: krina (Signed) · Date: 26/05/11 - 02:28 pm · For: Will You Join This Story?
When are you going to star writing your story?
Author's Response: I'm sorry! Most likely this weekend. I wanted to wait a full week for participant OCs, so hopefully the first chapter will be up this weekend. Again, I'm sorry, but I am busy with other things as well.