Reviews For Brave New World
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 18/11/09 - 04:41 pm · For: Chapter 1
awesome!! u totally worked the scene were way!
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 18/11/09 - 04:37 pm · For: Chapter 13
wow...this was a pretty good scene in the noodle shop. keep it up!
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 02/11/09 - 05:52 pm · For: Chapter 12
wow tht last bit was lik foreshadowing somen bad....excellent! this was an intrudging chapter im pleased to say awesome job! u = great riter!
Name: ontuva (Signed) · Date: 02/11/09 - 12:03 am · For: Chapter 10
Well, what can I say... I'm hooked. Totally hooked.
I mean - your writing is so fluent, it just...streams. I don't know if you know what I try to say, but I hope you do. :D
I really love the way you write.
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 20/10/09 - 10:24 pm · For: Chapter 11
ok im sry tht i didnt rev earlier...lots of busy stuff going on.....anywho this is a fablous ch. I lik the flashback it givs som relationship and understand btwn the two and i lik the tracking devices; very creative. in all and all this is a job well done!
Name: Rowanrose (Signed) · Date: 10/10/09 - 09:21 pm · For: Chapter 9
Muwahahaha! I e=wonder what Kakashi sensei will say to that! :)
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 09/10/09 - 06:24 pm · For: Chapter 10
^^ lovly ch!! i postivly adored it! its was lik a warm fluffy blanky...hmmm...cant wait for ur next update!
Name: ontuva (Signed) · Date: 07/10/09 - 04:31 am · For: Chapter 9
I read all the chapters in a row, and I must say, I have really enjoyed the ride! I mean, your writing is fluent, describing, amusing and hooking! I can't wait to read another chapter.
Athena is a believable character with an interesting personality. I'm really starting to like her. ^^ All the other characters all believable too. I haven't spotted any OOC'ness yet! And that's a very good thing.
10/10
I have nothing bad to say. ^^
Name: ontuva (Signed) · Date: 05/10/09 - 04:44 pm · For: Chapter 2
Oh my. This is... Well. Cute. :D I mean, this reminds me of old movies with Audrey Hepburn and small coffee shops. I don't know why. It's just a vibe I get from this. (I may be strange.)
But I really have liked your story this far. ^^ Especially the part where you described about their scents. :D I swear, I could smell them! ^^
I like the way you write. I can see all the things happen in my head. And that is always a good thing. :D I'll probably read the rest tomorrow, but you can now count me as one of your readers. ^^
Author's Response: Thanks for a very detailed review. I hope to hear your thoughts on other chapters.
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 05/10/09 - 02:35 pm · For: Chapter 9
well...im impressed by her fathers gift and all but, he does sound over board lik hinatas dad if u thik about it.
i lik the chapter in all and all. so WRite ON!
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 01/10/09 - 03:05 pm · For: Chapter 8
well...i lik the the incite of her past and all. And her thoughts... good job
bty. how do u do the itiac thing?? i cant fig it out.
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm taking the next few chapters to develop her character along with her relationship with Kakashi a bit more. Plus I want to dwell a bit into Kakashi, he is after all the main character of the fic. rnrnFor the italic characters, I typed the chapters in Word and uploaded them up as .htm file. It's the only thing I have found to work with the least hassle. Thank you for your consistent reviewing. I hope to hear more from you. If you have any criticisms, suggests, detailed comments, please don't hesitate to post them.
Name: Rowanrose (Signed) · Date: 30/09/09 - 01:28 pm · For: Chapter 8
hmmm-hmm-hm. Good, but short! Update soon!
Name: Miki Everless (Signed) · Date: 27/09/09 - 01:10 am · For: Chapter 7
I'd always thought that nobody could write Kakashi realistically anymore, but damn, you proved me wrong.
And I love Athena. She's a believeable character; something I haven't seen in a while.
I'd love to see how Athena and Kakashi's relationship plays out.
Eagerly awaiting chapter 8. ^__^
Author's Response: Thank you for a very detailed response. Hope to hear more from you.
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 26/09/09 - 06:57 pm · For: Chapter 7
i lov the fight! very incitful and intruging. ur story is captivating! Write ON!
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 20/09/09 - 09:29 pm · For: Chapter 6
O.O fighting tsunade....oh dios mio! i really feel for kakashi. lolz but this a good story it real makes me curious on wat will b hapning nxt . awesome job!
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 17/09/09 - 08:46 pm · For: Chapter 5
lolz on the ramen deal. im very impres tht her noise is so good....hehe i wonder wat hapn if she went into an alley on garbage day...lolz ^^
Name: Ahleeshur (Signed) · Date: 17/09/09 - 03:08 pm · For: Chapter 5
I really liked all of the updates. I'm very excited for the next one. :] It would be interesting if she became a ninja.
Author's Response: Hope to hear more from you, as well as your thoughts, suggestions, and comments.
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 14/09/09 - 09:08 pm · For: Chapter 4
hm nice chapter, i love the flower part. i lov gardening so hearing stuff on flowers makes me smile always! ^^
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 13/09/09 - 07:59 pm · For: Chapter 3
wow i can c y the ninjas are cautous but come on,,,the lady has no training and seems not to care to do so....also tht pretty neat the birth defects....i have a white flower shaped mole on the back of my retna so i gots a birth thingy too ^^ i thik they make us awesome lik unquie!
Write ON!
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 13/09/09 - 10:03 am · For: Chapter 2
I really like this story so far. The scent part was very interesting so is her facal features. Cant wait to read more,
Write ON! (it’s a writers jk tht I thought of)
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 13/09/09 - 09:57 am · For: Chapter 1
mm tis a good story so far nicely done!
Name: Ahleeshur (Signed) · Date: 12/09/09 - 07:46 pm · For: Chapter 1
Oh. I think this may be an interesting read. I'm excited for the next chapter of this story. I'll be following your progress. :]