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Penname: AllieChan [Contact]
Real name: Alexandra
Membership status: Member
Member since: 19/11/06
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attempting to look sasuke-ish

Well I'm Alex and I come from Australia, I've been writing fanfiction for about a year and a half now. And my mission with writing is to have fictions that are long and a pleasure to read.
I love stories that really get to the heart, I love character development, and in ways I love tragedy, I do hope if you are reading this you have read some of my stories, then you'll know what im talking about.
I hope to get better, gradually!

My stories:

Ai Shite Imas:
COMPLETE!!!
My first fan fiction, and the most well known, its complete!!! XD 30 WHOLE chapters! took me a while, but I love it, it sorta went from comedy to drama to angst, but all the same a good sasunaru story which has a part two. includes: Mpreg, yaoi, lemon, angst

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This was that start of a doujinshi that my GREAT FANTASTIC AMAZING Rina drew for the first chapter of Ai Shite Imas of course she got lazy and didnt do more, but HELL she makes my characters look hottt! I love youuuu Rina, thankyou dear! From now on Rina is my artist!! (hopefully Ill get her to do a few manga's for my chapters...im working on it!)

Ai Shite Imas: The Birth:
COMPLETE!!!!!
The second part to Ai Shite Imas, Sasuke is going to get married to Sakura and Naruto is carrying Sasuke's baby.
Its a rad story! and tyes everything up from the first half.
Includes: yaoi, lemon, angst, mpreg

CRIMSON:
My Sasuke mpreg fic, probably the most disturbing fiction you will evern read... Sasuke is rapped by his brother who uses a potion so that Sasuke gets pregnant so that Itachi can have a heir... its sick and twisted, but hey ItaSasu had to write one. I'm going to continue this one soon! so anyone whos hanging out for it just wait!
includes: yaoi, lemon, incest, rape, mpreg, angst

Avenging Christmas:
Hmmmm its like a warped version of the nightmare before christmas except with Naruto characters, also Santa is hentai and Orochimaru is falling apart.
Its a sasunaru, and its REALLY weird, but extremely funny.
Includes: hints of yaoi

DISCRIMINATION
Ahh yes anouther sasunaru! But a bit diffrent to the others, Naruto is bullied for his sexual orientation so he is forced to move to a new school, where he gets the biggest crush on the most popular boy of the school, Sasuke who is also a jrock star in a band called Kunai.
Can Naruto keep his secret?
Warnings: yaoi

I know its been a heck of a while since ive been posting but I've suddently got the desire to get back into it! kya!
I'll be focusing on CRIMSON for the moment






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Title: United Stalkers by Oni_Chan
Rated: Liked [Reviews - 17]
Summary: Ino and Sakura have given up control of their organization of fan girls. But, who is to take the title of ownership now? A bunch of love sick and slightly insane girls of Konoha and Suna, that's who.
Category: Het Romance
Characters:
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 | Completed: No | Word count: 2691 | Read count: 5088 [Report This]
Published: 22/02/07 | Updated: 05/03/07


Reviewer: AllieChan Signed Liked
Date: 11/03/07 Title: Chapter 2: The Gathering of Stalkers

WOW I was in there! I'm happy you established my hate for Sakura and Ino, good job.
Cant wait to read what happens next! I'll have to like force you to update...like I always attempt to! mostly failing...
anyway! I like that way you laid everything out. oh god I'm tired....anyway talk to you later!

Author's Response: Hehe ^_^ Im glad you like it Alex ^_^ yeah you shall try but if Yuko doesnt agree...*sigh* Hope to catch ya latyer ^_^



Title: Into The Realm of Yuko by Oni_Chan
Rated: U Liked [Reviews - 45]
Summary: If you know me.
Read my stories.
Or are just bored.
READ THIS
Category: Non-Naruto Fiction
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 | Completed: No | Word count: 3046 | Read count: 13085 [Report This]
Published: 03/03/07 | Updated: 20/07/07


Reviewer: AllieChan Signed Liked
Date: 14/03/07 Title: Chapter 2: Update II

awwwwwww Oni!!! listen I like all your stories eh!! but here's the thing you gotta pick one and FINISH it then you will come up with ideas for the other ones!!!

Author's Response: Im sorry! Its just nehuh I cant pick *huggles stories* I love them all and Yuko\'s evil!



