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Member since: 13/12/09
Website: fanfictionwriters.webs.com
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Fanfictions
Cursed Saint is one of my main stories. It is my most popular story as well, and I hope you like it. It's about a new addition to Konoha, Ryu Sarutobi, the "adopted "grandson of Hiruzen Sarutobi.
Final Wish is my newest Naruto fanfiction. It is a response to my own Naruto challenge, The Nemuri Promise. A trailer has not been written for it, but will be eventually.
Retribution is a co-written story with me and Itoko-san (Shizake Uchiha). It is alternatively updated by the two of us. It will not have a preview/trailer written for it.
Will of the Dragon is my only non-Naruto story on here. It is a One Piece fanfiction, and it is also a SYOC/Joint story, depending on if it is here or if it is at fanfiction.net. Characters are still being accepted and probably will be throughout much of the story.
Bio Part
Why you are looking here is beyond me. Though since you're here, I may as well let you know who I am (writer wise. I don't feel like getting any stalkers, thank you very much). How about we just start with the basics and slowly build, huh?
Basics
User Name: Sasaui Uchiha. It's probably obvious, but you can just call me Sasaui (pronounced Saw-say-you. Yes, it's weird. That's because I made it up). The only other nickname I've gotten is Kawa-cha from the fabulous Yuumai (JubileeOfPuppies).
Likes: I enjoy walking and thinking. It's a strange hobby, I know, but I love it. I also enjoy reading all the amazing stories on this site. So yeah, a lot of them. I enjoy making new friends and talking to Silverwolf and DestinyGirl on Fanfictionwriters.webs.com, my site. They're the ones who are always on there, so I have fun talking to them. As is probably obvious, I love to write.
Dislikes: Cuss words. I can deal with them in writing since I can change them in my mind, but I hate hearing them out loud because I can't do it the same way. I also don't like either Orochimaru or the Joker. I can't figure out which is creepier. Orochimaru just creeps me out because of a nightmare I had about him and the Joker..... Well, if you need an explanation for him, you obviously have not seen him. I also don't like people who are cruel to others just because of their own selfish desires.
Hobbies: Well, like I said before, I have a strange hobby of walking while thinking. Another couple are reading and typing. One of my hobbies you don't know of but is slowly becoming my favorite is Karate. Since October 23, 2011, I have been a yellow belt. I can't remember when I started except that it was last year while I was in the eighth grade around the end of winter. I only remember it was then because we didn't have to run. Another hobby I have is drawing even if I'm not all that good at it. You'll see some of my drawings on the bios I have for my characters in Tainted Guardian.
Personality: Most importantly, I am a Pentecostal Christian. Most important thing about me. I'm a mostly nice person. The only time I say anything mean is when I'm joking. I'll give anything a chance if it catches my interest or if someone asks me to read it unless it's rated 18 for sexual reasons or if it's yaoi/yuri. Christian, remember? I'm also very protective, something that will be shown in my characters. Another thing that may reflect in my characters is how I hate violence and unnecessary pain. It's strange that I hate it yet I'm in Karate, huh? But that's only because I've more or less been raised fighting my older brother. I also believe it's wrong to hurt someone for hurting you. If you already know what it feels like, why be so cruel as to make them go through the same pain?
Favorites
Now we'll get into some random favorites of mine. Why? Well, because. If you don't want to know this information, nobody said you had to read. The number of favorites will vary and I doubt many of the things will be in order.
Favorite Sport: Karate
Favorite Color(s): White and Black
Favorite Food: Chicken
Favorite type of Food: Asian
Favorite Animal: Wolf
Favorite Quote: For God so loved the world, that He gave His only begotten Son, so whosoever believeth in Him should not perish, but have everlasting life.
Favorite Authors/Books:
1)Richelle Mead: Vampire Academy and Bloodlines series
2)Rick Riordan: Percy Jackson and the Olympians and The Heroes of Olympus series
3)Suzanne Collins: Hunger Games series
4) Kelly Armstrong: Darkest Powers series
5) J.K Rowling: Harry Potter series
Favorite Characters from Favorite Books
1) Rose from VA and Adrian from Bloodlines
2) Pery or Luke in PJatO and either Percy, Jason, or possibly Leo for THoO series
3) Peeta. Sorry, Katniss, but I like him better.
4) Derek, definitely Derek.
