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An area to submit intelligent essays debating topics about the Naruto Universe and writing tutorial submissions.
 
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Any fic with no real plot and humor based. Doesn't require correct spelling, paragraphing or punctuation but it's a very good idea.
 
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Reviews For Don't Stumble

Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 12/04/13 - 01:59 pm · For: Scene 4: Eyes On Me
Okay, two things. One is from my review to Forgotten Concepts. I asked if Kaki-chan would be okay (reason for it is on that review). Also, you only said no to her being Kohaku. You said nothing about not being related ^_^.

Haha. So she's a ninja fix it person? First thing I thought of was Fix It Felix Jr. I really loved that movie. Hm? Worried about diamonds? Is she rich or something? It does she steal them? She's a thief! Haha. Nah, I highly doubt that. Though it would be a twist.

Again, I can so easily imagine Mr. Smith saying "Mr. Anderson". I believe it will continue like this until his real name is revealed =_=. Oh well. He wants to talk to her? What could this be about? Definitely interesting. I'm eager to see what it's about.

Haha. Karl's awesome and hilarious. Has Mr. Anderson really been watching her? She should really pay more attention. But why is he so focused on her? I must know. The fake Facebook thing. Hilarious. So was her reaction. And it seems Anderson has tricked her into showing her smarts. Nice.

Awesome chapter. I really loved it and am glad I have two more to read.

Author's Response: Kaki-chan? Hmm, I like it. Makes me think of Kakashi lol, and yes I noticed that you said something on the Forgotten Concepts; I've been meaning to reply to those reviews, but I'll focus on these ones for now XD
As for Hannah and Mr. Anderson, I'm not revealing anything until Scene... Hmm, nine I think? Or maybe later, depending on how the building up goes :3 but besides that, yes, Hannah is actually very intelligent and a pretty handy little girl, and we'll see what happens with those supposed diamonds ;)

Oh, and I had to re-watch the matrix because of you! XD now every time I write Mr. Anderson, I see Mr. Smith and him sitting in Hannah's school cafeteria debating over the red and blue pills -_- And Karl? Karl is always hilarious, and I thought the facebook thing was actually a very clever way of disguising their conversation so Mr. Anderson didn't pick up on it; he probably wouldn't have been too thrilled to hear that some of his students thought he was eye-balling hannah XD ha ha, but anyway, thanks for the review Sasuai! I look forward to more from you as this story draws on!


Name: ShadowXNight13 (Signed) · Date: 11/04/13 - 04:39 pm · For: Scene 4: Eyes On Me
ummmm this was promblem something new to everyone. i think you scrambled the words a slight bit my dear friend...

sooo, she is a magically fix it nin :p way to go. lol. and maybe the teacher does have the hots for hannah o_o. time to find out! to the next chappie!

Author's Response: yeah, I went back and fixed that! Thanks for letting me know!! Oh, and thanks for the review :3


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