Reviews For Naruto and the Deathly Hallows
Name: Marry (Anonymous) · Date: 04/10/11 - 04:34 am · For: Chapter 7: Separate Missions
It's good,but can you hurry up?!
Name: Gaara07 (Signed) · Date: 26/02/11 - 02:32 pm · For: Chapter 7: Separate Missions
Its taken me forever to find a good Naruto/Harry potter fanfic that just drags me in. And u have done it. This story is amazingly written and i love how u make Gaara all fidgety around people and really just how u portray him. I also enjoy how u have done the story u have changed it but u haven't really changed the story of the deathly hollows. Please update soon i hate it when authors dont finish their story's. I hope u can include more Gaara though thats kinda the whole reason i read these stories.
Author's Response: Awww! :) Thank you so much! I'm so pleased you've enjoyed the story so far, and I'm VERY pleased that you like how I've portrayed Gaara. :) I'm always worried about that guy because I want to show how he's changed without making him see OOC. Thank you so much! And yes, I shall include more Gaara, I promise. :) The focus on these chapters has to alternate since there's so many, so there will be a lot of him in one chapter, then a little less in the next. Overall there will be quite a decent amount. And seeing as how Gaara is like my second favorite character I promise you there will be a lot to do with him. rnrnOh, and I WILL continue this story! I would never stop writing it. It's just that updates take a little longer than I'd like because RL gets in the way but there is NO way I could ever stop writing this story. Believe me--I'm put WAY too much effort into it to just give it up like this. :)
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 16/12/10 - 09:24 pm · For: Chapter 7: Separate Missions
well i hav much to say but little time to say it so ill just do the basics right now.
i love the chapter and dont mind at all the length. just more to read and enjoy from one of my favorite stories.
i like the battle with kankuro and the death eater; pretty amusing and nice. i rather thik him and the twins will get along fine.
in over all shorteness, the chapter is good and it's good to see the update! keep up the goood job and writing! i would rite more but im short on time
Name: belovedly_loveless (Signed) · Date: 24/08/10 - 04:49 am · For: Chapter 1: The Proposition
Haha i really like this so far. I never thought I'd like a HP and Naruto crossover as the two stories are complete opposites, but very well done.
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 21/08/10 - 06:30 pm · For: Chapter 6: Preparing for War
Well first off, I really don't mind the long wait for this chapter. I was overjoyed when I saw it up and felt very giddy. It's just wonderful to see a good story continue! Sadly I'm still working on edit mine. T.T
Too many to edit and so little time to do so...
Mah, I like the way you write this story very much. I feel that some of it would go exactly like the way you wrote it if Naruto and Harry Potter met. It's very entertaining and original to read and enjoy.
I don't see any real faults on this chapter, but like the scene changes. I think you should put a indictator of the scene change...a little though. It really doesn't bother me, just noticed it is all I did.
So to end this, good job. I think you're doing great and keep working hard!
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 19/01/10 - 07:40 pm · For: Chapter 5: A Rocky Start
love ur brillaince! its always awesome! i feel sry for Naruto but he's going to learn alot of tough things so ya...keep it up!
Name: Ardisaur_rawr (Signed) · Date: 19/01/10 - 02:29 pm · For: Chapter 5: A Rocky Start
Wow... the part where Naruto kills the Death Eater was terrifically graphic.
I was actually grimacing from it. I've seen worse, but the way you described it was incredibly morbid. The stench of burning flesh is the worst. It makes me gag just thinking about it....
I can't even imagine the way Naruto felt after that. It would've killed me inside to take the guy's life, even if he was a bad guy.
:( Poor Naruto-kun. So much crap has happened to him.
Well, good thing Ron wasn't a huge douche for too long. :/
On a happier note, Kankuro's okay and Gaara has a crush on Luna! haha
I think it's really sweet and sooooo cute!
This was an amazing chapter!
I just hope that you update faster; although, this was definitely worth the wait!
Name: ontuva (Signed) · Date: 01/12/09 - 01:30 pm · For: Chapter 4: 'Til Death Eaters Do We Part?
Oh my dear god. :D I love your story more and more. I mean this is so fluent! You are really good. It takes talent to combine two different worlds and make it seem natural. Or not natural, but... fitting. :D I hope you get what I mean.
I think I'm going to like this story more than the actual Deathly Hallows. ^^''
The way you described the battle was awesome! I had the adrenalirush and I really felt like I was there. :D And the way all the characters speak and act - it seems so natural to them. I haven't spotted any OOCness yet.
I really like your story. ^^ 10/10
(Ps. Where else do you publish this? :D)
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 17/11/09 - 07:47 pm · For: Chapter 4: 'Til Death Eaters Do We Part?
oohhh awesomeness! tht was great i love ur battle scene i felt lik i was actually there! and gaara havn a crush is so adorable! write on!