5) Sirius Black
Favorite Manga:
1) Naruto
2) Kenichi: The Strongest Disciple
3) Psyren
4) Breaker: New Waves
5) Breaker (the first of the manwha series. Manwha is Korean manga)
6) Dragon Quest Dai no Daiboken
7) Fairy Tail
8) Bleach
9) Rave Master
10) O-Parts Hunter
11) 1/2 Prince
12) Hunter x Hunter
13) Inuyasha
Favorite Characters from Favorite Manga:
1) Naruto, Hinata, Itachi, or Nagato. Yes, I'm stuck on all 4.
2)Kenichi
3)Ageha Yoshina
4) Shioon
5) Still Shioon
6) Dai
7) Natsu
8) Keisuke Urahara
9) Haru
10) Jio
11) Gui
12) Gon
13) Inuyasha
Favorite Anime (including movies):
1) Spirited Away
2) Princess Mononoke
3) Naruto
4) Kenichi: The Mightiest Disciple
5) Claymore
6) Does The Last Airbender count as Anime?
7) Yu-Gi-Oh
8) Dragon Ball (Z, GT)
Favorite Character from Favorite Anime:
1) Haku
2) Ashitaka
3) Again it's between Naruto, Hinata, Itachi, and Nagato
4) Kenichi
5) Rocky
6) Zuko
7) Between Yugi and Yusei
8) Either Goku, Trunks, or Vegeta
Favorite Video Games:
1) Kingdom Hearts
2) Pokemon: Black
3) .Hack
4) Final Fantasy 7
5) Chrono Cross
6) Final Fantasy: Crisis Core
Favorite Character from Favorite Game:
1) It's between Sora, Roxas, Axel, and Riku
2) I think I'd say N for this
3) Haseo
4) Cloud
5) Serge or Glenn
6) Zack
Favorite Bands:
1) Thousand Foot Krutch
2) Red
3) Pillar
4) Skillet
5) Story of the Year
6) Crossfade
7) Breaking Benjamin
8) Three Days Grace
9)Sr-71
10) Simple Plan
Well, I think that's all for bands.......
Favorite Song(s) by Favorite Bands:
1) Between The Part that Hurts the Most (Is You), Faith, Love, and Happiness, and Slow Bleed
2) Between Death of Me and Shadows I think......
3) Not Without A Fight
4) Hero
5) Just Close Your Eyes
6) Colors
7) I Will Not Bow
8) Never Too Late or Break
9) Tomorrow
10) Save You
Now I believe I am done with favorites. Sheesh, that was a long list.......
Writer
As a writer, and by that I do not mean fanfiction writer but an actual writer, I have written one complete story that keeps jumping around in page length for some recent. The first time I checked it was 400+ pages and then it was suddenly 600+ pages next time I checked. I have a million other ideas swirling around in my head, but I haven't written most of them mostly because I've been focusing on this one story. I've been trying to get a literacy agent and before long I may just have one. Fingers crossed and prays being sent.
Fanfiction
I didn't even know what fanfiction was until I was in the fifth grade. That's when I learned about it and it was by complete accident. Some kid I knew was showing around pictures of Naruto. I got a few of the pictures, and there was a link at the bottom - Narutoworld.com. Curious, I went to it.
Sadly, Narutoworld no longer has a part for fanfiction. When I first visited it, though, it did. I checked it out because I wanted to see what it was and that is where I first read fanfiction. I still remember the two that I actually read, too. Well, one title and another one just what it was about. The first one was Colors of Life and Death. It's funny that it's actually here on Tonfa now. The other was about a girl who had known Sasuke as a child returning to Konoha. It showed them bonding again and everything, until the end where Itachi returned and killed her. It was during this time I even found out about fanfiction.
Since the fanfiction part of Narutoworld was taken off, I began to search for a new fanfiction site. Somehow during this search, I found Tonfa. After reading a few of the fanfictions, mostly one done by an author maybe a few of you know known as WolfTeam000. She was a great author and is probably the main reason I stuck with fanfiction rather than got bored. I've recently refound her on Fanfiction.net writing Fairy Tail fanfiction because I got bored and looked at her fanfiction.net account and saw she had updated. Then my friends began to vary and more people began writing wonderful stories such as RowanRose's Kokoro Uchiha fanfic. It started way back when. Sheesh, I feel old yet I'm only 15.