Title: Crimson comes to town! by stylin_crimson
Rated: 12/12A Liked [Reviews - 72]
Summary: Crimson arrives in Kohonah. She seems tense around Sasuke and who is 'Chi? Find out the answers to those questions and a whole lot more! Plus, what happens when she falls for one special guy?

Review me please!
Category: Het Romance > Angst
Characters: All
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 41 | Completed: No | Word count: 15111 | Read count: 57703 [Report This]
Published: 12/03/07 | Updated: 09/09/08


Reviewer: AllieChan Signed Liked
Date: 18/05/07 Title: Chapter 1: Quess who?

Haha well I really liked it! I usually dont read stories with OC's but heck this one was quite good!
ARRRRHHH and Sasuke is dateing Sakura!!! gahhhh I was PRETTY upset about that lol, but eh
and all the chicks were jelious of Crimson :( poor girl, shes so young and married!
I like where you are going with the plot, the whole story and everything!
I wanna know more about this Chi guy! her husband im guessing.
keep updateing!

Author's Response: You\'ll never guess who \'chi is if i give you a million guesses.



Reviewer: AllieChan Signed Liked
Date: 18/05/07 Title: Crimson comes to town!

well he was certainly weak, now wasnt he! I'm guessing you will go further into who he is?
and is that character Crimson based on yourself?
anyway I like it XD ahhh next time make the chapter longer!!!
anyways keep up with the good work hun!

Author's Response: The Crimson character is based around me kind of. We both have blonde hair and like \'Chi. The chapter isn\'t finished yet though. I write little sections every no and then when i get spare time (im just about to into year 10, GCSE\'s and that stuff). Thanks for reveiwing though.



Title: A gay parrot by Rikku
Rated: Liked [Reviews - 14]
Summary: ONESHOT JOKE. Please do not read if you don't like Yaoi.
It's about Naruto who goes to a pet shop to buy himself a parrot...
Category: Orphan
Characters:
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: Jokes
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 542 | Read count: 1257 [Report This]
Published: 18/03/07 | Updated: 18/03/07


Reviewer: AllieChan Signed Liked
Date: 07/07/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

AHAHAHAHAHA thats so funny!!!
Wow Noriko! I was a little disturbed that the parrot didnt have legs and used his...penis to hold him up. But GOD that punch line was FANTASTIC!
Poor little Naruto! Wish I was that parrot lol
you should write more of these joke fics!!



Title: Say No To Fanart by Akiko
Rated: U Liked [Reviews - 4]
Summary: The Naruto Gang discover the wonders of the internet. As they uncover embarrassing pictures of them.
Category: General Fiction
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 | Completed: No | Word count: 1121 | Read count: 4778 [Report This]
Published: 18/04/07 | Updated: 19/04/07


Reviewer: AllieChan Signed Liked
Date: 18/04/07 Title: Chapter 1: Naruto Plus the internet equals BAD!

hahahaha I LOVE HENTAI!! good old Naruto lookign it up lol.
and I must say naruto should be quite happy to know about all the sasunaru :)
lol, but anyway its going really good so far! keep it up!!

Author's Response: Thanks! ^^



Title: Konoha University by suzieuchiha
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 103]
Summary: The Konoha lot are off to uni, there's some changes, some surprises and some new students. What could happen? NaruSasu
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto
Characters: Shino Aburame, Gaara, Haku, Sakura Haruno, Hinata Hyuuga, Neji Hyuuga, Kiba Inuzuka, Shikamaru Nara, Temari, Tenten, Itachi Uchiha, Sasuke Uchiha, Naruto Uzumaki, Ino Yamanaka
Genres: Romance
Warnings: AU, OOC, Yaoi
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 | Completed: No | Word count: 23468 | Read count: 45215 [Report This]
Published: 14/06/07 | Updated: 24/12/07


Reviewer: AllieChan Signed Liked
Date: 05/07/07 Title: Chapter 3: Revenge

“No it won’t! No social situation is ‘fun’!”
I sooo agree with that! Thats the thought that goes through my head everytime I get on the bus to go to school. Damn being the emo kid really sucks sometimes.
Well I like the fact that you made everything really realistic, like Sasuke checking himself out to see if he can pass for Naruto's good looks. That is something that I would expect someone to do!
As for the dropping of the towel well DAMNNN I wish Naruto had seen, I think Sasuke would have been really sexy naked! Damn oblivious blond!
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-- suzieuchiha : hahaha! thank you for reviewing! your reviews make me laugh! =]



