Reviews For Trains
Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: 18/12/12 - 09:26 am · For: Pleasing Gaara: You're Doing It Right
dang. The ending... is kinda sad?
Why do I always GaaNaru fics were as they always don't get together. That's is just sad. :(
Name: Nejisgirl (Signed) · Date: 06/09/09 - 10:24 pm · For: Pleasing Gaara: You're Doing It Right
Aww. This story is so incrediably sweet. I like it alot. Good job!
Author's Response: Thank you!! :D
Name: Miki Everless (Signed) · Date: 08/08/09 - 08:59 am · For: Pleasing Gaara: You're Doing It Right
...You just introduced me to a great song. Thank you. I'll return the favor...
All My Best Friends are Metalheads - Less Than Jake.
I love everything about the confession from Naruto. It was cute, awkward, and you couldn't describe the scenery any better.
I feel like I was there, experiencing everything Gaara was.
I've got to say, I was waiting impatiently for the word 'Khanzaila' to pop up so I could read the lemon. xP
And OMG. I am so pissed that nobody else has bothered to review this story. It's like TONFA's readers have lost sighting of a great story for so long that they can't recognize one anymore.
'Trains' is amazing. And I think I've read your other stories, as well... you're the author of 'Swimming Lessons', am I right? Well, this one blew it away. Way away.
Definitely favourited.
Author's Response: Woo, I remember that song from Digimon: The Movie, but never really looked into it :D But it's quite interesting, thanks for sharing!rnrnBut if it weren't for Porcupine Tree's song, I don't think I'd ever be inspired to write this, so I'm glad a friend shared it with me in the first place xDrnrnThank you! I feared it would be too cliché (in fact, the basic storyline, a jealousy fic involving Gaara, Naruto and Sasuke, was a request from a watcher of mine from dA, and I was afraid I'd make it too cliché), so it lessens my worries to know this story is so well-received :DrnrnLol, the lemon was crappy xD But at least now I can write them more reasonably, even if still a bit crappy too.rnrnYes, I did write Swimming Lessons ^^ And it's reassuring to hear that, because it means I've grown as a writer :D Well, I guess I'll post my other works here too (my most active account regarding fanfiction is really ff.net).rnrnThank you so much for everything! <3
Name: Miki Everless (Signed) · Date: 07/08/09 - 11:41 pm · For: Hope is...
No, Gaara... Naruto was the person that changed him. He cares for him so much.
Sasuke left Naruto. He's totally incapable of a romantic relationship due to his selfishness.
But I still have a glimmer of hope that what Naruto and Sasuke were talking about was his love for Gaara.
You know, I've always thought of Gaara as the poetic type. It's really nice to read from a writer that knows this. (Most people describe him as a blood-gulping bastard, even in Shippuuden.)
Update soon! I really want to know what happens. I'm so anxious.
Author's Response: Here comes the third chapter, your doubts shall vanish xDrnrnI do think so too, Gaara should have a beautiful way with words, so thank you! :D
Name: Miki Everless (Signed) · Date: 07/08/09 - 10:41 am · For: Warm Invitation
First off, I love the way you write. It's descriptive and it does the job well, but it's got humour and sarcasm intricately laced through it, and I just think that it's beautiful. It makes me want to read more.
Secondly, I am so frickin' excited to see the second chapter on the 'Most Recent' boards.
Thirdly, I really like how you portray Gaara. You make his character intriguing and describe him well, and we still see him as our beloved Sabaku no Gaara.
I love Naruto and Gaara as a couple. ^_^ And you seem like you could write an amazing story between them.
Please update soon. Please!
Author's Response: Thank you, I do try to make those three vertents well, so I'm glad you think so!rnrnWell, I have this story completed and posted on other sites already, but yeah, I'll be posting the second chapter here right away :D Then, just let me know when I can post the third (and last) one (which is my personal favorite and the longest).rnrnI like to think Gaara will grow that way after the series ends, so I'm happy you can still like him like this!rnrnI LOVE this two as a couple too :) In fact, among the many couples I like only this one and another one made the OTP status.rnrnThanks again for the very lovely review! :D I hope the rest of the story is to your liking too!