Reviews For Don't Stumble
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 08/04/13 - 06:58 am · For: Scene 1: That Kinda Morning
Sorry I didn't get to this before. I saw it, but I've been a bit stuck on One Piece and an awesome OP fanfiction. So yeah, a little preoccupied although I saw this right around when it came out.
Anyway, this was a great start. Hannah seems very interesting. I love how she finds beauty in fall. I can find beauty in all seasons naturally, though not as much Summer, so it's always fun reading authors takes on the seasons. The leaves thing was very cool. Now, though, I want it to be fall U^_^.
Darn. Bad luck with the backpack. But creative fix, nevertheless. And she made it to school at least, even if Mrs. Warren wasn't too happy. She seemed like a real butthole.
Rurouni Kenshin, huh. I have that on my to-read list. I take it you're read it. Have you heard of another story by him called Buso Renkin? It's epic.
Anyway, great chapte, DDTD. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter and finding out just who the Math teacher is.
Author's Response: Hey, don't worry about it :D It's just awesome that you're taking the time to drop by and let me know what you think. So, with that said, don't worry too much about it!
I'm glad you liked how I started this story, and believe you me I jumped back and forth a lot with how I wanted to do this, but I decided I would start it out in my favorite season; fall. And the bit with the leaves was fun to write in, so it obviously had to have a place in the story! Other than that, I'm glad you over all liked the story! I put a lot of effort into this one, and so far I'm really with how things are working out :3
Alright, thanks for the review!! Hopefully Hannah and I can keep you entertained!
Name: ShadowXNight13 (Signed) · Date: 07/04/13 - 08:37 pm · For: Scene 1: That Kinda Morning
I LOVE IT!!
Author's Response: YAY!! lol