Reviews For Pirates of the Mist
Name: BattyBigSister (Signed) · Date: 02/05/11 - 05:38 pm · For: New Mission! Teams Kakashi and Kurenai Deployed!
Hehehee. I agree completely with your opinion of Sai's clothing. Every time I see him I find myself thinking, "You should go give that girl her top back and get a proper shirt." This chapter was also very good. You've kept everyone brilliantly in character and all the scenes played out very realistically. I liked the fight scene. You thought of some interesting moves and used them well. It was fun to see them keep the leaf shinobi on their toes. Great work!
Author's Response: I know, right! Sai needs to get a whole new wardrobe, seriously. And hooray! I'm glad to hear that the characters kept close to their personalities. And I'm really happy that you liked the fight scene. I sometimes have trouble with those. Thank you so much for your support, it is really motivating to read your reviews! Thank you so much for reading this, and thank you even more for reviewing! I really appreciate your words of encouragement!
Name: BattyBigSister (Signed) · Date: 02/05/11 - 05:20 pm · For: The Blue Pirates
Oh, the beginning's really good. Very dramatic and I love the imagery with the tidal waves and everything. I could just see it all so clearly in my head - and you kept that up throughout the chapter which was nice. I loved your writing style in this. Your narrative voice sounded a little like Kishimoto-sensei/the Naruto anime and your presentation and use of characters resembled them a little too. The plotline was breathtaking. I was on the edge of my seat. Pirates may have been done before from time to time, but I've yet to see anything done this well. This a very original idea in many ways and I love it. I also love the fact that its based in the Naruto-world as is. It gives it a feel as if it could really happen there. This has the promise of being a really exciting story and I can't wait to see where you take it.
Author's Response: Ah! Oh my gosh, you are so nice. I am so happy to hear everything you had to say. It was such a confidence booster. I'm so glad to hear that my writing was nice, and to hear that you love my writing style... best news ever! I am just so flattered at your words. I am so overjoyed that you love this idea. You are a very kind reviewer, thank you so much! I can't thank you enough for your words of kindness. Thank you for reading this story, and thank you even more for reviewing with such nice insight. You're an awesome reader and reviewer!
Name: Randomguy (Signed) · Date: 28/03/11 - 04:30 pm · For: Pirates Will Be Pirates
Hmmm, I'd say Kasumi has a past that needs to be unraveled, and thats something I want to see! Also, I think, based on the characters' past histories and their personalities, and the general Narutoness of it all, a happy ending where Kasumi gets transformed is in order, after suitable Naruto corniness of course. Just my two cents. All in all an awesome chapter :) the plot moves along, and I see several possible destinations for it!
Author's Response: Oh yes, Kasumi has a very complicated past. And it shall be discovered in due time, my faithful reader. Hmm... okay, so there is one vote for a happy ending. Yeah, I guess that would be considered Naruto corniness. I see your point, and I understand your perspective. Thanks for taking the time to share how you feel the story is doing and where it should go. I really appreciate readers' feedback. And as the plot moves along.... even I can't wait to see what happens next! ;D Anyways, thank you so much for reading, it means a lot! And thanks again for telling me your thoughts, it really inspires me to write!
Name: Randomguy (Signed) · Date: 25/03/11 - 07:04 pm · For: Reformation Begins Now!
Interesting! Hmmm, I see a few possible endings..... very enjoyable plot development. And of course Guy sensei is hilarious in any case :)
Author's Response: Yay! The plot development was noticeable! Woohoo! And Guy sensei... what an interesting character :) Thanks for still reading! And thanks a lot for still reviewing!