Reviewer: AllieChan Signed Liked
Date: 05/07/07 Title: Chapter 8: Morning

OMGOSH all for mee!!! GAHHHHH thankyou!!! Thats so lovely lol, yeyyyy yaoi!! ok SURE its not actual sasunaru action ACTION yet, but it shall get there, taking time with these things is all what fanfictions are about!
Although man I loved it, Sasuke is going to me so confused and messed up after that, yet so is Naruto.
I wonder how far the games will go?
yeyyy you need to update soon, yes im very pushy lol.
I like the suspesne of the chapter, waiting for Sasuke to kiss Naruto that was just great.



Reviewer: AllieChan Signed Liked
Date: 05/07/07 Title: Chapter 7: Night

nawwwww i love sasu torture!! Good ol'e Naruto!! lol wouldnt it just be great to hear Sasuke gasp for you?
I sure think it would be nice for Naruto, damn I wished it went for longer.
Just one day and its already got to this lol. Keep up the great work!!! I reveiwed every chapter so far :D *proud of self*
I know what its like when you write a fiction, you strive on reviews! I hope this is enough to force some more chapters out of you soon!
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-- suzieuchiha : your right it\'s nice getting reviews! =D i guess i could keep writing!



Reviewer: AllieChan Signed Liked
Date: 05/07/07 Title: Chapter 6: Reception Part 3

LOL girls and talking about boyfirends *rolls eyes* I always hate that.. maybe cause I'm gay *shrugs*
Anyway, I like the fact that Gaara was put into the 'weird' catogory! Dont worry Gaara baby normal people are boreing!!
Also happy that now everyone will think that Sasuke and Naruto are gay!! It seems like Sasuke had finally got his revenge on the blond muahahaha
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-- suzieuchiha : agree! normal is boring!



Reviewer: AllieChan Signed Liked
Date: 05/07/07 Title: Chapter 5: Reception Part 2

nawwww I lobe Gaara, he is just so awesome Im happy you are making a romance between Gaara and HInata, Hinata deserves the hot guy every now and then, seeing as Naruto and Sasuke are taken away from the female populance. Although I do love Neji/Gaara...or even better Gaara/Naru!!! gahh no one does that enough!! Mann its the hottest pairing lol.
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-- suzieuchiha : personally i prefer neji/gaara over gaara/naru. but yeah it needed a straight pairing. unfortunatly this world doesn\'t revolve around yaoi *sobs*



Reviewer: AllieChan Signed Liked
Date: 05/07/07 Title: Chapter 4: Reception Part 1

oh gosh that LITTLE tease!!! I just expect Naruto to do something as stupid and damn fantastic as that!! It always happens lol yet its normally Naruto being the akward one! Great to see the tables turned!
As for Shino/Kiba ahhhh why is that pairing so damn popular at the moment? NO affence but I COULD NEVER see Shino in a sexy sense, and imagining him doing Kiba up the ass...*horror struck* in fact the co-writer to one of my fictions (Vice Gang) wrote one...and omgosh *horror struck* in our OWN fiction *cries* I guess some people dig bug-people.
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-- suzieuchiha : i read vice gang! it\'s good! i just think kiba is so cute and i wanted to put sasuke in a really awkward position! *evil laugh* also i just think shino is so cool with his deep voice!



Reviewer: AllieChan Signed Liked
Date: 05/07/07 Title: Chapter 2: Dorm A

ahahaha wow I love this!! First off the Kankurou and Haku was priceless, I love Haku and the fact that you made him play along with the idea of being a female was great I hope Kankurou and Hakuget up to some fun!
and then there was the Sakura and Tsuki, now I must say I like Tsuki, infact she reminds me of myself haha, me and books ahh we go way back. Anyway I recon instead of Sakura changing Tsuki, Tsuki will change Sakura! ahh lovely twist.
AND THEN *deep breath* ou have the sasunaru! ahh I love sasunaru, as I already said I am having imense fun in watching Sasuke suffer over the hottie that is Naruto. lol seeing him Naked :D GREAT! keep it up ok, NEXT CHAPTER



Reviewer: AllieChan Signed Liked
Date: 05/07/07 Title: Chapter 1: Changes

wow man, I was loving the first chapter! Its great how you portray the characters so much like the anime but in a AU. I also like the fact that you are making Sasuke think Naruto is hot, I'm sort of sick of Naruto always being the one who likes Sasuke. Also NIce way of Naruto describing Sasuke as a emo lol I laughed but I must say when I started reading this about how Sasuke hates his fan girls and was standing away from everyone I thought 'emo' well I'll go continue!



