Well, I decided to check this out. One is because I thought the ones on the first chapter are pretty cool. Two, Sky-chan wanted me to tell you you can go ahead and make a general if you want. Even if she gets more than six, she knows how to fit them all together anyway.

Author's Response: Cool enough to do? *hint hint* \r\n\r\nNo, probably not. But at least I know people are looking at this. Thanks.

It's a good thing that I'm not lactose intolerant, because I ate the cheese a couple times it was so good. I loved it. This chapter was just so hilarious. I like the little added Konohamaru at the end. I bet he feels special now. Sigh. Poor Konohamaru is so ignored. Maybe Haku can comfort him. Sorry, I'm in a weird mood today. This was awesome, though. I loved the moral. It puts some seriousness to the funny stuff.

Author's Response: yoyoyo, yeh, i think weird moods are da bomb, cause they are always the best!!! i like your review, it made me laugh a bunch XD\r\nXd

I want to say poor Sasuke, but I can't. Instead I feel bad for Haku because it was his part that made him faint. Now he'll blame himself. I hope that Sasuke has fun in the therapy place. Maybe he'll see Orochimaru, because I'm sure that guy is crazy. Then again, it was Orochimaru who scarred him the most..... Anyway, this thing had me laughing my head off. Your stuff is just plain hilarious.

Author's Response: yoyoyo, yeh, sasuke totally deserved it tho for being such a total dumb ass XDXDXD yeh, i\'d fell bad for haku too, i have no sympathy for any of these stupid uchahs...hahahahah...has....ha.\r\nAHHAHAHHAHAHHAH!!\r\n^don\'t ask, i duunno what i\'m doing...\r\n~~~Steff Xd

I'd yell at you for even thinking it was terrible, but then you'd come back around and say I do the same thing....... Why does it seem like I always do this: Okay, and now to the awesomeness that is your story.

Oh man, where do I start? Well, I guess the beginning is as good a start as any, huh? It was, to put it simple, HILARIOUS!!!! I absolutely loved it! The way Temari acted was so understandable. Ino is a little hard to put up with =D, and I, for one, hope that Ino doesn't start helping because, well...... Yeah, that would be hectic. Two bossy girls against Temari...... Don't torture her yet, okay? Okay, it would be pretty funny. I hope she has better luck with Hinata and Tenten.

And what happened with Shikamaru was equally, if not more, hilarious. I absolutely loved it! They were all in character (including the ladies in the previous part of the story), and I'm guessing it's just taking them time to process it if Chouji hasn't said anything yet. That's just what I think is why you didn't add it. Or, well, it was, until I read your responses to the other reviews =P. And I loved the part where Chouji yelled at Naruto not to talk with food in his mouth when he was doing the exact same thing. That was genius. And I was laughing like crazy (on the inside so nobody stared at me) when I saw their respective reactions to the news. I'm seriously wondering who started the rumor and what they'll do when they get their hands on him/her. And I liked his observation at the end. And I'm just curious because of it - Is Lee going to be among the groomsmen? If so, yeah, that'll probably be as hectic as Ino was, though I could be wrong.

Author's Response: Haha, so true. Our relationship must include a lot of hypocrisy, I believe ;) Hehe, I\'m glad you thought it was funny. That\'s what I was aiming for, because in all honesty, it gets a little emotional and dramatic in the next chapter :P I\'m glad you think the characters were in character, as I was afraid I made them all a bit too ridiculous (such as Temari acting like a child or something). Haha, if both Ino and Sakura were helping Temari, she would be so overwhelmed, it\'d be hilarious. You know, I\'m making Temari and Shikamaru be married to one another; I think I\'m way passed the point of torture already ;) Heehee, I\'m happy you also liked the guys together. Oh, I guess you can look at the Chouji thing like that. It might have been a semi-reason, but not one I initially thought of; that definitely works though, nice thinking ;) Haha, after careful debate, I decided to add the discovery of the rumor starter in the story (as I hadn\'t planned on it too much), but that\'ll come later. Eh, I don\'t know about Lee, but I don\'t think so, honestly.... Anyways, thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I\'m always happy to receive your positive feedback! You\'re awesome, Sasaui!

I finally got to it, and you'd think after all that time, I'd be prepared for your awesomeness. But I wasn't. You completely blew me away. I one hundred percent loved this. It was so mind-blowing. You make it so hilarious yet at the same time you don't make it be too hilarious it's unrealistic.

First of about her being a fan-girl: She wasn't. She acted really good, barely even truly showing her feelings except with the occasional blush.

