Reviews For Don't Stumble
Name: Purple Dinosaur (Signed) · Date: 09/04/13 - 01:51 pm · For: Scene 3: Don’t Make Me Go, Momma
I love this story so far, DDTD! It surprisingly relates to me in a lot of ways. I think u should keep writing it. I have a feeling that Mr. Anderson is Asuma, but that's just a guess :P I can't wait until the next chapter!
Author's Response: Well when I created Hannah, originally, she was meant to represent a lot of my problems in high school and what I was personally experiencing at this age. That said, I'm glad that you find something in her you can relate to, because that makes her feel more real :3
Thanks so much for the review, Purple Dinosaur!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 08/04/13 - 10:44 am · For: Scene 3: Don’t Make Me Go, Momma
SHE'S RELATED TO ZABUZA! Or she's Kohaku and had been sent to our world *gasps*. Never leave my mind open to wonder. It rarely ends well.
I think this is the first character of yours I've seen who doesn't mind her parents. Then again, her mom does seem pretty cool. She even has a good point on the teacher. Then again, if this is Zabuza......
Oh, and every time I see Mr. Anderson, I can hear Mr. Smith from Matrix speaking...... It's weird but hilarious. It makes me laugh when I read it. Very amusing indeed.
Great chapter, DDTD. I can't wait to see what happens next. I'm sure it'll be fun.
Author's Response: lol wow, okay, I will say this much and let you know she is NOT Kohaku XD
And yes, Hannah is probably one of the few, if not the only, characters of mine that has a relatively good relationship with her parents. However, Hannah's parents are freakin' awesome lol
Oh my god, that's is hilarious! And kind of strange at the same time O_O but I could see where Mr. Smith and Mr. Anderson could be similar, and it makes me want to go back and reread the chapters I have down- Mr. Smith all the way! lol anyway, thanks so much for another review!! I look forward to seeing what you think of later chapters!!
Name: ShadowXNight13 (Signed) · Date: 07/04/13 - 10:25 pm · For: Scene 3: Don’t Make Me Go, Momma
i like her mom. shes fun to read about :p hannah is a awesome oc. a slight grey hue character :p
and major hardass. is this the next day or a time skip? i got abit confused. but awesome chappie drop dead! :D
i feel loved for a shoutout! :D i get happy reading your stories! so yay!
Author's Response: I actually really like Elli too; she's partially based on a very old character of mine, and was revised, and then implanted here just because I loved her so much then... granted, she's a lot different now, but still lol Anyway, it's either the following day, or a couple of days later. I hadn't really decided, but left it open to either, so I apologize about that -_-
And your welcome for the shout out! I appreciate that you jumped right on this! I was worried it worried pick up any readers, or at the very least it wouldn't any time soon, but you dropped in and I thank you for that!! :3