My first ever fanfiction was similar to Never Too Late: a girl came to Konoha to help team 7 with the chuunin exams. The only thing was it was with Naruto and Sakura and Sasuke had actually run off to Orochimaru. The girl's name was still Kina, she had the same kekkei genkai, but she was working for Sasuke and had a demon in her. That's not how it is now. It was called Unknown Secret, which is also the name of Never Too Late's first arc.
After this fanfiction, I began to write a few more, most of which shall never see the light of day again. One that has stuck with me, though, since around when I first began as Bre2k8 is Tainted Guardian. Some may remember it as Sasaui Uchiha. It was inspired after reading a few SasuOc fanfics where the female of the group was another survivor. Primarily this was Crimson Lily's fanfic, Another Survivor: Uchiha Love Blossoms.
Now I am mostly where I am today, still working on stories I came up later on and even reviving a few of my ideas from back when I was Bre2k8. I've made some great friends and am very glad I joined Tonfa.
Fanfictionwriters.webs.com
This is my website. If anyone is just looking for a very weird place to hang out and be strange, this is a place you should go. Though I must warn you, it may be too strange and make you go insane.
YOUR STORY Reward
YOUR STORY is the best compliment I will give a person. If you get out of this world or something similar or weird (such as eight thumbs up), then you're really close to YOUR STORY. Or I just forget to tell you =P. Anyway, it's basically like saying that your story is just so great, it becomes an adjective itself that explains its awesomeness because no adjective can. Does that make sense?
Anyway, here's a list of the stories (that I remember) are on the YOUR STORY list:
Reincarnation of a Legend by Silverwofl213
Rekindle the Lost Flame by Silverwolf1213
Pirates of the Mist by Silverwolf1213
The White Rose by Silverwolf1213
Broken Wings by Destiny Girl
Beneath the Darkness by DestinyGirl
How to Adapt and Overcome by xXxTiNkXxX
Rotes Blut by BattyBigSister
She Was Beautiful by BattyBigSister
Child of Hex by JubileeOfPuppies
Endeavor by JubileeOfPuppies
Space Children by Firestar83
Fire Escape by DropDeadThenDance
The Naruto Games by Konan
Three Days by Silverwolf1213
Stereotype by DropDeadThenDance
Cygnus Olor by RowanRose
Reality Check by UzamakiMasumi
A Tale Best Told Dead by Silverwolf1213
The Path Each Takes series by Shizake Uchiha
Reverse This Curse by xXxTiNkXxX
The Princess and The Freeman by BrontesWorld and DropDeadThenDance
If I have told you that your story is YOUR STORY but forgot to mention it, please let me know.
So, now that my bio is finally ended, those who deemed it worthy enough to read, you can rest your eyes.
Rated: 15
[Reviews - 86]
Thanks to BattyBigSister for the wonderful banner!
Now, in the present, Madara Uchiha still lives and spreads a false peace among the world through his genjutsu. This ultimate tsukuyomi was meant to leave everyone in the world under the control of the immortal man.
However, a selected group of people, descendants of respectable shinobi, have been released from the genjutsu due to a twist of fate. Now it is up to this band of chosen people to somehow defeat Madara and break the genjutsu that has lasted for 100 years.
This group of people must somehow work together and rely on the two things they have in common: an unknown destiny and forgotten ancestries.
Category: OC-centric, Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Minor AU, General Fiction > Post-Naruto
Characters: Madara Uchiha, OC
Genres: Action/Adventure, Dark, Drama, General, Humor, Mystery
Warnings: AU, Dark
Challenges: , Joint Stories!
Challenge: , Joint Stories!
Series: None
Chapters: 8 | Completed: No | Word count: 30715 | Read count: 21112 [Report This]
Published: 18/05/11 | Updated: 20/03/12
Date: 22/03/12 Title: Chapter 8: Discoveries Bring the Truth
Haha. Of course it would be Riku to step forward and go ahead and introduce himself. And then Kohana being the nice one to try and comfort Takara. As for Karasu...... Well, she's creepy. I loved how Shin had to cough to get her to speak. I absolutely loved this and everyone in it. I was somewhat surprised at how blunt Megumi was with telling them about chakra. I guess I was expecting her to see what they'd do, and then she does that. Now I really want to know their reaction.
