Reviews For Don't Stumble
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 08/04/13 - 08:07 am · For: Scene 2: Your Good Friends
It's Zabuza! Boom, I called it! Probably wouldn't have (okay, 50% chance), but the fact he's in the character list settles it. It's Zabuza.
Oh, a few things I forgot last chapter. Amazing banner, I love it. It's just sooo beautiful. Amazing, really, DDTD. Then the title and summary? I don't know why, but it really stuck out to me. The whole picking yourself up when you stumble is just like something I would say. So, it's Scenes for this, huh? I will never get over your different uses for these. I just love the originality so much! Also, Mr. Deno and Karl Deno made me laugh because of their last names being my character's name. The one you drew at that XD.
Haha. I like Megan. She's so.... Energetic? I'm not sure if that's the right word, but I'm sticking with it. And she's trying to shove Naruto down Hannah's throat, huh? Good girl! Preparing her for the real world, whether she knows it or not XD.
Karl seems pretty cool. I can't help but wonder if the others will be important since you went into explaining them and stuff. Maybe not, though. I'll just have to see.
Great chapter, DDTD. I really enjoyed it and am glad I finally got the chance to read this ^_^.
Author's Response: Hmm, you'll just have to keep reading and find out, won't you? Maybe Zabuza is just an important character??
I'm glad you like the banner! It actually took me a ridiculous amount of time to finish, and I didn't settle on the fall theme right away, but I'm glad you feel the same way about it that I do :3 and as for the summary and title? Well, I felt like at 17, I did a lot of stumbling and falling down, but I usually managed to pick myself up too, so it seemed fitting and like something everyone could relate to... And good call on the Deno thing lol I chose that name for that reason, and because I have a friend named Joe Deno who is something like Karl, just swears a lot more :D
As for Megan, well, energetic is probably the best word to use to describe her... Besides zany, perhaps lol and she's a pretty die hard Naruto fan, and is just doing her civil duty to for the Narutard community XD
And like I said about Karl previously, he's mostly based on my friend Joe, so it only warranted that he be awesome... But anyway, I don't think he's going to be a super important character, mostly a B or C plot kinda guy, but I really love writing him!
Alright, thanks for the review Sasaui!! I appreciate it!
Name: ShadowXNight13 (Signed) · Date: 07/04/13 - 08:38 pm · For: Scene 2: Your Good Friends
Update! update! Please update! XD
Author's Response: Ok ok, but only because you're pressuring me! lol, jk jk