Reviews For The Tale of Two Souls
Name: shadowkunoichi47 (Signed) · Date: 15/11/10 - 05:23 pm · For: Extermination
!!! Aka-chan, PLEASE update! =O I'm dying to know what happens next... >w
Author's Response: OMFG IM SORRY O_O.... Kitsu, remember when I hurt my hand? yeh it still hurts and it hurt before and.... YEAH the pain made me forget about naru-kun and sasu-kun and sora-chan T~T. .... and then i started other stories =_= BUTBUTBUT I'll start writing RIGHT AWAY.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 21/08/10 - 08:18 pm · For: Extermination
T_T Poor Sora! I can't believe she had to go through that. I feel bad for her. I liked it, but it felt a little rushed. It might just be me who feels that. I can't wait to see what happens next. You're story is really good. If you haven't, could you read my story, Never Too Late?
Author's Response: Hey! wow sorry for the late response! anways, yeah i know it was REALLY rushed. I had literally like 20 minutes to write it before I knew that I couldnt anymore XD HOWEVER! During school, I've actually written like a shitload of stuff. Chapters 10-12 are COMPLETELY finished and I plan to post them soon enough...
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 07/05/10 - 05:18 pm · For: Aftermath
^_-. What the heck is about to happen. In case you couldn't tell, I was trying to make a raised eyebrow at the beginning. It was a very interesting chapter, and I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Haaaaa.... it was ridiculously short and kinda like a filler or ender or sumthing... Haha I'm glad to see that ur still reading :D
Name: thegirlwhoflies (Signed) · Date: 03/05/10 - 01:37 pm · For: Let's Start the Explanations....
You posted! Love your story!
*bother* *bother* *bother*
~is chapter 8 up now?~
Author's Response: ^_^ yay im glad you like it!rnrn-_-" and no... ch. 8 hasnt even been started yet...
Name: thegirlwhoflies (Signed) · Date: 03/05/10 - 01:37 pm · For: Let's Start the Explanations....
You posted! Love your story!
*bother* *bother* *bother*
~is chapter 8 up now?~
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 02/05/10 - 07:49 pm · For: Awakening
0-0.... **after rereading the ending** 0_0. Holy flying monkey crapizoidal assist (yes, I have a colorfully weird vocabulary)! I cannot believe (even after reading it a few times) that that just happened. You sure do now how to write good, and I'm glad you updated. Please update again soon.
Author's Response: hahaha XDrnI love your vocabulary! ^_^rnand really? i didn't think it was that good. I didnt have much time for this one, but I promised my friend that I would get it up by May, so thats what I did! But time was limited, so I think, personally, that I am a very suck-ish writer.... rnBut thank you for thinking otherwise! 0_~
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 21/02/10 - 06:21 pm · For: Birthday
I thought I reviewed this, but apparently I didn't. Anyway, I absolutely loved this chapter! And, not criticizing you or anything, but I think Sasuke and Sora are moving a bit too fast. Oh, and please please please don't stop posting! I heart his story to much!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot! I so so so so happy that you like it so much. And about Sasuke and Sora, you have to wait and see what lies ahead. I'm not spoiling anything cuz I'm planning to go through, like, the actually manga series. Which means Ninja Academy, Genin, Shipuuden and all that fun stuff. :D Don't worry! I will NEVER NEVER NEVER stop posting! This is too much fun!
Name: thegirlwhoflies (Signed) · Date: 21/02/10 - 04:18 pm · For: Birthday
Oh, Sora, you *are* wanted. *hugs*
What kind of nickname is Neko? Not in a bad way, I've always wondered.
I promise I will never claw at the furniture either.
And cliffhanger!! Can't wait to see what happens!
Author's Response: :D Yes she is wanted! I nearly cried when I read it over! And "neko" means cat. Sora is called "Neko-chan" because she is fast and has good reflexes like cats. AND YOU BETTER NOT CLAW AT THE FURNITURE! xDDDDDDDD And of course I had to put in the cliffhanger. You will be amazed at what happens next, but I am not telling you anything in school. ;) BTW, you posted this twice. Delete one of them please.
Name: thegirlwhoflies (Signed) · Date: 21/02/10 - 04:12 pm · For: Raigen Hayate
Dang you catch on fast… and I thought my avian mammals were smart….
