Reviews For The betraying brother
Name: B (Anonymous) · Date: 26/04/12 - 04:11 pm · For: Chapter 1
More! Please finish this story. David crying at the end. B not like. But the bits that came before were VERY funny. I couldn't stop laughing at the breaking of the fourth wall. It was very good, so please finish this off.
Name: Rasengan (Signed) · Date: 31/05/07 - 09:26 am · For: Chapter 1
LOL ... that is really good . Keep writing
new stories .
NICE WORK !!!
Name: Oshiyama (Signed) · Date: 11/05/07 - 11:47 am · For: Chapter 1
It's....funny.
Maybe you shouldn't do it in a script form though. I hope to read more.