Reviews For One Little Girl
Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: 10/04/11 - 06:25 pm · For: Introducing Madalyn
What s a hyphen?
Name: SincereGlomp (Signed) · Date: 10/04/11 - 06:24 pm · For: Introducing Madalyn
"Stop doing that!!!!! its' relly annouying and stupid becasue you dontt know any--thing!!"
*It's or It is (upper case and contraction revision)
*Really (as in I really already said this one)
*Annoying
*Because
*Don't
*Anything (one word, and not double hyphen)
Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: 10/04/11 - 06:20 pm · For: Introducing Madalyn
Stop doing that!!!!! its' relly annouying and stupid becasue you dontt know any--thing!!
Name: SincereGlomp (Anonymous) · Date: 10/04/11 - 06:18 pm · For: Introducing Madalyn
"Your reelly stupid. Im not a cowerd, ypour just stupid. this is badlly righten and sucks!!"
*You are, or you're
*Really
*I'm
*Coward
*Your, well, actually, you are, or you're
*This (capitals at the beginning of sentences
*Badly
*Written
Just thought I could help give you some basic education. Glad to help.
Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: 10/04/11 - 06:09 pm · For: Introducing Madalyn
Your reelly stupid. Im not a cowerd, ypour just stupid. this is badlly righten and sucks!!
Name: SincereGlomp (Signed) · Date: 10/04/11 - 06:05 pm · For: Mission: Life and Death of a Ninja part 3
This is a reply to an 'anonymous' person who didn't have the guts to insult people online and tag their name to it.
What was said: "This is stupid. Sh'es a merry sue."
Well, nice to know that everyone gives constructive criticism. Not only has this ignoramus read 7 chapters of a 'stupid' story with a 'merry sue', but they clearly don't know about the basic rules of grammar or how to spell. On second thought he or 'sh'es' (is this what they think the OC's name is? Obviously they're reviewing the wrong story then) too scared to post any of this under a legitimate name. Instead, they hide behind a veil of anonymity because they recognize their comments to be both useless for the author to better herself or improve, but seem to have no spell check on their computer. Even a basic proof read would establish the errors they made here. 2 sentences and neither is constructed properly. That certainly is impressive, my cowardly friend. Anyone who agrees that whoever this is should man up and give a legitimate reason for their comments, please re-review. This is just a troll who has nothing better to do than read a 'stupid' fanfiction up to the 7th chapter before they even make note of any dislike.
Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: 10/04/11 - 05:53 pm · For: Mission: Life and Death of a Ninja part 3
This is stupid. Sh'es a merry sue.
Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: 10/04/11 - 04:44 pm · For: Mission: Life and Death of a Ninja part 3
Where did she get the Bayakagan from? Kakashi had a sharingon implant so she wouldn't inherit that ether.
Name: SincereGlomp (Signed) · Date: 10/04/11 - 12:03 am · For: Mission: Life and Death of a Ninja part 2
Tip, never tell us you think the chapter is bad because they usually aren't and people might think from the get-go that it is...which this wasn't...bad I mean... in other words: THE CHAPTER WAS GOOD SO DON'T BE SUPER CRITICAL OF YOURSELF!!!! (Um.... yah.... I get... loud sometimes? (Was that a question? (YES YES IT WAS (-_-''')))
Author's Response: Sorry, I underestimate myself... -.- Thanks so much for reviewing and I love that you tell me what quotes you like! It is so helpful!
Name: SincereGlomp (Signed) · Date: 09/04/11 - 11:53 pm · For: Mission: Life and Death of Ninja
Is she.... biploar? *Evil smirk* 1, 2, 3.... *cheery friendship smile* Is the term 'I lolled' appropriate right here?
Oh, and one last thing: "a potato thing"
^-^ Was it "really good for an emo cook girl"? "and the potato things"... DAMN THOSE OUT OF CONTEX POTATOES!!!!!!!!
Yay! Latkes!!! Yumyumyums!!! Are you a M.O.T.T.?
