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Angelic Secrets by DawnxAingeal

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Chapter notes: This is the first chapter of my story, I do not own Naruto or the characters in it (aside from my OC's of course). I also do not own the storyline that I'll be touching base on, after a little bit I'll really be able to take off from the main storyline and use my own
Alai's POV

Alai: *Thinking* "I've been walking for 4 days straight and I'm so exhausted but after a non-stop journey, I think I'm finally getting close."

-You walk through the dense and seemingly endless forest for hours more after your hopeful thought. As you make your way through the trees you spot something, it looks like a huge gate.-

Alai: "I'm here... Finally!"

-You somehow find the energy you need to run to the gate where you rushed to a stop, as the gaurds stood in your way, they stared at you with such authority.-

Guard: "State your business in Konoha!"

Alai: "I'm here to talk to your leader, to see if I can live here."

Guard: "We will have someone escort you to our lord Hokage's office

Alai: "Thank you"

-You bow your head to the guards as you wait for someone to come along to bring you to your destination. Soon enough another guard comes by and with you, makes his way to the Hokage's office, you take this opportunity to look around the village, there's plenty of shops with cheerful people walking by. You spot one kid in particular, who seems to obviously stand out, A blond spiky haired kid in a bright orange jumpsuit is causing quite a commotion, he's running from what appears to be more guards, the one escorting you suddenly stops, because of his sudden stop you run into him, you look the direction that he is staring at to see a mountain with faces carved into the side of it, but they look goofy because it looked like someone painted graffity all on the faces, you guessed it was the kid running that did it, so as the guard stood in shock, you decided to help, you casually walked forward as the blond kid ran towards you, you walked close enough next to him so you could trip him without anyone noticing. The kid fell on his face as the the other guards caught up.-

Guard 1: "Naruto your in big trouble now, wait until we get you to the Hokage's office again."

Guard 2: "Why don't you stop with all this nonsense."

Alai: "Oh, um can I come with you?"

Guard 1: "Sorry girl, this is official Konoha business."

Alai: "no um, I mean I'm supposed to go to the hokage's office to talk about moving here, and uh...

-You turn your head to look at your escort as the other guard does the same, He's still in shock, the guard holding the blond kid agree's to take you along as they bring that Kid to the Hokage's office, surprisingly someone walks beside you and begins to speak.-

???: "Nice job, tripping Naruto like that..."

Alai: "How did you know I tripped him?"

???: "I saw your foot go up at the last second and trip him, then you moved away fast so he couldn't see you...I'm Neji."

Alai: "Nice to meet you Neji, and yeah, but if he did that *points to the mountain* then I think he should be caught *giggles* oh right, I'm Alai *shakes Neji's hand*, I'm sorry but I have to catch up to them."

-You ran to catch up with the guards and that "Naruto" kid. When you suddenly see a raven haired boy run around the corner and cut the guards off, he continued running as fast as he could, he bumps into you almost knocking you to the ground, he looks back at you as he continues running and turns the corner. As you turn your head back in the direction of the guards you noticed they were running to the other side of the street, you were very confused but soon saw why, a whole group of girls came trampling down the street, you barely jumped out of the way. As they ran by the guards ask as we begin walking again.-

Guard 1: "Hey! are you ok?"

Alai: "I'll be fine, thank you."

Guard 2: "Poor kid, he's always being chased by those girls."

Alai: "Yeah...it's tough, being like him."

Guard 1: "Had that problem in your old village, lots of fan boys?"

Alai: "um, yeah, and another reason too, but I'd rather not say."

-You and the guards continue your conversation and continue walking, in about another 10 minutes you arrive at the Hokage's office, of course you had to wait because the lord Hokage had to take care of Naruto. Eventually you saw the doors open and out came that kid, he just kind of smiled and nodded, he moved out of the way and watched you go into the room.-
Chapter end notes: Sorry if these are short, because I have the other chapters, theres no way I can add without messing up the other chapters, or my layout of the story, msg me
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