Title: Foreign lands by Alice Nine
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 27]
Summary: What happens when you'r the host brother of the Sasuke Uchiha... Or if you have a crush on him for that matter.
Naruto finds himself stuck in Japan crushing over his absent minded host brother Sasuke, Who detests in even speaking one word to him in english.
Will Sasuke warm up to Naruto or will Naruto's trip to Foreign lands be the worst mistake of his life.
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto
Characters: Gaara, Sakura Haruno, Neji Hyuuga, Kiba Inuzuka, Shikamaru Nara, Itachi Uchiha, Sasuke Uchiha, Naruto Uzumaki, Ino Yamanaka
Genres: Angst, Drama, Graphic lemon, Humor
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 | Completed: No | Word count: 15359 | Read count: 7813 [Report This]
Published: 14/06/07 | Updated: 21/07/07


Reviewer: AllieChan Signed Liked
Date: 05/07/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: The red head, The Obsession, The Cabinet

Ahahahaha! You dont know how cute you are Natasha, but I just love the way you write the way you make everthing funny and cute! Some of the situations are so believable yet so hileriously funny at the same time. I must say I feel so bad for Naruto.
Having a crush on someone can be heartbreaking as well as frustrating until they love you back. Lets hope Sasuke snaps out of it and loves Naruto back.
Hahaha I like the throwing chairs comment, yep tash you just took that right out of my life didnt you? I dont know if I should be happy or not that you are modeling Naruto after you and me...are we that much like the stupid dobe? Ok stupid question WE ARE
I also like the fight between Gaara and Sasuke lol I think I hint some jealiously hehe, Kabaneto! Kabaneto! that cracked me up so badly! I love saying japanaese words in katakana!! Homurando! :P bijiniti ahahaha :P
Also that last bit was just priceless 'Am I make you hard dobe?' his english wasnt even perfect but just the fact that Sasuke said 'hard' and 'dobe' in the same sentance was enough *excited* its ok Naruto baby you will make the anti-social-fuckable-hothead hard yourself soon enough! In the mean while there is always masterbation! MASTERBATION! gods gift to the lonely ones lol.
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-- Alice Nine : MASTERBATION, oh yeha alex you would know more then enough about taht wouldnt you? Ok don\'t answer that I do not wnat to know! I already do! haha. Yeah I know alex, it\'s hard for me to make my writings sound serious, i should probably set that goal for myself, but i like humor, and it comes to easyily. hahahah dont steal my bijiniti commet!! haha, yeah I loved the writing Gaara and Sasuke fighting, those two cuties! Love ya al!



Reviewer: AllieChan Signed Liked
Date: 15/06/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

OMGOSH TASHIE i loveeee you
and itsnsooo good
ya i read it again
im sooo proud of you
xD
lets stick together tash my light, you are my light.

Author's Response: haha you don\'t know how good it is to hear you say that my story is good, seeing as you\'re like teh famous alliechan haha. An you think it\'s that good that yo just want to get in and write it with me XD love yo al, yes you\'re my light, don\'t ever go out, espeacialy in dark tunnels!! you know what i mean, lova ya



Title: A Narutard by Lamerstu
Rated: U Liked [Reviews - 62]
Summary: This is my first fanfic! Yay! It's just a list of things I think a Narutard would do. I tried to do things other people have not done. Please laugh and enjoy. Thanks for everyone's support! ^_^
Category: General Fiction, Non-Naruto Fiction
Characters: None
Genres: General, Humor, Parody
Warnings: None
Challenges: You Know You're A Narutard When...,
Challenge: You Know You're A Narutard When...,
Series: None
Chapters: 10 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 2968 | Read count: 16207 [Report This]
Published: 19/07/07 | Updated: 03/08/07


Reviewer: AllieChan Signed Liked
Date: 21/07/07 Title: Chapter 2: More Narutardness

