Reviews For The Two Eyes
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 27/03/11 - 10:25 am · For: Epilogue
Aww.... so cute! To hear everyone is doing well in the future was very assuring. I'm happy with how you ended this amazing story. Oh, and the last bit with Madara... very clever. I'm very happy with how this story ended. This was fantastic! I hope you continue on to write even more awesome fanfics! Keep up the great work in your writing!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 24/03/11 - 03:33 am · For: Chapter 12: The Showdown Part 2
Ah! This was so good! I loved the entire chapter! This is such a good story. I wish you could write more, but it seems that just adding more would be too much. I honestly feel that the next chapter would make a good ending. But this was really good, and I enjoyed every minute of it. Nice work on this!
Author's Response: Thanks again.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 17/03/11 - 02:27 pm · For: Chapter 11: The Showdown Part 1
Oooh, update. I'm very pleased with this battle scene. It was very good. And now there's a cliffhanger :( Please update soon because I'd like to know what happens next!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 04/03/11 - 03:54 am · For: Chapter 10: Calm Before the Storm
So good! I loved this entire thing! I'm so excited for the battle, I can barely stand it! I'm in so much suspense right now! Please update soon! I can't wait for the battle scene and Bishimon and Ren's escape!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 24/02/11 - 02:02 pm · For: Chapter 9: Warning Reunion
I was wondering where you were. I'm glad you came back with a nice chapter, too :) I liked the fact that you skipped ahead, it's a new setting and new changes. And now I'm worried for Tsukiko's well-being.... Good job on this chapter! I hope you update sooner now!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 31/01/11 - 05:04 pm · For: Interlude: Bishimon's Choice
Wow, Bishimon's power is really impressive. You described it really well. And Hitomi is really demented! Your twist was really interesting, and this story is really good. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thanks again.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 23/01/11 - 04:43 pm · For: Chapter 7: Yuuyake
Oh my freaking flying stars! So much happened! I am so shocked at the part with Mamoru having the same dream as Tsukiko. I did not see that one coming, which completely added to the plot. And Bishimon has family falling out of the wazoo, man. First Ryu (who is evil, what?!), his mother, and now Hitomi. Things are really picking up now, which I'm very excited about.
One complaint: I think you rushed Bishimon and his mother's relationship. It could have been a little slower and more could've been explained. That's all.
Anyways, good chapter. Keep up the good work, and I hope to see an update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks again.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 21/01/11 - 05:05 pm · For: Chapter 6: Tragedy
Oh my goodness! So much happened in this chapter! This was so incredible that I don't even know what to say! I can't believe Ryu died! And now I really want to know what's going on with Bishimon and this woman! Please update this soon!
Author's Response: I actually thought it might be to rushed, but i'm glad you liked it.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 19/12/10 - 05:12 pm · For: Chapter 4: Family
Cool chapter. This story is getting more and more interesting as I read it. You're doing a good job with this fic. Continue on with the good work.
Author's Response: Thanks again.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 16/12/10 - 06:01 pm · For: Chapter 3: Beginning Their New Lives
Very nice chapter! I really enjoyed the bell test. The description in this chapter was great, and your characters are interesting. I can't wait to read what happens next because this story is developing well.
Author's Response: Thanks.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 10/12/10 - 03:31 am · For: Chapter 2: Repaying a Debt
Good chapter. I enjoyed it, and things are starting to move on now. Good work and I hope that you can come up with some good ideas (since you're not sure where the story is going) to make this story even better! Update soon, please!
Author's Response: I know how the story will generally play out, I'm just not really sure how to get there.
Name: Fantasy Madeline (Signed) · Date: 09/12/10 - 06:41 pm · For: Prologue
Good chapter...though a bit rushed. Slow down a bit. Very....short. But anyway good job..update soon.
Author's Response: Shortness and rushing seem to be a reoccuring problem for me. I'll try to make longer.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 05/12/10 - 01:40 pm · For: Chapter 1: A New Life
Good chapter. A little rushed, but it was still interesting. Please update so I can find out where Tsukiko is!
Name: Fire_and_Ice (Signed) · Date: 04/12/10 - 08:45 am · For: Prologue
Wow, this is really great! Short, but very original and enticing! I can't wait to see how it develops! Great job, and please keep up the good work!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 03/12/10 - 02:45 pm · For: Prologue
Oh my goodness this is so good! I'm all suspenseful now! I wish there was a little more, but hey, updating stuff doesn't work sometimes. Don't worry, happens to me all the time.
Anyways, I hope you update soon because I want to know what happens next. Awesome story! Please update asap!
Name: Fantasy Madeline (Signed) · Date: 03/12/10 - 02:03 pm · For: Prologue
I like your story. Now I published my first fanfic 1 week ago and if your anything like me your eager for reads/feedback. Please update...great idea. Please read my story and comment. You can click on my name to read it. Great story! =)