Now to all the funny parts: I lost count of how many times I laughed. But that's not all it was. It was also very interesting and kept me asking questions, since I don't want you to think all I cared about was the humor in it. Though the part with her shoving Kiba under her bed and then the jealousy from Cookie. Poor dog. She'll be squashed by Akamaru. And then the "Metal monster" was great, and I had to laugh when he stuck his head out the window. I'm starting to wonder whose the dog- Kiba or Akamaru. Well, Kasumi did say that Akamaru had a nice dog (or something similar to that). I would say that I think you're making Alicia *cough Demon Fox cough* seem the way most little sisters act (which isn't a good thing because it leads to angering them, I think), but then I saw that she said you were doing just fine with her. Does she really blackmail you that much? If so, give her a high-five for me =D. As for the brain freeze thing, I HATE THOSE!!! Why didn't you warn me as well? Sheesh, Kiba's right? What kinda friend are you? Okay, now on to the serious part of that review. The intensity of his anger there was something that I enjoyed, because it showed that he wasn't all fluffy and happy just from hanging out with them for a little while. And the Anna glare thing was something I found amusing. And tell Adrianna I applaud her for making Kiba apologize twice. She deserves some chocolate since Alicia now has her entire stash.

Author's Response: Haha, I\'m glad you finally found time to read this. Awesomeness? Pfft, alright, whatever you say... I do appreciate the fact that you said it wasn\'t too hilarious that it was unrealistic; as I often say, I\'m trying to keep this real, it\'s my main goal for this story. Oh, well I\'m glad you don\'t think Adrianna was a fan girl, that\'s always reassuring to know, especially with this story. I may have to tune it down on the blushing, as I\'m worried I make her blush too much. Hehe, I\'m glad this chapter was able to make you laugh. Interesting and kept you asking questions? Bonus points, heck yeah! Heehee, Kiba being pushed under the bed and the jealous Cookie were some of my favorite parts, because it was so funny XD Aha, the metal monster was also one of my crowd pleasers, I tried to keep people interested during the car scene. Hmm, you would think little sisters would be angry with the way they are portrayed... ha, not my sister. She takes pride in being evil, and she has told me that she wants to be portrayed as such. Well, the blackmailing part is a little extreme, but then again, I\'ve never had to keep an anime guy a secret from my parents, so this may very well be an accurate portrayal of Demon Fox ;) I\'m sorry I didn\'t warn you about the brain freeze! I had thought I should, but I didn\'t want to spoil it for you. Hmm, I get what you mean about Kiba being fluffy and happy and all that; even though I love him, I identify his personality flaws: his temper. So I had to keep that close to accurate. Haha, the Anna Glare actually exists, it\'s pretty funny when you see the reactions of others in real life XD Adrianna is happy that you acknowledged her skill in getting Kiba to apologize twice. I would give her some chocolate, but I\'m on a chocolate crave right now and really need some for myself.... Anyways, I\'m glad you enjoyed this! It\'s always nice to know that you like my stories! Thank you very much for the positive review, Sasaui, you\'re amazing!

It hurts! It freaking hurts! You're making me laugh too hard, Silverwolf. This was absolutely hilarious. I loved it. There was absolutely nothing to love about this, especially not with the characters. Kiba's in character and if you're worried about Anna acting like a fangirl, she's not. She's doing just fine. I can't wait to read about what the Naruto characters think and are doing.

As for what's going on in this chapter, I'd have to say my favorite part was the pool scene. I'm glad that Kiba had that little talk with Alicia before hand. Maybe now Anna won't be tortured as much. Anyway, you said Anna was somewhat based off you, and torturing you is my job (yeah, I just had to add that part). Haha. Anna was thrown in the pool. I have to admit, that's my favorite part. I think Kiba and Adrianna's relationship is hilarious. They're so cute together (although they're not actually together together, but that's not the kind of together I mean and.... I'll just stop rambling now) but there's still that silly kid stuff between them. I can't wait to see how they're relationship will progress in the future. Overall this was a mind blowing chapter. So good, in fact, I can't stop myself from doing this:




Sheesh. All but one of the stories (as in the ones you're working on) are on the YOUR STORY list. You're just too good, Silverwolf.

Author's Response: Oh my gosh, my chapter was painful to read!.... Oh wait.... oh, haha, you\'re hurt from laughing. Well in that case, I meant to do that ;) Ah, I\'m always happy when you reassure me about the characters. The fact that Kiba is in character and Anna is not a fangirl makes me very happy. Oh, you\'ll just have to wait and see how the Naruto characters are doing without Kiba. It should be rather interesting, if what I plan works out nicely.

I figured you\'d enjoy the pool scene. That\'s so like you. I\'m also glad you liked the little talk between Kiba and Alicia, it needed to be done, but I can\'t guarantee she\'ll be nicer to her sister. She might only just cool it down on the blackmailing, but her other forms of mischief might not be dampened so easily ;D Yeah, you would like Anna being thrown in the pool, you\'re just mean like that. I\'m glad you like Kiba and Adrianna together, I\'m trying to make them... friends, I guess you could say, before any together-togetherness happens. And... as you can see, the friend thing is just them acting like kids.

I\'m so happy you liked this chapter, thank you so much, Sasaui! And oh my gosh, a fourth story with the YOUR STORY award... I think I have achieved total happiness for the rest of the year. Thank you so much for your praise, I really appreciate it. You\'re an awesome reader and reviewer, thanks a lot! You\'re amazing!

I'm laughing my head off right now. This is freaking hilarious. I love it. I never thought someone could make the Akatsuki funny, but I was dead wrong. Great job!

