Reviews For Me and the Akatsuki my verison
Name: Sasuke_Luvr (Signed) · Date: 22/07/07 - 03:45 pm · For: Chapter 4
Um, okay, where to start? Lets start with Capitalization. Ever heard of it? You only capitalized Deidara's name. It's a lot easier to read if the first word the person is saying, or the person's name in general is capitalized. Also, you should put Punctuations at the end of what a character is saying, it's just easier to read, and to understand. I think this story could be a whole lot better, if you just added those two things. I hope the next chapter will have more capitalization and punctuation in it. Just a little advice. Good luck to ya!
- Akina
Name: Rasengan (Signed) · Date: 31/05/07 - 11:21 pm · For: Chapter 1
yuk it is boring !
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-- dw431 : damn u
Name: ShadesofDeath (Signed) · Date: 04/05/07 - 03:00 pm · For: Chapter 2
Lot of shoting, randomness, some more randomness.....I LOVE IT!^^
luvd it
bye
Author's Response: Thank you mate i updated to 3 you are a good guy one of my reviewers said it was shit i hate that guy
Name: takahiro8 (Signed) · Date: 01/05/07 - 10:02 pm · For: Chapter 1
I'll give it to you sofyly.
It's a piece of shit,
If you are not going to edit it, don't bother posting.
This is just random crap thrown together. Please stop posting or get real ideas. That means thinking them up, not coping them.
Akio
Author's Response: f**k off you b*****d i got in to this becace i read things like this i am only 13 deal with it if you don't like it don't read it and don't tell me it is a pice of shit i will read your shit and say it is bad so piss off and don't review again
Author's Response: i am sorry that you hated it
Author's Response: sorry for what i said