Reviews For Ballad de clan Ala Ruberia
Name: DropDeadThenDance (Signed) · Date: 20/11/09 - 01:40 pm · For: Chapter 1 :intro and the story begins
FANTASTIC!!
Very good and i can't wait for more! I really hope you keep writing this :)
Anyway, in the first chapter they speak in a language I don't so I couldn't understand it but other then that it was really good!!!
Author's Response: i added latin for the spells cuz that seems like the best language to do them in. thank you
Name: DropDeadThenDance (Signed) · Date: 12/11/09 - 12:59 pm · For: Final chapter
Really great!!
I loved it!! Granted... I do have a little trouble understanding some things XD
Anyway, I can't read the next chapter right away but I'm looking forward to it kay?
Great story!!!
Author's Response: thank you what parts did u have trouble with?rn
Name: eldertensa (Signed) · Date: 08/11/09 - 01:34 pm · For: Chapter 1 :intro and the story begins
this story is really good, keep at it!
Author's Response: thank you it's my first time writing.
Name: Rowanrose (Signed) · Date: 04/11/09 - 04:15 pm · For: Final chapter
I haven't read this yet, but I think it'll be good, but before i do read it, could you please put spaces between paragraphs?
Author's Response: thanks for the advice like i said it was a lit comp paper so....
Name: DropDeadThenDance (Signed) · Date: 04/11/09 - 12:59 pm · For: Final chapter
Fantastic!! I could only read the first half of this but it was great, I'll read the other half as soon as I can and tell you what I think.
Again though, FANTASTIC!!!
Author's Response: I am currently making the begining up right now it may take a while cuz i use a latin translator so......... btw did u read the second half?