Kazuki...... *facepalm* I'm sorry, but there's nothing more I can say. I mean, he's a great character, but still. I think he'd be easy to trick. Just tell him he's handsome and he likes you. I thought Naomi was cute in a strange way, and I loved how Yoru stepped forward to talk to her. I don't know why, but I did. I thought it was funny how Rin reacted to Kioshi. As for Umiko, I laughed how she just found all of it funny.
This chapter overall was amazing. You're writing is as amazing as always, but I did see a few mistakes. It was mostly added words, but I can't remember where I saw them. It seems as if I'm trying to make you look =P. But it was amazing and it has me hooked. I'll be sad yet happy when you start updating PotM because I really want to see what happens with both your wonderful stories. Dang it. You're just too good at making awesome stories, unlike me (and do no argue because you'll be talking to a brick wall).
Author's Response: Well, Riku just seems to be that kinda guy to be brave enough to introduce himself first. It just seems like who he is. Actually, when I was writing the part with Kohana being kind to Takara, I could envision you being like that. I don't know why, when are you ever that sympathetic? ;) Nah, seriously, I wrote her like that for you, because I knew she would be like that. Haha, Karasu is always creepy, did you really expect any less from her? Shin and Karasu make such an interesting pair though; they're such opposites that everything they do is just funny. Oh yeah, that was my twist for this not-as-great chapter. Megumi telling everyone about chakra seems counterproductive, but I am going to be showing some interesting sides to her character.
I know what you mean. Kazuki will take any compliment, even from a science experiment. I like writing about Naomi, probably because her character is just so complex, I guess. Complex in a simple way, if that makes sense.... It actually doesn't, never mind :P Yoru is the only one on that team who I imagined could tolerate Naomi's strangeness though, so it makes him a very sweet person. Hehe, Rin would have a crush on Kioshi; the both of them do enjoy science and all ;D Umiko... she's just mean to laugh at everyone XP
Added words, huh? I think that's a new one for me. I guess I'll have to read through and edit. Which I always despise doing because then I just end up hating the whole chapter. I'm excited to be updating PotM because I've been waiting to finish it up for so long. Now I can finally complete it, though it will probably still take a while. I'm glad you still enjoyed this chapter, even though I didn't really like it. Thanks for such a nice review, Sasaui! I always love hearing your feedback. Thanks a bunch for reading and reviewing!.... And your stories are better than mine ;D
Rated: 15
[Reviews - 13]Sasuke is captured and sent to another dimension by Kakashi... the real world. Best friends, Akira, Takumi, and Midori are the ones to find him. What to do with the guy Midori's all fangirl over?
Category: Alternate Universe & Crossovers > High School Fics, Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Real World
Characters: OC, Sasuke Uchiha
Genres: Drama, General, Humor
Warnings: None
Challenges: , Let's Be Original
Challenge: , Let's Be Original
Series: None
Chapters: 8 | Completed: No | Word count: 7621 | Read count: 11248 [Report This]
Published: 18/05/11 | Updated: 30/05/11
Date: 24/05/11 Title: Chapter 1: Characters
First off, the characters sound interesting. I think the idea of changing how it usually is is interesting (which is why I done the challenge, too). I'll try to read it when I get the chance. Oh, and by the way I wanted to let you know that you can change your ocs rank. The start of the story has changed a bit.
Author's Response: Alright... I want my OC to be a chunin now. Thanks for letting me know.
Date: 01/06/11 Title: Chapter 2: Meeting
I can't help but feel sorry for Sasuke. As for what I'd do, probably the same thing Akira did. It would be cool, but sadly, it's impossible for a Naruto character to be real *sigh*. It's an awesome story and I'm glad I read it instead of just sending a random review like I'd planned. I'll read more whenever I can. Until then, I had a quick question about Kirako. Does he know any other types of jutsu besides mirror-related jutsu? Is there special things he can do with mirrors (besides how he'll be able to record what was seen through them later)?
Author's Response: Ah, well, I\'ll let you have free reign with that. He\'s from the hidden rain, so it\'d make sense for him to have water-related jutsu, but I\'ll leave it up to you.
Rated: U
[Reviews - 28]
Why does she hate me? What have I done? Why don't the kids play with me? Have I hurt them? Why do the adults look at me with those eyes?Where is my mom?
Where is my big brother?
Who is Orochimaru? P.S. Can anyone tell me how to fix my picture/banner thing? Or can everyone see it?
