Reviews For TO SHATTER THE WORLD (Infinite Battle-Mix)
Name: 9tailedfoxrox (Signed) · Date: 14/12/10 - 04:09 pm · For: Chapter 6: Of Missing-nin And Bad Dreams
HOLY CRAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Very Cool!
Name: Naruke45 (Signed) · Date: 11/08/10 - 04:23 pm · For: Chapter 1: Death And Homecoming
no, no, im sorry, I dont mean that at all, lol, don't even remember this, I just like writing but don't have much of an imagination, but love to write, and wants to edit, so sorry, you dont need one lol
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 27/06/10 - 01:03 am · For: Chapter 1: Death And Homecoming
Also I dig what you're saying, it's just different to what I've read and thought that's all. I mean, the thought has come to mind Naruto being deemed a threat and all just never played ont the factor of what could happen to Naruto if he 'snapped'. You dig?
Author's Response: EXACTLY. Exactly What I'm Exploring. I Mean, Everyone Snaps Temporarily, Here And There. But What If This Wan't Just Temporary. What If Someone Of Naruto's Power "Changed?" Possibly Permenantly? Then Naruto, With His True Power, His Power To "Save" (Mental/Emotional) Would Step In, Right? But What If The Person Who Snapped And Changed Was Naruto? Who Would Save Him? Could He Be Saved? Welcome To My Fanfic, To Shatter The World. Let's Explore ;)
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 27/06/10 - 01:01 am · For: Chapter 1: Death And Homecoming
........scary. I like the POVs they suit the characters very well. Gaara's a little OC to me but, mah. I don't really see a problem with the chapter in the lines of it's contents so, well thumbs up to you mate.
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 26/06/10 - 12:20 am · For: Chapter 6: Of Missing-nin And Bad Dreams
hmm....the chapter seemed a little too short in explaining things. First off I'm fine with the pov changes, the problem is that Ino's is well...vague and seemingly jumpy. I like that there's character depth to it but, I feel more could be added as in what she felt before the suppose Sakura incounter. Perhaps so more details on the part where Ino thinks it's truly Sakura, (just a little more, most of is okay)
Naruto's seems entirely different from his usual personality. Of course I understand that's the point from the sadden death of Sakura but, still....it just seems a huge switch in personality but, I will give the benifit of the doubt to your style and read on to give a firm opinion on the idea. I don't have quarrels with the context of the part itself just that it seems very odd that Naruto would change so drasticly. In all in all, I would say the chapter was some what decent.
Author's Response: You May Be Right About Ino's POV But It's Following Her State Of Mind. And Anyway, It's Only A Dream, Where People Become Susceptible To Even The Most Wildest Concepts. She Doesn't Want To Believe Sakura's Death And Is Seriously Depressed Over The Very Idea, So To See Sakura Alive... Get It?rnrnAnd As Far As Naruto, The Whole Point Of The Story Is The Drastic Personality Change. Naruto's Life Has Always Been Hard, I Re-solidified That Fact With One Of Tsunadae's POV. Things Are Crazy Right Now, And For Sasuke To Be The One To Kill Sakura Snaps Something In Him. This Story Is About That Change And Its Effects On The World, Alongside Konoha's Biggest Desicion And Obstacle: Saving Naruto.... Or Killing Him? rnrnIt's All A Ripple Effect Starting At The Death Of Sakura (His Love) At The Hands Of Sasuke (Brother/Best Friend/Rival).rnrnYou Still With me?
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 29/04/10 - 09:38 pm · For: Chapter 5: Nightmares And Plans Made
nicely done. i can very feel for the shinobi of konoha on losing Naruto; i do like Tsunade's plan, but I'm a little more curious on how everyone is going to feel. ON a more personal life lik wat u did with Kakashi. Any who, keep the good work up!
Name: Merciless Rain (Signed) · Date: 25/04/10 - 03:34 pm · For: Chapter 4: After Thoughts And After Effects
I Managed To Depress Myself With This Chapter, But Onwards Forwards Will Write.
Name: Rowanrose (Signed) · Date: 17/04/10 - 10:05 pm · For: Chapter 1: Death And Homecoming
Wow.
Author's Response: Keep Reading And Reviewing Please!! Wow Is Nice An All, But It Doesn't Really Say Much, But Thank You!
Name: Naruke45 (Signed) · Date: 15/04/10 - 05:20 pm · For: Chapter 4: After Thoughts And After Effects
this was great, but do you need an editor? i have nno experience but hey, you've gotta start somewhere :), either way, both good and sad
Author's Response: What makes You Think I Need An Editor.
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 22/01/10 - 08:13 pm · For: Chapter 4: After Thoughts And After Effects
-_- oh dear the village is in desaray i may say. i could see how this would be of such big issues-i hope that Naruto though comes to....or the world will never truly be the same as before. Good job on the chaos!
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 19/01/10 - 08:02 pm · For: Chapter 3: Battle 1 (Infinite Lost)
Oo ooooo poor naruto and kakashi; naruto leaving the village?! thts wen things hav truly ben at ther worst
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 19/01/10 - 07:48 pm · For: Chapter 3: Battle 1 (Infinite Lost)
Oo; this is really going sour...naruto is deflecting? heaven help them.
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 17/01/10 - 02:23 pm · For: Chapter 2: Funerals And Departures
....its short but i feel the feelings behind it somewhat ....i think though you should add just a little more to it...not too much but just a little more to give it more umf!
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 16/01/10 - 06:17 pm · For: Chapter 1: Death And Homecoming
oh dear....this really throws a reader in the mist of things; i can practically feel the dread, the sorrow and pain there....dont stop!