Name: Ardisaur_rawr (Signed) · Date: 17/11/09 - 07:41 pm · For: Chapter 4: 'Til Death Eaters Do We Part?
Ohhhhh man!!
Excitement!
This was an amazing chapter!
It took you a while to update, but it was well worth it!
Name: siagaara (Signed) · Date: 13/09/09 - 07:03 am · For: Chapter 1: The Proposition
hiiii im new... u r sooooooooooooo awwwsoooooomeeeee.... i read this one yesterday nd loved it sooooo much dat i searched for naruto and the goblet of fire, nd hv started readin it now.... u r reaaalllllly goood i admire ur creativity nd the way u write the story... tis just tooo good.. i just have to appreciate u...
Author's Response: Why, hello! Thanks for stopping by and I'm glad youre enjoying this so far! Hope you enjoy NGoF as well! Things might make a bit more sense that way. XD
Name: eldertensa (Signed) · Date: 12/09/09 - 08:48 pm · For: Chapter 3: A Cheerful Reunion
Amazing!
You are a great writer!
Author's Response: Awww, well thank you!
Name: Ardisaur_rawr (Signed) · Date: 12/09/09 - 05:51 pm · For: Chapter 3: A Cheerful Reunion
Awesome!!!
I love how Sakura just takes care of Naruto and Kankuro.
That was pretty funny.
Author's Response: Guys need girls to take care of them, right?
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 12/09/09 - 04:03 pm · For: Chapter 3: A Cheerful Reunion
well tht was such a funny chapter!! i love tht sakura has made the umlitate impression on the wizards and wat kankuro did to gaara....temari would b proud of him ^^
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you found it funny, 'cause I felt a little bad for it not being full of action. Temari is quite proud of him! I asked her. XD
Name: eldertensa (Signed) · Date: 29/08/09 - 05:12 pm · For: Chapter 2: The Long Debate
This is a great story, you are amazing!!!
Author's Response: Why, thank you! Glad you're enjoying it.
Name: Crimson Lily (Signed) · Date: 29/08/09 - 04:51 pm · For: Chapter 2: The Long Debate
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OH MY FRICKEN GOD THIS STORY IS SO GOOD!!!! I've been on the edge of my chair for the past thirty minutes while i read both chapters, and i CANT WAIT FOR YOU TO UPDATE!!!
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:D
Author's Response: :D Thank you so much! I really enjoy writing these crossovers and it's nice that others like it as well. I hope to update as soon as possible.
Name: Ardisaur_rawr (Signed) · Date: 27/08/09 - 09:00 pm · For: Chapter 2: The Long Debate
Yay!!! You updated!!!
this is really good!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! :) Glad you liked it.
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 26/08/09 - 11:59 am · For: Chapter 2: The Long Debate
hmmmm i hoped sai join the party oh well and...wat will kakashi do if naruto goes 3 or 4 tails?? meh
good chapter though nice and long and imformitive! Write On!
Author's Response: Yeah, I really like Sai but it just wouldn't have worked out the way I would have wanted it to. As for the number of tails, Kakashi might have one of those seals handy that he used when fighting Deidara. Why thank you! Yeah, this was a long explanation type of chapter. Next ones should be more enjoyable!
Name: Vixkill (Signed) · Date: 21/08/09 - 05:01 am · For: Chapter 1: The Proposition
you're just really good at writing! keep going!
Author's Response: Thank you! The next chapter should be up in the next two days.
Name: eldertensa (Signed) · Date: 08/08/09 - 01:21 pm · For: Chapter 1: The Proposition
THAT was Amazing!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! :) Glad you liked it.
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 02/08/09 - 02:49 pm · For: Chapter 1: The Proposition
^^ oo oo i loved the GoF series! now its the DH one, happy days! i hope u continue on! i cant wait to read more and i wonder what will happen and who will go! the excitement!
Write On!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Well, the original three are going but there are two others who are going. You'll just have to find out who they are with the next chapter, which should be up quite soon.
Name: Ardisaur_rawr (Signed) · Date: 02/08/09 - 02:44 pm · For: Chapter 1: The Proposition
YAY!!
I'm so excited!!!
Good start!
Author's Response: :) Me too! Thank you very much.
Name: ontuva (Signed) · Date: 02/08/09 - 12:35 pm · For: Chapter 1: The Proposition
You know, I read the Naruto and the Goblet of Fire few weeks ago and I have been waiting this eagerly since! :D I'm like a little girl in a candy shop! I almost jumped trough the roof, when I realised you have published the first chapter! :D
And about this - IT'S AWESOME! :D I mean, I'm hooked already and can't wait to read more and more and more and more.
Your writing style is stunning! I was interested in this one just after the fist sentence. And I'm not disappointed at all. :D I mean - *fangirl scream* I can't wait to read more! I love this!
Author's Response: Awww, well thank you! Mmmm, candy sounds good. XD Anyway, I'm really happy you like where it's going and I thank you for your kind words.