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Name: Patsuki21 (Signed) · Date: 12/01/08 - 08:04 pm · For: Adoption
or have a part when hes in the academy and some bullies attack him but the kids from the other clans stop them
Name: Patsuki21 (Signed) · Date: 12/01/08 - 07:31 pm · For: Chapter 5
i think u flash forward to the part where they start choosing teams that should make for a good argue ment
Name: battousai1889 (Signed) · Date: 19/12/07 - 04:35 am · For: Chapter 5
very good story. the first chapter was a little hard to follow, seeing as you used summons as kekkei genkai (sarutobi's monkey contract for example) However, this story is very interesting as of now and can only get better. keep up the good work and cheers!
Name: badassdemon (Signed) · Date: 12/06/07 - 09:40 pm · For: Chapter 5
all im going to say is...FREAKIN AWESOME! THIS JUST PLAIN KICKS BUTT!!!
Name: HochiminShii (Signed) · Date: 16/05/07 - 01:59 am · For: Adoption
please finish this story
Name: mat123 (Signed) · Date: 14/05/07 - 11:00 am · For: Adoption
good job
Name: Arisu Kuroshima (Signed) · Date: 07/05/07 - 12:47 pm · For: Chapter 5
Nooo Fugaku should die!! Poor Naruto
Name: Rafeed Kahn (Anonymous) · Date: 20/02/07 - 10:58 am · For: Chapter 5
Amazing continue as soon as possible.