“Avian mammals? Excuse my language, but WHAT THE HELL?!?!”
I’m not prepared to explain.
Author's Response: THATS THE BEST PART!!!!!!!!!!!!! And it's all YOU! I love your avian mammals (sea gulls wtf?) <3
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 08/02/10 - 04:18 pm · For: Let's Start the Explanations....
hey, could you by chance read my Sasaui Uchiha fic? It's one I wrote on my last account (bre2k8), and is now one of my stories on my new account (Sasaui Uchiha)
Author's Response: Yeah i read if before but I keep forgetting to write reviews!!!!! Again, please bear with me cuz I am the most damn forgetful person you will ever meet. 0_~
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 08/02/10 - 02:47 pm · For: Raigen Hayate
OoO...Can you make this any more awesome? Answer:No. It's already too awesome for the charts to register. I really liked it and can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Are you serious?!?!?! It's THAT awesome????? I doubt it.....my writing skills are so primative!!! 0_~ But thank you soooo much you are so wickedly awesome! I love you guys who read my fanfic. I'm so loved. :D I'll try really really really hard to get the next chapter out! Just for you 0_~
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 08/02/10 - 02:06 pm · For: Soul Within Soul
0_0...She kissed him (on the forehead)! Only snot face. Oh, and sorry it took me so long to review. I didn't notice you came out with another chapter.
Author's Response: Oh it's okay. I try really hard to get one chapter out a week, but it doesnt work out that way because of school and stuff. And YES she kissed him on the forehead. ^_^
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 23/01/10 - 03:54 am · For: Losing
Holy terd monkeys......Poor Sora. I feel really bad for her. Hey, that Failure's Not An Option thing, could I use it as a title in one of my stories? The Torikago one?
Author's Response: Yes... poor Sora.... :(rnrnAnd of course. You can use it for one of your stories. I actually stole it from an episode of Naruto. :D
Name: Rowanrose (Signed) · Date: 21/01/10 - 09:10 pm · For: Losing
Wow. This is nice! Keep up the good work! :)
Author's Response: Thanks! That's really nice of you! :D
Name: thegirlwhoflies (Signed) · Date: 20/01/10 - 05:25 pm · For: Losing
*huggles*
Aww I love how this story is going!
Sora has flaws real flaws not just twilight flaws and she overcomes them the human way (no magic right?) and that is what makes you such a good writer, you convey humanity in a very real way.
*THUMBS UP*
Author's Response: HAHAHA I LOVE YOUrnrnAnd yes. There really is no magic. No stupid twilight flaws. Sora is obviously very timid and she has no self esteem or courage. Yet. rnBut....according to the writing you just read, there is something within Sora. HOWEVER, that something doesn't help her get stronger. The reason she gets stronger is because of herself and other people. rnAnyway I hope I can get Chapter 4 out soon. I just never have time to write anymore.... ^_^
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 20/01/10 - 05:07 pm · For: Chapter 2: Konoha
=D!!! I'm so happy that Sora and Sasuke are back together (you know what I mean by that). I can't wait to read the next chapter. I love this whole story so far!
Author's Response: Hahaha yea I know what you mean. The next chapter gets better! But that's my opinion. Frankly, I don't believe that I'm a good writer...but I still think it's okay.rnrnHaha....well I love that you love the story!!!
Name: thegirlwhoflies (Signed) · Date: 09/01/10 - 07:47 pm · For: Let's Start the Explanations....
I like this! Really excited to see where this goes.
you're so creative to imagine up your own OC with such an interesting backstory.
Author's Response: Thanks! It was like a spur-of-the-moment thing.I just kinda thought one day that it would be cool to have a character like Sora in it. Then...well yea it ended up being this! ^_^ My mind is quite an odd thing.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 06/01/10 - 03:01 pm · For: Let's Start the Explanations....
Hm... It has a very interesting begining. I can't wait to read the story part. By the way, could you read my story, Sasaui Zarkuru. It's about another person in the Naruto world, too.
Author's Response: I've never put much thought into Sora Hideki. She just came up one day after I read a few chapter of the Narutp manga. It was odd, but I went along with it, playing scenarios in my head. I've never actually thought of putting it in writing until now! rnAnd of course, I'll read your story. It sounds interesting.