Name: SincereGlomp (Signed) · Date: 09/04/11 - 11:44 pm · For: Parents and Orochimaru...=0
Quote of the day: "If i could move i would kill you Naruto. Don't call my mom 'crazy snake lady'!"
And: "Is Naruto here?" "Believe it!" "Is Sasuke here?" "..." "Great everyone's here."
Because, really, Sasuke requires no legit reply, he just... is?
Have you ever noticed that Ambu officers resemble people with red shirts in star treck?
"Don't look at me like that. Like you don't carry around an emergency medical kit. Oh you don't? Oh... You should have one." I actually should... -_-''' I'm only a complete clutz. assbgrb;asirrb v. See? I just fell on top of my key board!
"This calls for a flashback." Because 'I still like'
Name: SincereGlomp (Signed) · Date: 09/04/11 - 11:36 pm · For: Parents and Orochimaru...=0
Quote of the day: "If i could move i would kill you Naruto. Don't call my mom 'crazy snake lady'!"
Name: SincereGlomp (Signed) · Date: 11/03/11 - 10:07 pm · For: Introducing Madalyn
Oh wow.
Name: xepiccookie (Signed) · Date: 05/03/11 - 02:16 am · For: A Mission Like No Others
I really like the story! keep it up!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 15/02/11 - 03:36 am · For: A Mission Like No Others
Yes, I hate that you are not telling the mission until the next chapter! I'm glad you updated, I was waiting on some action for this story for a while. The rivalry that Lee created between himself and Madeline is funny, and Tenten and Neji betting on it is even funnier. Poor Tenten. And I laughed when you slipped in that bit about Sai. I think it's funny that Madeline of all people is teaching people how to smile. Another excellent chapter. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Yea. Ironic about the smiling thing isn't it? Thanks so much for reviewing yet again. I noticed that my previous chapters had been a bit sad, dark, and broody. This was supposed to be lighter and comedic. Thanks I will update super soon i promise. Happy Valentine's Day!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 30/01/11 - 09:03 am · For: BONUS CHAPTER: Ranks
Aww... it's even sadder than I imagined. Thank you so much for doing this chapter, it really helped a lot to understand Madeline's point of view. And it was so depressing! Poor Madeline, no wonder she hates people! This was a really good bonus chapter. Thanks for posting this.
Question: I thought Madeline went by her mom's last name, but in this chapter, you used Hatake. Did she change it when she left the village?
Thanks again for posting this chapter! It was really good, and I look forward to any other chapters, bonus or normal, that you happen to put up. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: In answer to your question, yea she changed after she left the village. People kept comparing her to her dad, and after a while she started to compare herself to her dad too. She changed it to Miterashi after she left.rn Thanks so much for reviewing once again and thanks so much for 5 stars! You are awesome! Bye!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 28/01/11 - 05:33 am · For: ROOT Part 2
Nice chapter! I especially liked the battle scenes. You portray Madeline as a very indestructible child, which is really amazing. I love your character very much.
As for flashbacks... can you actually write the scene about Madeline being denied for the genin ranks? I think it would be really interesting to see what actually happened, and it could prove to be very emotionally moving.
Also, a word of advice... I don't think you should make a separate story for flashbacks. It's more creative to work them in to this story. That's just my opinion though.
Good job on this! I hope you find time to update soon because I love all of your ideas!
Author's Response: Cool..i really didn't want to write a seperate story. Yea i can totally look for antoher bonus scene. I have already started writing it. Thanks so much for giving me an idea, as well as positive feedback. And i love you for giving me 5 stars. You really thought the battle scenes were well written? Yay! They look so good in my head, but sometimes i have trouble getting it on paper. I will update this weekend so look for me kay? Thanks so much! =)
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 22/01/11 - 04:05 pm · For: BONUS CHAPTER
Omg, this was so informative! It really explains a lot. It was very descriptive and well-written. I really enjoyed this chapter. Plus, it was long! Hooray! ;D And as long as you continue to post interesting chapters, I won't hate you for straying from the storyline. Just as long as you don't forget about the original story. Good job on this flashback. I really liked it. 10 out of 10!