Name: Randomguy (Signed) · Date: 25/03/11 - 06:45 pm · For: Waking Up In Vegas
Interesting. I liked it. I have no idea were it goes from here.... I have theories, but Ill just have to read the next chapter right away to find out for sure. She feels like a character that a lot of work went into. WHatever happens, I hope there's still some Naruto corniness in store ;)
Author's Response: Yeah, I'm unpredictable like that. Then again, I've been told that I am pretty predictable, so who knows? I can't release any information to you on what could possibly happen next, so you'll just have to read to find out! Kasumi really did take a lot of work. There's a lot to her that is slowly being uncovered to the readers. As for Naruto corniness... eh, read to find out ;D Thanks for reading and thanks a bunch for reviewing!
Name: Randomguy (Signed) · Date: 25/03/11 - 06:13 pm · For: Rematch! Pirates versus Ninjas!
Now THAT was an unexpected plot twist! A girl....v ery interesting! And I loved the battle, with the Kekkei Genkai and the intelligently conducted finale attack by Kakashi. I wonder what happens next :)
Author's Response: Haha, yeah, I'm a very big fan of feminine power. And you never ever see a female captain, so I figured why not? I had always planned for the captain to be a girl. I'm glad that you enjoyed the battle scene, I always have trouble with them. I hope you continue to enjoy this story! Thanks for continuing to read and thanks a lot for reviewing!
Name: Randomguy (Signed) · Date: 24/03/11 - 07:34 am · For: Two Totally Different Plans
Awesome! Naruto corniness found! Also, I like how these pirates are developed. They feel like a band of organized outlaws. I'm looking forward to seeing how things work out :)
Author's Response: Told you there was Naruto corniness! I'm glad the pirates seem organized to you. That's what I was going for, so I'm glad I nailed it! I hope you continue to enjoy the rest of this story. Thanks for reading and thanks even more for reviewing!
Name: Randomguy (Signed) · Date: 23/03/11 - 04:10 pm · For: New Mission! Teams Kakashi and Kurenai Deployed!
Alright, Action, Jutsu... a plot, probably some Naruto corniness on the way... I like it :)
Author's Response: Action, check. Jutsu, check. Plot, check. Naruto corniness... well, you haven't seen anything yet! But I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reading and thanks even more for reviewing!
Name: Randomguy (Signed) · Date: 23/03/11 - 04:03 pm · For: The Blue Pirates
You review my stories all the time, so I figure I should check out your stories, and wow, this is a good introduction, I like it. It feels.... How Naruto is supposed to feel. Onward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Aw, that is so kind of you to review my stories! And I'm glad you thought it was a good intro. I can't think of a good adjective for how Naruto is supposed to feel, but I'm gonna take it as a compliment! Thanks a lot, and I'm so glad you decided to read this!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 23/03/11 - 02:44 pm · For: Pirates Will Be Pirates
Oh. My. Gosh!!! That was just plain awesomeness! I absolutely loved it. I can't wait to read more of it. I was surprised when I saw that her little brother's name was Taiyou because I didn't know other people even knew that name. I want to say more about your story's coolness, but I can't. I have a couple questions about the challenge you issued. I want to try it out because it sounds fun.
1) Can it be more than one character that enters the world?
2) Can I have it be so that the naruto characters are also trying to help out the oc I'm going to create because something strange is happening to him?
Author's Response: Yay! I'm super glad that you enjoyed that chapter! I don't remember where I heard the name Taiyou, but I do remember liking it at the time I heard it. So I put it into a story. Hurray, I'm really excited to hear that you would like to try out my challenge! Yes, you can add more than one character. The more the merrier, I always say! I personally don't know if I could manage more than one, but as long as your plot is organized with more than one character, then I know it'll turn out awesomely. And yes, you can have the Naruto characters get involved in an OC's life. That's actually what I plan on doing for my own story, which is up if you haven't checked it out. Perhaps it would give you a basis or inspiration? Either way, you're a great author, and I know your story will be awesome. Can't wait to check it out! And thanks a bunch for continuing to read this story! It means a lot to me, and it means even more that you took the time to review it! Thanks a lot!
Name: Fantasy Madeline (Signed) · Date: 20/03/11 - 06:29 pm · For: Pirates Will Be Pirates
Yay!!! Action! If there is romance..not Kiba. Definately. Kiba is too good for her. Masaru definately. He is fellow pirate and a good combonation. Great job on this chapter. Keep up the terific work.