Author's Response: Oh no! Now I killed you!?! OHMIGOSH!! SOMEONE GET A MEDICAL NIN!!! SAKURA!! GET YOUR PINK ASS OVER HERE AND BE USEFUL FOR ONCE!!!\r\nWhew. *Wipes sweat off of brow* that was a close one. Be more careful in the future! *Scolds*

Yeah, what's og mean? Just curious. It's as funny as the others. I kept me laughing until the last second. I must say, you did an excellent job, SincereGlomp.

Author's Response: Well Mr. Uchiha-san, I could tell you about og, but first, why not divulge into math theories? If og was spelt with \'0g\' as opposed to \'og\', the zero could represent nothingness. However, the same is to say that the zero means the universe. The zero is all, one, and nothing. But if the zero is one, it could be both 2x=2 or 2/2 because both produce one, which we are now saying is zero, and.... sorry about that. My brain was acting funny again. Don\'t worry though, I gave it the same treatment as when you can\'t get the dishwasher to work: I kicked my head. it wasn\'t easy, but by George, I think I dun it!!\r\nWhat were we saying?

Okay, I've been wondering this for a long time - When does this take place? At first I thought it was the first Kage conference, but then you added the part about him and Sasuke's confrontation. Is there another one right before the war? No, that can't be right because Naruto wouldn't be there then *sigh* I'm so confused. But don't think that it's your fault. Everyone but me seems to understand.

On to the awesomeness that is your story: HOLY FLYING CHOCOLATE MONKEYS!!! That was just plain awesome. You're writing is absolutely out of this world it's so awesome. I love it. You've really got me curious with Nee-san, though. I can't wait to see what that's all about. I can't wait to find out what had led the ninja of to Seishingakure react like they did. It was purely amazing, BigSis. Just awesome.

Author's Response: No, don\'t worry about it. It\'s a really good question. This story happens at an unidentified point during a lull in the 4th Shinobi War, after the current flurry of battles. Think of it as like a big filler arc between one part of the war and the next.
So this whole story does actually hinge on the assumption that there will be a suitable point for insertion later on in Naruto\'s current storyline, which I am beginning to wonder about, or it will all end up AU - but hey, I knew I was taking that risk when I started writing (nearly a year ago now, when the manga was still sorting out the first Kage conference and the secrets of Naruto\'s birth. Obviously that was much too soon for what I had in mind, so I had to fudge it a little based on what I thought might happen).

I\'m glad you liked the story so far. I worked so hard on it and, seeing people enjoy it as much as you and SilverWolf seem to, just makes me feel like there really was a point to all of that, you know? ;0)

Hahaha. Naruto and his ramen. It's just plain hilarious if you ask me. Once again, the description in this is amazing. It's impossible not to see it as a movie in your head. Do I tell you that too much? Either way, it's true. This was amazing, and I can't wait to get the chance to read more. Your story gets more and more addictive the more my brain starts to adjust.

Author's Response: Well, helping you visualize what’s happening is something I aim for when I write, so I’m always relieved when you say things like that. I’m really glad you found this so enjoyable. It’s really rewarding to have someone say such nice things. Thank you!

Well, I sure did find out who Nee-san is. I didn't expect her to be Ren's sister. So, she works in the castle. That explains why she's there. And does Riko treat everyone like that, or does he just not like Nee-san?

Anyway, I loved this chapter. Nee-san Is such a great character. Though now I am curious to what Ren was going to say...... Once again, amazing description. I absolutely love everything about it. Eight thumbs up, BigSis-chan!

Author's Response: Hmm... I think that question is answered in 4.e... Well, the Riko thing that is, if you\'re still confused after that: I\'ll explain. Ren was more or less going to continue scolding his sister, unless you meant the bit about her not using her chakra, which we get back to in ... I think it\'s the beginning of Chapter 6, I\'m afraid, so you\'ll just have to wait.

I\'m glad you like Nee-san. She\'s hard work to write at times, but she was quite popular at this point in the story. And thank you for my eight thumbs up. Yay! I wrote a good installment. (Makes a change for the early part of this story... Some of it I re-read and cringe...)

I've probably said it enough, but like with your drawings and how amazing they are, I have to say you're amazing. You continue to keep them in character, fitting in your own oc perfectly and describing him so well it's as if he's a real person standing right in front of me. Great job, BigSis. I love this story. Like many other stories I read on here, this story should be illegal it's so amazingly good.

Author's Response: Thanks Sasaui! You\'re pretty damn good yourself. =0D

Wait a ticket. So was the Nee-san thing just a dream? Oh man, I want answers. I really really want answers. Too bad I need to sleep. I might get another chapter in today (I'm also reading two other stories right now and going back and forth between the three). This chapter was awesome. You keep the characters in character so well it's as if they're your ocs. I think I've already said that before, but it's just so true! I've never seen anyone who could adapt so easily to other people's creations. It's just mind blowing. I still haven't found someone with eight thumbs, but I still give you eight thumbs up!

Author's Response: Well, you could always give me two thumbs up four times, I suppose, if you still think it\'s worth it? I just hope it makes more sense as you continue reading... *worried*