OOhhhh i did once have a extremely vivid dream of Sasuke....heheh....although i wont say what happens *blushes and hides*
I do try to make my finger bleed, mmmhmm its true haha, and yes I say naruto phrases!
i didnt think i was that ...naruto obesessed :S...I need a shrink!
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-- Lamerstu : So what was the dream, huh? *nudges* Come on! *nudges again* Fine! Don\'t tell me! *pouts* Thank you for reading and reviewing! *nods* ^_^



Reviewer: AllieChan Signed Liked
Date: 21/07/07 Title: Chapter 1: Narutards

OMGOSHHHH thats so awesome :) you are crazy arent you? hmmmm? lol well I do speak random japanese, I do call teachers sensei, i do compare kids to naruto characters, i imagine my fav chartacter killing people, i do run naruto style (or attempt and fall over), I do the naruto charkra hand sign, i try to get chakra to parts of my body (although did you know that actually parts of meditation, IT DOES work), i inslut people who insult naruto, woooh thats 8, im a proud narutard and mannn i am
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-- Lamerstu : How did you know I was crazy, huh? *shifty eyes* You don\'t stalk me, do you? *cough* Sorry... got carried away. I\'m glad you\'re a proud Narutard! Yeah! ^_^



Title: Who cares about plots? Certainley not me! by WarlordJEREK
Rated: PG Round robin Liked [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Just write any random or commecial thing you want in here. If your high on sugar, then this may be the place for you. (Try to keep it PG-13 and no Yoai or Yuri please. Other then that you really can write anything funny you want in here).
Category: General Fiction
Characters: Shino Aburame, Chouji Akimichi, Deidara, Gaara, Haku, Sakura Haruno, Kakashi Hatake, Hidan, Kisame Hoshigaki, Hinata Hyuuga, Neji Hyuuga, Kiba Inuzuka, Jiraiya, Konohamaru Sarutobi, Maito Gai, Anko Mitarashi, Zabuza, Shikamaru Nara, Orochimaru, Rin, Rock Lee, Sai
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 | Completed: No | Word count: 1624 | Read count: 3672 [Report This]
Published: 20/07/07 | Updated: 22/07/07


Reviewer: AllieChan Signed Liked
Date: 21/07/07 Title: Chapter 1: Naruto's Awesome Randomness Episode One: The Randomness Begins

OMG you are a FUNNY one!! haha, that was a crack up. In fact hmm I think I might just write something for this haha.
OK I liked the "naruto, i am your father' ahhh I love star wars, I love naruto and I love raman, so it all worked.
JESUS I LOVE YOU!!!
ITS SOOO AWESOMEEEEE
so i cant add even a mention of yaoi or yuri??? hmmm?
anyway keep it up, randomness is great
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-- WarlordJEREK : Wow. thanks for all the love. Breif mentions of Yoai or Yoai that ends up just being a stupid joke is OK. I really just meant nothing Leomony. The same goes for Yuri. I hope you put something in this.



Title: Just some Kisame and Hidan bashing pretty much. by Cherished
Rated: PG Round robin Liked [Reviews - 2]
Summary: like the title says....random Akatsuki -mainly Kisame and Hidan- bashing.
Category: General Fiction
Characters: Deidara, Hidan, Kisame Hoshigaki, Itachi Uchiha
Genres: Drama, Humor
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 | Completed: No | Word count: 1378 | Read count: 2715 [Report This]
Published: 20/07/07 | Updated: 07/08/07


Reviewer: AllieChan Signed Liked
Date: 21/07/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Kisame's not a SHARKMAN itachi, he's a FISH yeah!!!!!

SHARKMAN!!!
Yes thats right, sharkman is sooo what kisame is, sorry HE IS NOT A FISH.
*grabs out knife* hehehehe, now Ima going to go make me some shark fin soup!
anyway, seriously this was funny! I love random things, I like the unknown akatsuki member, he is by far my favorite!
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-- Cherished : thanks 4 the review!!!! u\'r the 1st. person who\'s ever reviewed!!!! i :heart: u already!!!! really? u like Akatsuki member x? hm...my fav. Akatsuki member used 2 be Itatchi...but now i think Dei-chan\'s *Deidara* my fav.* :heart: thanks 4 the review!!!! :whee:



Title: The Vampire Hunters by byakuganangel
Rated: 12/12A Round robin Liked [Reviews - 20]
Summary: Dragged to a nightclub by her persuasive boyfriend, Hinata is having a horrible time. When she catches him making out with the slutty barmaid, she decides she's had enough.
Out on the street, she sends a text to Neji, but he hasn't come yet. And worse, there's a boy nearby who's walking towards her.
He has a knife.