Author's Response: Yeah, I figured I should put in some piratey action. That was what this story was about in the beginning anyways XD Okay, so we have one vote for Masaru. I'll probably agree with you on the fact that Kiba is too good for Kasumi. He belongs to me and only me ;D Thank you so much for your support in this chapter! It means a lot to me that you continue reading, and it means even more that you always review! Thanks a bunch, my ever-so faithful reader!
Name: SandShinobi21 (Signed) · Date: 27/01/11 - 10:58 pm · For: Reformation Begins Now!
Yay yay yay!! A new chapter!! (a little late on my part but high school hates me) Anyway, yay I love this chapter! And I so saw the Gai raising his hand thing coming! Lol I feel so bad for TenTen! xD I Wonder which team is next....suspense...>.<
And OMG I WAS MENTIONED!! lol Thank you for that, it was awesome! You didn't have to. ^///^
Author's Response: Haha, I'm glad you loved this chapter. And don't worry, high school hates me too. Midterms are terrible XP As for which team will be next.... you'll just have to wait and see. And I gave you a shoutout because I really appreciate your love for my story. Thanks so much for favoriting my story! Thanks so much reading and thanks even more for reviewing!
Name: ForTheLuvOfRamen (Signed) · Date: 22/01/11 - 07:37 pm · For: Reformation Begins Now!
I love Kasumi's irritation with Neji. :D
Author's Response: Haha, yeah! I had fun writing Kasumi and Neji's little quarrels. Well, I guess they were big quarrels, weren't they? XD Thanks for reading! I'm so happy that this story is appealing to people!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 22/01/11 - 07:17 pm · For: Reformation Begins Now!
EXACTLY the four teams I predicted. Man oh man, I can't help but feel bad for Kasumi. I wonder how it can get any worse than team Guy. Well, unless she goes to Naruto, who, despite the fact I don't think he's bad, would probably irritate the crap out of her. Anyway, I can't wait to read more, and thanks for the two shout outs! I'm eager to see what happens if/when Sasuke and Kasumi meet. Those two attitudes colliding will NOT be good.
Author's Response: Yes! I knew that's who you thought I was thinking of.... again, did that make sense? Haha, pity was exactly what I was going for in this chapter. Good thing I nailed it. Anyways, if you think about it, things can get WAY worse for Kasumi. There are still the other three teams before the reformation cycle starts again. As for Sasuke and Kasumi... well, we'll just have to wait and see. Thanks again for joining my website! And thanks for continuing to read and review this story! Your comments always inspire and encourage me!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 20/01/11 - 05:19 am · For: Waking Up In Vegas
Oh crap. If these four teams are the ones I'm thinking of, Kasumi is going to get a MAJOR headache. Anyway, amazing story, and thanks for reviewing Cursed Saint. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!
Author's Response: I think I know who you're thinking of for the teams that I'm thinking of.... if that made sense.... Thanks for the review. I'm so glad that you continue to read and review this story. And I really like your story, Cursed Saint, so of course I'm going to review it :) Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Name: SandShinobi21 (Signed) · Date: 17/01/11 - 07:54 pm · For: The Blue Pirates
Haha your very welcome! I'd be happy if anyone liked my OC's too so it's no big deal! I'm loving this website purely 'cause of your stories and the Kokoro Uchiha one. =D
YAY NEW CHAPTER SOON!! xD See now you've gone and gotten me excited! Well, I'll just have to wait I gues...even though it's SO hard..Oh well, I'll just go read your other stories! LOL
Author's Response: Aw, that's so sweet of you to say! The fact that my story is one of the things that makes you love this site is very supportive. And don't you worry about that new chapter. I predict that it shall make an appearance very soon. But if you wish to read my other stories, I won't stop you! XD LOL.