Author's Response: Yea! You liked it! I am so happy. I really tried to write this the best i could so i am happy i seemed well-written. And you gave me 5 STARS! I Want to hug you! Thank you so much! (I love it when people give me ratings and good feedback) Thanks so much for reviewing!
Name: AkatsukiLemonLover23 (Signed) · Date: 18/01/11 - 08:24 am · For: Mission: Life and Death of Ninja
I LOVE IT SO FARRRRR!!! :D :D :D but the chapters hurt my eyesssss
Author's Response: O.M.G. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my story! I am so glad you love it! But why does the chapters hurt your eyes....?
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 13/01/11 - 03:30 am · For: Bonus Chapter! Secret Kage Files!
This was certainly helpful. Whenever I need info, I'm coming to this chapter. I like the part about Lee thinking that he is her rival. That is so typical that it's hilarious :D I hope we'll see another bonus chapter! Good job on this.
Author's Response: Yea. When i'm reading other a lot of other fanfics i tend to get characters sort of mixed up, so i like info. Well, if i get to 1,000 reads you will certainly see another. Thank you so much for helping me get to 900 reads! Thanks for reviewing! =)
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 10/01/11 - 03:31 am · For: ROOT
Whoo! Update! I'm a little disappointed that you ended this chapter there, but I'll take what I can get! I'm super excited to see Madeline battle an ANBU. I hope that scene is intense! Keep up the good work and I hope you update soon!
Author's Response: yea sorry about that....my computer's charger was destroyed by my cats and my computer's charge was running low so i had to end it quickly. But to make up for it i will update soon. Thanks again for reading and reviewing!rn
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 30/12/10 - 08:42 pm · For: Mission! Escort the Bridge Builder!
Oh...my...gosh...
I have never seen Madeline so...loud.
She stood on a chair and started a chant in the mission room. Holy cow. That was quite a scene. I laughed the entire time I was reading that part. I rather enjoyed that part.
I'm sorta glad that Madeline is getting a different mission than the Tazuna story. I feel that she deserves a more intense mission. Which I'm hoping she gets. But I won't know until you update. So I'm going to need you to update soon. Please update soon!
Author's Response: In that scene she was a little OOC, but i really did not picture her saving a cat. I don't think that would have been fun for anyone...especially the cat. Thanks. I thought over all the escort the bridge builder mission was a little boring in the anime, and Kakashi + Madeline + all the other genin would have easily defeated Haku and Zabuza. Thank you for reading/reviewing. BTW I will update today so...look for it.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 29/12/10 - 04:46 pm · For: Meet the Team
Yay! You finally updated! I'm sorry about your computer. That sucks, trust me, I would know.
It was good to see the genin attempting to get along. Now I wanna see what their mission is! Here's hoping for a quick update! Nice job!
Author's Response: rnThank you for reviewing so quickly! I will update within the next three days, so look for my newest installment. Have a fantastic New Year's.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 19/12/10 - 03:57 pm · For: Teamwork
Yay! Update! Gosh, I just love reading this story. Madeline is such a good character. She's so socially deficient yet she is such a cool character! Another great chapter to add to the other awesome ones. Good job, and keep up the amazing work! Happy Holidays!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 14/12/10 - 05:07 pm · For: ANBU
Aww, I'm so disappointed. I was kinda looking forward to a romance story. Such a shame...
Anyway, congrats! This was your longest chapter! And it was also very interesting. I can't wait until Madeline meets the other genin. It was pretty funny when she met Team Guy.
Great chapter, and I look forward to the next one.
Author's Response: Thanks. I am very slowly making a small personality change in Madeline, so keep an eye out for it. I will have a lot of fun writing these next couple of chapters. I love seeing main characters in another perspective, so that's how I try to write. Thank you for being such a loyal fan. Happy holidays!