Category: OC-centric
Characters: Anko Mitarashi, Hidden Leaf Ninja, Kabuto Yakushi, Kakashi Hatake, Naruto Uzumaki, OC, Orochimaru, Tsunade
Genres: Action/Adventure, Dark, Drama, General
Warnings: Dark, Sexual Themes
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 11628 | Read count: 18205 [Report This]
Published: 19/05/11 | Updated: 13/08/11
Date: 11/08/11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: First of Tragedies
Wow. This is an amazing chapter. I have to ask what made you think of doing a fanfic with Orochimaru's son. And I, for one, have to shudder at the thought because thinking of Orochimaru's always creeps me out. If you couldn't tell, I'm not Orochimaru's number one fan. Saichiro seems great, though, even if he's only one. I can't wait to find out about these organization people. I also want to find out what Saichiro's life will be like since he's Orochimaru's son.
Author's Response: I have no idea where it came from. Probably seeing some fanfiction somewhere about Kabuto being Jiraya\'s illegitimate son. I\'m not gonna lie, though. I\'m not his number one fan either. Anyway, thanks!
Date: 11/08/11 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Planning Ahead
Oh man! So many questions. What curse was on the doctor? Who are the strange robed people? What is the Zura Village? Why Iwa? I must know! Well, if there's one thing I can say, it's that your story keeps me asking questions. It's amazing and great with detail. It's also very creative. I loved this chapter. You did an amazing job! Now I'm left wondering if the doctor is part of that group...... Sorry. That was just another question about this that popped into my mind.
Author's Response: Haha! Its fine! Your questions make me think myself, because I might forget something I meant to write.
Date: 15/08/11 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Yeah, it does suck that you lost your inspiration for Monster to Monster. Oh well. I guess that means you'll be writing this more then, huh? It was a great chapter. You did an amazing job. I expected the Anko and Saichiro thing, but I must admit, the whole Yamato thing did surprise me. That's just cruel, having his mom die and his brother and him being separated. Oh well, it is your story. And there would be no fun if writers were nice to their characters. I really want to see where this is heading. The organization is really interesting me, and was that Kyuubi during that one part? If so, I can't wait to see what's going to happen for that, either.
Date: 11/08/11 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Matters of Time
Ahh. Saichiro is so cute. Wait wait wait. WHAT! You're going to have Guren die? That just isn't right. First you make Saichiro his son, and now you're taking away his mother? That's just plain cruel. Then again, if you knew what I did to my ocs, you would probably say the same to me, so..... Okay, back to your story. It was amazing. Once again you've got me wondering about this Carnithia person and her worshipers. Then you throw in the fact that Anko can't have children. I think I see where's that parts going, but still, you're just putting everyone through sadness, aren't you? Either way, whether sad or happy, this was awesome. I loved every second of it. Great job!!!
Author's Response: Yep, I like putting people through hardships and stuff like that. Tragedy makes for a good story, methinks.
Date: 15/09/11 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Wow. That was absolutely amazing. First you begin with that wonderful, including both humor and add in that needed serious stuff. I really liked the end with Kakashi's distress over Anko coming back. After everything Orochimaru did to her, what's she going to do when she finds out she's his son's new mom. And then you threw in the parts with Kabuto and the worshiping people. Overall this was just amazing.
Date: 18/09/11 Title: Chapter 11: Epilogue
So that's why they wore purple...... But it's true that love can drive people to do things that otherwise they (hopefully) wouldn't. And then you add Yuukimaru becoming a Jinchuriki. Sheesh, you certainly know how to throw in good twists. I can't wait to see how that will effect the upcoming story. As for the sequel, I can't wait for it. I'll wait for it, though. Trust me on that.
Date: 18/09/11 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 The Finale Part 2!
Wow. Just wow. I can't even think of what to say. That part with Saichiro and everything left me speechless. It was just mind-blowing. I can't believe anyone could create something so awesome. You must have been really looking forward to writing that part. And you made my heart squeeze when he said Mommy. If Anko hadn't kept him after that, I would have gone into your story and slammed her head against a brick wall. And now Yuukimaru's gone. It's so sad. But he's right. Saichiro can (hopefully) take care of himself. And then the end had me thinking it was Orochimaru, but I could be completely and totally wrong in every single way. Either way, I so loved it and I can't wait until the sequel. I still have the epilogue, but still, after that, nothing.
Date: 18/09/11 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Finale Part 1!