Name: SandShinobi21 (Signed) · Date: 17/01/11 - 12:47 pm · For: Waking Up In Vegas
I LOVE THIS! Very good story, you did well with the OC characters! (I Can say this, cause I already love them! xD)
This, so far, is awesome! I Love pirates, and naruto so this is like a kick butt story for me! Please update soon, I'm in suspense right now!
Author's Response: Omg! New fan! Hurray! I'm super happy that you like this story. I'm really glad that you love the OC characters. It really encourages me to know that someone likes my characters. I also love pirates (obviously XD), so I'm happy to know that there are people who enjoy this story. I'm working on the next chapter now, so hopefully it'll be updated soon. Thank you so much for your positive feedback! Satisfied fans really encourage me to keep writing. Thanks so much for reading and thanks a bunch for reviewing!
Name: enchanted_ninja_girl (Signed) · Date: 03/01/11 - 08:14 am · For: The Blue Pirates
Very interesting new chapter with a turn, but I figured that Tsunade would do something like that.
I also think that someone needs to knock the captain down a peg or two, just because...you know she ain't the coolest ninja out there and all, but that's my view haha.
Can't wait for more, keep on writing!
Author's Response: Wow, I'm glad that you enjoyed the chapter. The twist was so interesting to write because Tsunade is so awesome like that :) And don't worry about the captain. Her time will come. Once she starts going through the reformation, things will start to take a turn in her life. But I have said too much already! Thanks so much for your feedback. I appreciate input a lot. Thanks for reading and thanks a bunch for reviewing!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 01/01/11 - 05:35 am · For: Rematch! Pirates versus Ninjas!
Kakashi should learn to trust his instincts better. He was one hundred percent right. I can't wait to read more of your story. It's an awesome story, always beating my expectations. I absolutely love your story. I can't wait to see what happens to the captain in now that she's in Konoha. Keep up the AMAZING work.
Author's Response: Yeah, Kakashi does need to listen to that voice inside his head. What a shame... You have no idea how much I appreciate your reviews for this story. Your kind words and praise really make my day and make me want to update sooner! I'm glad this story is meeting your every expectation. It really makes me happy to see that people enjoy themselves when they read my story. It's very encouraging. I hope the next chapter is to your liking. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 31/12/10 - 09:39 pm · For: Two Totally Different Plans
I'm starting to think the captain's own cockiness is going to be his downfall. It was a great chapter, Wolf-chan. It met my ever expectation. Then again, my only expectation was for it to be amazing, and it was amazing and had a twist at the end, so I guess you sorta beat my expectations. Anyway, I can't wait to see what happens when Naruto gets his hands on the Captain. I don't know how he'll let him get away with kidnapping Inari and killing all the villagers. Anyway, off to read another chapter, which I know will be great.
Author's Response: Ugh, that captain. What are we going to do with all that cockiness? I'm glad that this chapter met your expectations, especially since your expectation was for it to be amazing. That's so great to hear :D And I'm glad the twist intrigued you. We'll just see how that turns out later on. Here's hoping you enjoy the next chapter! Thanks for your reviews! They really make me happy :)
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 31/12/10 - 09:27 pm · For: New Mission! Teams Kakashi and Kurenai Deployed!
Such a cocky captain they have. Something I wrote that one of my characters in a story I'm writing is (something like this): Like a stone dulls a sword, cockiness dulls ones skills. If only the captain knew that. Anyway, great chapter yet again. You are an amazing author. I can't wait to read the next chapter. I think I'm starting to fall in love with your story it's so amazing, Wolf-chan!