In an instant, Hinata is torn from her normal life and taken by a group of people called the Vampire Hunters. She discovers that her sister and cousin have been taken by her supposedly dead father who is actually the King of the Vampires. With the help of her new friend, her hansome agility teacher Naruto, she sets off on a mission to save them.
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Fluff (Shonen-ai/Yaoi), Het Romance > Angst
Characters: All, Gaara, Hinata Hyuuga, Naruto Uzumaki, Neji Hyuuga, Pair NaruHina
Genres: Action/Adventure, Dark, Fantasy
Warnings: Dark
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 | Completed: No | Word count: 9853 | Read count: 12404 [Report This]
Published: 29/01/08 | Updated: 25/08/08


Reviewer: AllieChan Signed Liked
Date: 09/05/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

meannnn! spose you just have to update quick smart eh? lol its a hinata/naruto fic!! lol hehe...I havent read any before, lol i usually read yaoi, so this will be differant! but yeahhh add some yaoi!! lollll xD
some sasuke/sai mmm :)
this looks like its going to be a very good fic! look forward to more!

xx allie

Author's Response: i am gonna add some yaoi. you see, i love yaoi as well. i\'m a total fangirl of yaoi. i gonna have some fluff between Gaara and Neji and im thinking of having sasuke rape naruto or something.\r\nanyways, glad you like it. i like your stuff as well.



Reviewer: AllieChan Signed Liked
Date: 09/05/08 Title: Chapter 0: Chapter 1

kyyya so good! My little cat Sake and I were reading your story and WE LOVES IT!
heh I must admit I have a bit of a fasination with Vampires, this looks like its going to be a very intresting story, and I adore your writing style!
Really seriously, I'm jelous!
i keep reading xD

Author's Response: wow. jelous of me. that makes me feel so special. especially since your writing style rocks.\r\nid like to me this cat of yours. awesome name as well, Sake. like the drink. i can\'t wait till im eighteen so i can see if tsunade has good taste in alcahol.\r\nXD



Reviewer: AllieChan Signed Liked
Date: 09/05/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

heh im such a nerd...I LOVE all thous old english novels, bronte sisters, jane austin, L H Larence lol and Mary Shelly she wrote the original frankenstein xD
Kiba is a jerk, although Hinata seems a little OOC? But honestly I like your hinata better... heh Hinata is too shy in the manga for my likeing.
Anyways I hope there is some hot Sasuke-being-badass-jerk action coming up! xD

Author's Response: i actually haven\'t read the bronte sisters but i know what their books are about. i really want to. its so bad of me because im distantly related to them somehow. i love jane austen, especially emma.\r\nHinata seemed like the classicy type.



Reviewer: AllieChan Signed Liked
Date: 09/05/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

this is difficult, i have to type with one hand....sake fell asleep on my hand...shes too cute to push away. well this is deffiantly getting more intricate, i love it! Oh yey two hands again!well, I deffinalty like the story plot, heh they have practically forced Hinata to live for them.
And Hiyashi, tsk.... I always knew he was evil.

Author's Response: i hate hiyashi. thats why im bashing him. also, i wanted to show that this rebellion had a darker side, so thats why i made them force her to join rather than her decide from her own free will.\r\n



Title: Itachi's Lady by Blue Eyed Fox
Rated: U Liked [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Itachi sees a woman and everytime he tries to get her he ends up getting hurt.

Disclaimer: Now you know d*mn well I don't own Naruto if I did I wouldn't be sitting on this website (sorry for being so mean...)
Category: Orphan
Characters: Rock Lee, Itachi Uchiha
Genres: Tragedy
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: No | Word count: 252 | Read count: 1700 [Report This]
Published: 07/05/08 | Updated: 07/05/08


Reviewer: AllieChan Signed
Date: 07/05/08 Title: Chapter 1: The LAdy first appears

im gonna guess he is like on drugs or something lol!
You are excepionally good at describption!! really REALLY good.
Although make your chappies longerrr!