I'm wanting to huge every single one of those purple weirdos at the same time I want to kick their butts. I had a huge smile on my face when I read the last line. And the line before that had me so.... Well, at first freaked because of the part of them interfering with her prey. But then the part about her affection for Orochimaru completely got rid of that freaked-out part of me. This chapter was just down right amazing. You nailed Anko's..... well, to me, sadistic nature, and then showed a part of her that people rarely ever see. I just absolutely loved it.
Date: 11/08/11 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Interlude
Oh great. Now there lunatic that took Orochimaru's place has joined the story. I can't wait to see how this plays out. The fact he has a child of his own now is going to be interesting. So wouldn't he and Saichiro be partly brothers since Orochimaru's DNA is in Kabuto? And wait, immortal human? How'd he pull that one off? Man, more questions!
Haha. You did that first scene perfectly. It seems like how things in a normal life would really go. And once again, Saichiro was adorable!!!
Author's Response: They\'re kinda brothers... but... I can\'t say anymore or else I\'ll ruin the plot for the final story in the series. I really wish I could tell you the answers to your questions, but if I did I\'d pretty much spoil a lot of it! Thanks for the reviews!
Date: 18/09/11 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8(interlude)
Have you not done enough to Saichiro? And people say I'm mean to my ocs. Well, never mind, since, well, I can't say. I guess I am meaner, even though nobody knows why as of now....... Sorry, I was rambling a bit. This chapter was amazing. Anko's reaction exactly as people would expect, but then you make it surprising by throwing in the part about her killed a 4 year old. And I really hope that either Yuukimaru doesn't have to leave or he at least gets to say goodbye.
Date: 18/09/11 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
...... Well, I found out her reaction. It was realistic, but dang, was she angry. It kinda makes me scared about what will happen to him. It's the same thing they did with Naruto. Hating him because of something he couldn't control (such as being a Jinchuuriki. You can't control your blood any easier). And then you have them taking away Yuukimaru! Are you serious? Just how cruel can you be to him when he's only 4. Either way, I loved it. This chapter was amazing despite its cruelness toward Saichiro. Now I can't wait to see what will happen with both Saichiro and becoming part of Kakashi and Anko's family or if Yuukimaru will be sent away. And then you have that ending. I mean, seriously, you make in impossible not to read on with that being the end of the chapter.
Rated: 15
[Reviews - 66]The Great Shinobi Nations have a problem on their hands as the Sacred Relics begin to disappear from their shrines. If all are combined together a great power will be unleashed.
No one expected this event to ever occur, but now it has. It is time for Naruto, his friends, and new comers to join forces and protect the Sacred Relics.
Enter Naruto's world as character in my story and help save it from the darkness.
Category: OC-centric, Het Romance > Fluff, Het Romance > Angst, General Fiction > Naruto Shippuuden, Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Minor AU
Characters: All
Genres: Action/Adventure, Fantasy, General, Humor, Mystery, Romance
Warnings: None
Challenges: , Joint Stories!
Challenge: , Joint Stories!
Series: None
Chapters: 11 | Completed: No | Word count: 19332 | Read count: 15769 [Report This]
Published: 21/05/11 | Updated: 19/06/11
Date: 13/06/11 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter Eight
=) The whole end part had me smiling. He truly is like Jack. I keep picturing him as a ninja jack before I realize he's not actually Jack.... Yeah, you just do him that well. I can't wait to read more of this. And, since Krina almost never gets on, I'll be the one to tell you Hikaru is fabulous. You're doing amazing with him. Please write more soon, cvhoneybee. You're doing an outstanding job!
Author's Response: Thank you very much, I\'m trying to update all my stories ar much as possible.
Date: 19/06/11 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter Nine
Just give me a second. I really can't think of any word that can describe this chapter...... Yeah, there's no word in the human dictionary. I guess I'd say "THAT WAS SO AMAZINGLY AWESOME!" times 20. Yeah, I don't think there's any word for that....... I loved this chapter. I really liked your fighting scenes. I always love writing those (as you can probably tell from all the fighting scenes so far in Darkness Unleashed.....) And I saw you joined my site. Thanks. Your site, while I'm talking about sites, is awesome. Well, everything you do seems awesome, so of course that's awesome.
By the way, you're doing an awesome job with Tori. I absolutely love what you've done with her. I wonder what will happen if and/or when they find out that she's conflicted like she is.
Author's Response: I\'m glad I am portraying your character well, sometimes it gets confusing with how many I have. But if the owners of the characters are satisfied it puts me at ease.
