Reviews For ENTER! To the Naruto World
Name: dalaw (Signed) · Date: 03/01/09 - 07:43 am · For: Chapter 2
lmao nice.10
Author's Response: BOOM!!
Name: ren uchiha (Signed) · Date: 23/12/08 - 06:59 pm · For: Chapter 2
i'm so awesome
I am an Uchiha
This was what he'd told them.
Thus,this must be true.
For he... he was no liar.
and
Her fingertip poked the wet surface of his eyeball.
Ren immediately flinched and screamed.
"Ahhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!"
Oh,the pain.
How could she be so cruel!?
Barbaric animal!
i sound so much like mikami from death note ^^ so smart i love this and itachi was 14 when he had me plus sasuke was 6 when the wipe out happened therefore i was 4 and itachi was 18 ^^ i'm good at math
Author's Response: @_@ Wait,that works. LMBO!
Name: ren uchiha (Signed) · Date: 23/12/08 - 06:44 pm · For: ENTER! uchiha ren
sugio so amazing tia-sempai your writing skills excel mine...........appart from battles
i have a few idea's i'll run them by you ^^
Name: Frosty (Signed) · Date: 23/12/08 - 12:08 am · For: Chapter 2
I don't know what this is, but I know how to use it!!
... how do you know how to use it if you don't know what it is? Oh, right, you're Tia. Of course.
Ha. Not bad for an entrance. Update soon.
Author's Response: LMBO I don't know what it is either. But it's good practice. I don't know,maybe Ren knows where he wants to take the story. LMBO
Name: Frosty (Signed) · Date: 29/11/08 - 11:48 pm · For: ENTER! uchiha ren
Okay, I had to read it... and... I HAVE A BROTHER! *tackles Ren to the ground* Nii-san! Hiya!
Okay, onto the important stuff...
1st off, you switch persons to much. Decide on one. First, or third, dollface. Also, you should consider adding in ...'s and -'s in places. It'll make it a lot easier on the eyes.
Name: Keiko Hyuuga (Signed) · Date: 22/08/08 - 04:11 pm · For: ENTER! uchiha ren
Hey, it's Keiko, sorry I couldn't get back to you sooner. I'm afraid I'll have to decline, its nothing personal. i did it once, i hated it, sorry.
Author's Response: its ok keiko although it is a loss of a brilliant author we ask that you can at least read the story we are working on chapters sayonara
Name: Keiko Hyuuga (Signed) · Date: 22/08/08 - 04:10 pm · For: ENTER! uchiha ren
Hey, it's Keiko, sorry I couldn't get back to you sooner. I'm afraid I'll have to decline, its nothing personal. i did it once, i hated it, sorry.
Name: Keiko Hyuuga (Signed) · Date: 22/08/08 - 04:09 pm · For: ENTER! uchiha ren
Hey, it's Keiko, sorry I couldn't get back to you sooner. I'm afraid I'll have to decline, its nothing personal. i did it once, i hated it, sorry.
Name: Persy321 (Signed) · Date: 17/07/08 - 09:46 pm · For: ENTER! uchiha ren
...........................wth?! LOL! OMG WHAT DID U DO?! FALL OFF THE UCHIHA WAGON AND BUMPED UR HEAD??! ...omg dont tell me it was from that night i got u that moolatte..............WE WILL UPDATE ON THE PHONE LATER......-falls off chair anime style- lol!
Author's Response: JUST GET ON WITH YOUR UPDATE
Name: Tige321 (Signed) · Date: 10/07/08 - 05:12 pm · For: ENTER! uchiha ren
LMFBO At this rate,you'll probably always have to add me back considering it's impossible for me to edit and remain co-author,since it doesn't offer my name on the list to renew. ._. But,that's okay,next time I edit,I'll just....try..to....err.....accomplish a lot. LMBO >.> *glomps itachi*
Author's Response: MY TOU-SAN -grabs itachi off you-
Name: Tige321 (Signed) · Date: 10/07/08 - 09:03 am · For: ENTER! uchiha ren
OMG,IT'S A FRACKING BUG,if I edit it,I need to highlight my name so I still have editing rights,but my name isn't on the bob dang list,because it was on the list in the beginning. @_@ DO YOU GET IT?! I GET CROSSED OUT BECAUSE AT THE BEGINNING,I'M A CO AUTHOR,BUT AFTER I CLICK ADD STORY,IT TAKES ME OFF OF CO AUTHOR BECAUSE I DIDN'T,BECAUSE I CAN'T REHIGHLIGHT MY FRACKING NAME. BUG! BUG! FLAW! @_@ HELP!
Author's Response: AGAIN! O.O ITACHI TOU-SAN -itachi appears- do it for me -itachi- ok ren
Name: Tige321 (Signed) · Date: 09/07/08 - 01:26 pm · For: ENTER! uchiha ren
Oh fracking hell. I highlighted your name instead of mine. :'( HIGHLIGHT ME AGAIN! >.< PLEASE!
Author's Response: -.- again
Name: Tige321 (Signed) · Date: 09/07/08 - 01:19 pm · For: ENTER! uchiha ren
O_O Don't worry,I'm working on my chapter,I just might be slow,since it's hard for me to find time for other stuff between WWK,my japanese,and art projects. -twitches- And yeah,highlight..like..I forgot to click my name. LMBO
Author's Response: lol
Name: Tige321 (Signed) · Date: 08/07/08 - 01:36 pm · For: ENTER! uchiha ren
CRAP,I was editing the summary and I forgot to highlight my name again so now I can't edit it. -_- HIGHLIGHT MY NAME AGAIN! I HAVE IDEAS! -twitches-
Author's Response: high light? whatever heh be sure to keep up your end