Reviews For Feral Dreams
Name: dragonfire (Signed) · Date: 23/08/10 - 08:28 am · For: 11 - A step in the right direction
keep going. it is getting ecsiting. bear with me on the spelling.
Name: Ardisaur_rawr (Signed) · Date: 15/05/10 - 01:36 pm · For: 11 - A step in the right direction
Yay! They're finally inside the facility!
Neji and Sasuke are totally pwned those unfortunate people! lol. It was awesomely gruesome.
Poor Hinata! She's the only one that had trouble getting in. lol. It's okay though!!
Author's Response: I thought the anticlimax of her entry would be amusing :)rnThanks for continuing to read!
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 15/05/10 - 08:57 am · For: 11 - A step in the right direction
Well it was some what more dificult to image some of things you described in the chapter but, it was well written. I feel that the plot is going in a good direction and it's very nice to see a different story be written with such style and tecinque. Nicely done~the grammar is perfect and I see no spelling errors.
Author's Response: As I said, I had some trouble writing this chapter so it makes sense that I didn't get the image across as well as I may have wanted to. Thanks for the review :)
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 03/03/10 - 10:04 pm · For: 10 - The beginning of the end
well i think hinata is very amusing here and i find her leadership very interesting; good job and keep up the good work!
Name: Ardisaur_rawr (Signed) · Date: 03/03/10 - 08:12 pm · For: 10 - The beginning of the end
Kazan is so cute!
I love hedgehogs... I used to own one. We named is Sonic. Go figure! hahaha
Oh well, awesome, awesome! Hinata is a total hardass and I love it! Well, I love Hinata anyway, but ya know... hehe
Shashu is such an amazing person. I really, really like his character.
Name: Ryo_Yunichie (Signed) · Date: 28/02/10 - 07:36 am · For: 9 - The plans change
More, more, more!
Name: Time Shifter (Signed) · Date: 07/02/10 - 07:06 pm · For: 9 - The plans change
I was surprised to find out this story was continuing; surprised and excited! I wasn't too pleased with the use of "Parkins" as a character name, since it's clearly not Japanese, and I'm not sure about "assassins" if only because guns seem like an extreme advantage, but I like the story in general.
It seems to me that Sair has some kind of psychic powers, so I'm betting that Hinata's dream was a forshadow of how Naruto behaves after the torture. Still, I'm sure she'll be able to take care of him until he recovers. After her team kills everyone in the compound, of course!
Also, happy birthday!
Author's Response: Yes the story is continuing (though I'm having some trouble with the current chapter) and thanks for the birthday greeting as well as the review :)rnrnI'm assuming your reference to parkins is referring to Shashu? If so then don't worry about it too much, he does actually have a part to play as well as a reason for his actions. Also, guns are only a great advantage when they either have more than one bullet loaded or if the person can hit their target with one shot. As the weapons will probably be described properly in this chapter, I don't mind saying that the guns are glorified muskets. One shot, muzzel loaded and generally hard to aim. Still very lethal, but not nearly as bad as standard shelled ammunition.rnrnCheers
Name: Ardisaur_rawr (Signed) · Date: 27/01/10 - 08:52 pm · For: 9 - The plans change
BAMF = Bad Ass Mother Fucker. LOL
I think it's funnier to abbreviate it. It sounds better.
Author's Response: Oh! Lol, thanks :) glad you're enjoying the story. The acronym is pretty amusing :)
Name: Merciless Rain (Signed) · Date: 25/01/10 - 08:56 pm · For: 9 - The plans change
Dude? freakin Awesome. My Only Problem With Your Story Is How Long It Takes You To Post, Lol. And Happy Birthday, Mine Is On The 30th. =)
Author's Response: Sorry, I wish I could post more frequently, but life gets in the way a lot. Thanks for reading though and happy early birthday as well :)
Name: Rowanrose (Signed) · Date: 25/01/10 - 06:03 pm · For: 6 - Such beautiful disasters
:) fooo, she never thought of revenge? Go beat up those suckers HInata!
I really like you're story, it's awesome! Please keep up the good work!
Name: Ardisaur_rawr (Signed) · Date: 24/01/10 - 02:32 pm · For: 9 - The plans change
Woo!! Go Hinata!
She's such a BAMF in this!
I love it!
Author's Response: A BAMF? Thank you, though I'm curious what a BAMF is :)
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 23/01/10 - 06:40 pm · For: 9 - The plans change
wow hinata is so OOC here...i love how she can get so spun up and annoyed....its kinda cute to think of little hinata-chan being angry...i feel bad for Ten-ten but at least she is alive! and Naruto......*shudder* i hope he has gone insane by now....
Name: Ardisaur_rawr (Signed) · Date: 13/12/09 - 08:49 pm · For: 8 - The gathering
They found TenTen! YAY!
So, Shashu saved TenTen! That's awesome!
That dream Hinata had was scary! I would have pissed myself!
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 12/12/09 - 06:34 pm · For: 8 - The gathering
wow// i love how hinata is becoming more bold and confient! way to go and cant wait to read the nxt chapter!
Name: Rowanrose (Signed) · Date: 01/12/09 - 09:47 pm · For: 1 - A Promise
Wow, cool! Really good!
Name: Ardisaur_rawr (Signed) · Date: 28/11/09 - 09:56 am · For: 7 - It's time to prepare
Yay!! Updates!
I think Sasuke will enjoy the mission.
I would like to kill a few of them myself!
This was a good chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm going to try and get more chapters out since the semester is over now. I hope you keep reading and enjoying :)
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 24/11/09 - 06:36 pm · For: 7 - It's time to prepare
nice job....i love hinata's attiude!! awesome!!
Author's Response: It just felt appropriate :) Thanks for continuing to read.
Name: Ardisaur_rawr (Signed) · Date: 27/06/09 - 11:12 am · For: 6 - Such beautiful disasters
Wow!!
This was a good chapter!!
I wonder what the yurikajigan does exactly?
It would be wonderful to find out!!
Revenge.... yay!
Hinata's gonna go kill some bastages!!
lol
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 23/06/09 - 02:07 pm · For: 6 - Such beautiful disasters
oooo the suspense!! Write on!!!
crapy joke i no
Name: Ardisaur_rawr (Signed) · Date: 15/06/09 - 09:51 pm · For: 5 - How have I changed?
Me thinks this is pretty much pure awesome-ness!!!
I love this story and I get all excited whe I see that you've updated!!
Love it!!
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 10/06/09 - 04:13 pm · For: 5 - How have I changed?
very nice, Hinata's sis amuses me..write on!
Name: Ardisaur_rawr (Signed) · Date: 21/05/09 - 06:42 pm · For: 4 - We're home?
Awesome!!!
Sair is sooo cute!!!
I hope they get their asses in gear and go get Naruto!!
lol
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 19/05/09 - 11:12 pm · For: 4 - We're home?
tht was good! i cant wait for the nxt ch!
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 08/05/09 - 07:18 pm · For: 3 - What I Will Give
Wow, that is perfect. i cant begin to describe the greatness i see in this work, keep writing
Name: Ardisaur_rawr (Signed) · Date: 08/05/09 - 05:54 pm · For: 3 - What I Will Give
This is really good!!
Continue, please?!?!