Date: 29/05/11 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Five
Yes, the chapter was short, but that didn't make the awesomeness any less there. I loved this chapter. I can't wait to read more. You have to write more soon or I may just die with anticipation. You're story is just that freaking awesome. Huh. I use awesome a lot.....
Date: 22/05/11 Title: Chapter 1: Become Apart Of It
Not sure if should be on good or bad side:
Name: Tori Senshiro
Gender: Female
Age: 16
Rank: Chunin
Village: Leaf Village
Romance: Kiba
(Belongs to Lala-Mot of deviantart, incase I need a disclaimer for this)
If the picture doesn't show like it's been recently for me, sorry.
Appearance: She looks like the middle one, but she also has a sword.
Brief history: She lived in the land of waves but moved to the Leaf because their parents opened a repair shop there to fix anything. She had a mostly normal childhood. She went to the academy and was about the middle of the class. She prefers to use taijutsu and weapons. Shortly before she graduated, her mother and father died during a terrible fire in their repair shop. After that she and her brother became poor. The reason she's torn is because her brother, one of her favorite people in the world, has grown ill. I'm not sure if they actually can, but she believes the relics can heal him. She wants to get them back, but at times she wants to join the others so she can use its power.
Kekkei Genkai: She has a Storm chakra nature
Special abilities: She's great at combining her Storm chakra with her sword attacks.
Personality: She's a nice person unless you talk about her parents or brother. Then she starts to ignore you for a long time. She's slightly shy, but when she get to know you, she can be pretty talkative. She can be super smart at times, but at other times she's clueless about things. Despite how suckish her life is, she tries to stay up beat and not show the pain that's going on within her.
Flaws: Her Storm chakra tends to wear her out and she can't always control it. She tries to use either lightning or water mostly because of it, but she doesn't know any strong jutsus for those chakra natures. She's also very gullible.
If there's any problems with her, tell me and I'll fix it.
Author's Response: I\'m excited for this. I looked at the image and it\'s all good. She fits the battle between good and evil very well, so this should be good. Can\'t wait to start writing about her =)
Date: 22/05/11 Title: Chapter 1: Become Apart Of It
The stupid picture didn't show, so here's the link.
http://lala-mot.deviantart.com/art/Naruto-OC-Lala-160841890
Date: 12/06/11 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter Seven
That was amazing. No, correction, this whole story is amazing. It's so original and awesome. You do the characters as perfectly as if they were your own. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Many thanks =D
Date: 23/05/11 Title: Chapter 2: Prologue
First off, that was freaking amazing. I loved it. It was short but filled with tension. I kept wondering what the next person would say. This chapter makes me hungry for more from the get go. Second, what did the first part of Megumi's background mean and who is the other person with her. I might be missing something that's right in front of me, and I do that a lot. So it's my bad if I did.
Date: 23/05/11 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter One
Okay, just so I know for certain, what's up with Sasuke and Itachi being at the Leaf? Other than that, everything was perfect to me story wise. I hate saying I saw mistakes, but I did. They were mainly grammatical mistakes at the end. I hate saying that because if it wasn't for that, the chapter would be absolutely perfect. I can't wait to read more of it. Please post more soon. Oh, and thanks for sending in a character, since I forgot to say so before!
Author's Response: I saw the mistakes in in, I was talking to someone while I was writing, so I wasn\'t completely focused, but I\'ll be fixing them right after I write this response. =)\r\n\r\nThis is a bit of an alternate story from the anime, this is kinda like a what if Itachi and Sasuke came back and what if all these characters didn\'t die...it\'s an alternate ending kind of thing. Hope that makes sense.\r\n\r\nAlso I tried to explain my character better. Anyways thanks for the comments, hope you enjoy the rest of this story!
Date: 23/05/11 Title: Chapter 1: Become Apart Of It
Well, I've been forgetting a lot of things this week, including another question. In the site you sent me for your character, it shows a lot of characters, so which one is her?
Date: 24/05/11 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Two
That was just plain amazing. I love the way you introduce all of the characters. It's fantastic. I only hope I can do a job as good as you. It's amazing. After seeing the amazing job you're doing with everyone else's characters, I can't wait for mine to introduced.
Date: 07/06/11 Title: Chapter 1: Become Apart Of It
And keep in mind it can't be your own oc.