Reviews For Thunder in Time of Revolution
Name: Toolazytologin (Anonymous) · Date: 29/11/11 - 10:11 am · For: The Gates of Konoha
Awesome. Nice going. Wonder what's gonna happen next. Update soon, please.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you are enjoying it. I think I'll post the next chapter on Friday.
Name: Tragedy (Signed) · Date: 27/11/11 - 08:27 am · For: Countdown
Hmm. I Know Silver Already.Agreed But I Wouldnt Mind Either.
Nice Prologue. Not Too Fast, But A Healthy Pace/Way To Fill Us In On What Changed And Whats The Same. I Will Definitely Check Back For Your Next Few Chapters.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing, I'm glad you enjoyed the prologue. Thank you also for volunteering, I' amazed at how helpful readers are here, when to compared to FFnet. For the time being, I will nt bother you as I already asked Silverwolf, but should she actually tire of the job, I would ask, if the offer still stands, that is. Again, thank you very much!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 26/11/11 - 08:53 am · For: Countdown
Wow... This was awesome. I really like this so far. Very AU, and yet it seems to flow really well. The characters' personality and dialogue flowed marvelously together. And with this story as an alternate universe story, you did really well with explaining just how AU it was. You let us, as the readers, follow along with the characters so we discovered just what happened. I really liked how everything seemed to progress so fluidly.
This was a really good prologue. I personally don't see why you would need a beta; your writing looks flawless and your style is great. But if you really want a beta, I'd be willing to help. I do have experience as a beta, and I do write my own stories. Feel free to ask if you're interested.
Anyway, this was a very good start to what I can only imagine will be a great fanfic. I look forward to seeing where this goes. Keep up the awesome work with your writing!
Author's Response: First of all, thank you for reading and reviewing. I'm really glad you enjoyed the prologue. It took some time to write, even though its length is laughable when compared to some of the few chapters I have already written for this story. rnrnHehe, I do need a beta because although I take my stories seriously and read a chapter over several times before posting, I'm human and even more than that, extremely absent-minded. I'm also British, but with French parents and currently residing in another country.rnrnYES, I'M VERY, VERY, VERY INTERESTED. It's a shame that you can't see me now, jumping up and down in utter happiness. THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU!rnrnYAHOOOOOOOO!