Author's Response: Oh yes, that captain sure is a cocky one. It'll be a while before the captain realizes this. Thanks for the support for this chapter! I'm glad you liked it. The fact that you are so interested in my writing really makes me feel all warm inside :) I hope you continue to enjoy yourself while reading about pirates and ninjas ;) Thanks for reviewing! You're so awesome to do so!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 31/12/10 - 08:28 pm · For: The Blue Pirates
I'm glad I chose to read this story. It's really good. I wonder what will happen to Inari. I'm glad to hear he's still keeping his promise to not be a cry baby. He's gotten so strong since then. Anyway, I can't wait to read another one of your chapters, silverwolf1213. Could I just call you Wolf-chan for short? If not, that's okay. I can't wait to see what happens next. If the rest of your story is as good as the beginning, then you have no problem. I saw very few mistakes, which is good on your part. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Wow! I have a new fan! That is so encouraging! And let's give a shout out to Inari, shall we? He's such a brave dude. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story. And yes, you can call me Wolf-chan. I don't mind :) It's so cool to hear that you are really interested in my fic. I'm super glad that you enjoyed the beginning, and I hope the rest of this story continues to catch your interest. Thank you so much for your kind words and praise! It means a lot to me to have support from my readers. Thanks for choosing to read my story, and thanks even more for taking the time to review it! Happy New Year!
Name: Fantasy Madeline (Signed) · Date: 30/12/10 - 03:28 pm · For: Waking Up In Vegas
I love where this story is headed, i really do. The ANBU headquarters is so realistic. You used detail so well. I love the idea of 'reformation'. Tsunade has a bit of a different personality than in the anime/manga, a bit more...diabolical. I love it. You did a great job on Ibiki (i don't know i personally have a hard time writing about him...might just be me though...) Great job in general and keep up the terrific work.
Author's Response: Wow, thanks for the speedy review! I'm so glad you really love this story. I worked really hard on the interrogation and prison scenes, so I'm glad you noticed the details. I wanted to take a different approach to the punishment, rather than the same old boring 'let's throw the criminal in jail' type of thing. So reformation seemed like an interesting thing to write about. Yeah, I think Tsunade is a tad OOC. But after seeing her in the anime/manga, I depict her as the type of person who chooses to do things differently, hence the diabolicalness and her idea for reformation. I'm surprised that you think Ibiki turned out well, considering I have difficulties writing scary/serious characters. But I'm glad that he seemed accurate to you. I'm super happy that you enjoy this story. Thanks so much for your kind words! You really make me happy when you show my stories support. Thanks for reading and thanks even more for reviewing! Happy New Year!
Name: enchanted_ninja_girl (Signed) · Date: 28/12/10 - 08:44 pm · For: Rematch! Pirates versus Ninjas!
I'm really interested in this story, it really picked up in the third chapter and the last one really peaked my interest...of course the captain's jutsu's though we like the water bending abilities of Avatar, which was an interesting twist.
Anyways, I'm planning to continue reading this story so please keep writing!
Can't wait for the next chapter! Get it out ASAP please!
Author's Response: Cool, I'm glad that you were intrigued by this story. Yeah, I guess it was a bit of a slow start, but I'm happy that you were still interested once things got moving. Yes, I'm aware that the captain's jutsu was similar to Avatar... please don't hate me for it! I had always planned to make the captain's chakra type water, and I thought the jutsu would be easier to use with a kekkei genkai like that. Don't worry, I'll try not to copy the show. I will take no credit for anything that doesn't belong to me. I'm super excited that you want to continue reading this! I'll try to hurry with the next chapter :)
Name: Fantasy Madeline (Signed) · Date: 28/12/10 - 02:33 pm · For: Rematch! Pirates versus Ninjas!
Ok,i commend you. Why in our stereotypical world does the villain have to be male?n Thank you for having a female antagonist. You did a great job with the battle scene(s). You tied it together naturally, as you should have. Love the story, and please update soon.
Author's Response: Yes! Thank you so much for your understanding of my strange thoughts. The minute I thought of this story, I had the idea to make a female captain because you never ever see that at all! I'm glad that you found that my battle scene(s) were well-written, because I hate writing those. I always feel that I'm not writing enough, but I'm happy that you thought that the action scenes flowed. School starts up next week :( But I'll try to update as soon as possible anyway. Thanks for your review; it made my day :D