Is Shikamaru the main character of this? I think it'd be pretty awesome if he were. A different perspective for sure. Just one thing: could you differentiate between POV switches? Even an * on a line by itself would do the trick. I was really confused the first time.
Good story though.

~kiku~

Author's Response: I'm a fan of Shikamaru so I tried to put him in it alittle more with Naruto sense he has higher responsiblities. As for the POV do you mean whenever I change areas in the story? If so then will do.