Reviews For A Seeing Beauty
Name: Rowanrose (Signed) · Date: 02/12/09 - 05:46 pm · For: Chapter 4 New Ninja Aboard
OoO Ahahahahaha! That was hilarious! Nice.
But what happened to Ibiki? Who's Jason? And, Jasmine doesn't seem to be very - you know - miserable, like her foster sibs thought.
Author's Response: well....ibiki i really dont care and jason...lik i said you will find out soon and well jazzy may not seem sad but as the saying goesrnrneven the happist person in the room be the most miserable.rnrnty for your reviews
Name: Kurokiku (Signed) · Date: 21/07/09 - 07:51 pm · For: Chapter 4 New Ninja Aboard
Mmm... I wonder if she's getting all this a little too easily? seems like all she has to do is think about techniques and she can do them... I think she's funny though.
Author's Response: hm.......im going to over this chapter to were u are coming from, ty for the tip...*goes off to investate
Name: Crimson Lily (Signed) · Date: 22/05/09 - 02:14 pm · For: Chapter 4 New Ninja Aboard
hm....its amazing still, but im kinda confused.
1) where did she get the kunais? and learn to use them?
2) how is she able to beat sasuke when she's just a cilvillian?
and not to be rude at all, but in my opinion, its kinda unrealistic that she can suddenly use chakra just from reading it. its a good story, but i think it should be a bit more realistic in terms of ninja skills. maybe im totally wrong and you'll curse my name for writing this, but if i am wrong, please correct me.
other than that, i love it! keep writing please!!!
Author's Response: okay...well i see ur pt..soo im going to fix it a lil. the kunais ebay and the backyard and she didnt really beat Sasuke, she just nailed him in the nuts. but ty for the rev, hope u lik the nxt chapters. also the chakra....its a mary sue moment...she has them...thts all i got for no
Name: DropDeadThenDance (Signed) · Date: 05/05/09 - 02:05 pm · For: Chapter 4 New Ninja Aboard
Holy jeez!! I can't believe i'm JUST now starting to read this story! It's really great!
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I have a cousin named Jasmine XD
Anyway, great great GREAT stuff so far! I'd love to read more but I have to get back to my own story for the moment, I'll be back to check it out soon!!!
Author's Response: ty, i lik the name Jasmine...it has a cool nickname in it Jazz...thz about how far its good, wait till you get to ch6 and 8 i believe. they'll blow ur mind a lil