Reviews For Kokoro Uchiha
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 02/04/10 - 06:16 pm · For: Chapter 30: Tinkling and Shopping
interesting developments...keep up the good work. *ps* u hav a few spelling errors X3
Author's Response: Thanks! Thanks for telling me! I don't really proofread... I should, right?
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 02/04/10 - 06:09 pm · For: Chapter 29: Only the Weak die
hmmmmm........the action sounds can be changed from using "bleh" to *bleh* it wouldnt be as confusing in my mind. just an opinion and also...i know most of it was all back ground info but...can u mayb zazz it up a bit? its just dry to me thats all.
Author's Response: I know. i was having a hard time writing that chapter, so i seriously don't expect it to be good.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 31/03/10 - 03:46 pm · For: Chapter 30: Tinkling and Shopping
If you mean the kids in the fanfic, they just act too mature, in my opinion. For kids who read it, no, it's just fine. I really love this story, Rose - chan, and I can't wait to read the next chapter!
P.S U ROCK!!!!!!!!!!! =)
Author's Response: Yeah, I mean kids who read my writing. I showed a sample of it to my caousins, and THEY liked it, but then the adults saw it (it had a bloody part) and they were all like, 'Goodness Gracious Moi!' I don't think they expected that type of writing from me..... Dunno why. THANK YOU SO MUCH!!! That helps a lot, gives me SO much confidence!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 30/03/10 - 03:07 pm · For: Chapter 29: Only the Weak die
0_0.... *parents raise an eyebrow when they see brown headed girl staring blankly at the computer*......How do you right so good, Rose-chan?! I absolutely love this story, and I can't wait for the next chapter! Update as quickly as possible!
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Author's Response: yay! I'm glad you like it so much, you're boosting my confidence up for my (hopeful) future writing career! ^^rnI'll update tonight, just need to do some last minute things.... Thanks for the review!
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 21/03/10 - 02:41 pm · For: Chapter 28: The Sharingan
hmm........nothing really to say its basic background info for anyone so cant wait for the com'n episode!
Author's Response: yeah, it pretty much is.... It's sorta a checking up on Sasuke episode.... Plus, it's sorta needed for my future chapters... Yeah! I'll put up another chapter as soon as possible, promise!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 13/03/10 - 12:14 pm · For: Chapter 28: The Sharingan
Sorry I didn't review before. It's a really good story, and I can't wait to read the next chapter! Please write more soon!
Author's Response: i will! sorry i'm taking so long!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 08/03/10 - 02:54 pm · For: Chapter 27: A Glimpse of the Past Part. 1
really great story, Rose-chan!I can't wait to read the next chapter! I'm sorry it took me so long to read this chapter. It was really good!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad that you liked it so much, I was worried it would be bad 'cuz I had to look at the naruto book for most of it. Masashi Kisimoto is such a good autho/artist, ne?
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 04/02/10 - 06:34 pm · For: Chapter 27: A Glimpse of the Past Part. 1
so its a flashback basically? I like it, its cute and fluffy!
Author's Response: Yup, it's sorta like that! I'm glad you like it... I think it's important to the story.
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 28/01/10 - 08:14 pm · For: Chapter 26: WE DON"T KNOW THEIR NAMES! O.O
this chapter was short but, very amusing i cant wait to see wat develops~ keep moving forward gf!
Author's Response: Sorry it was so short, thank you for saying it's amusing, and I'll try my best to trudge on forwards with a smile, a pen, apaper, a laptop, a car, a warm bed, an internet access, a library card... Hmm, what else will I need? ^^ Thank you for reviewing, i'll try to update soon! Let me start nagging my mom to get me to the library. :)
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 28/01/10 - 01:15 pm · For: Chapter 26: WE DON"T KNOW THEIR NAMES! O.O
hahaha! I laugh this story. I can't wait for the next chapter. Please please please hurry with it!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it, and I'm glad you laughed! :)
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 28/12/09 - 06:27 am · For: Chapter 25: The story
What frightened them so much? Anyway, great chapter. I wonder what Dai will do with the blood. Anyway, can you read my two knew storied, even though Until the End mainly tells you info on the story.
Author's Response: Well, you'll find out what got them so scared! And, I'll try to read your stories! I just don't have time to review... I have to STUUDY for school, and it's a total headache..
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 28/12/09 - 12:09 am · For: Chapter 25: The story
indeed what made the children panick and why are the ninja giving up so easily? i would think that they would pursue the killer of the banits and question them...then again...going by the book seems the way things usually work...
on Memory Touch...i have no idea really when ill update...ill try later but i really want to finish a chapter im working on for Seeing Beauty. HOpe you have a safe trip!
Author's Response: Yeah, i guess they should've chased after the children, but they were in a hurry... Thanks! I had a safe trip, and it was awesome! Snow, aah, snow. Although i wouldn't ant to live where it snowed forever..:)
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 22/12/09 - 12:24 am · For: Chapter 24: A second heart
nice....i lik this chapter it makes me feel that we as the readers are getting to know the character kokoro better, nicely done!
Author's Response: Really? Thanks! I'm glad you feel that way! :)
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 21/12/09 - 07:03 pm · For: Chapter 24: A second heart
T-T....That was so fricken sad!!! Poor Koko! Why do you have to make her feel like that? Boo on you... Yet at the same time, you rock at the same time! Please please please continue.
Author's Response: I know, I'm sorry, but Koko isn't a cold hearted murderer so she had to feel like that! And, thank you for reviewing, I'll try my best to update soon! This is going to be a hectic couple of weeks I think- I'm going somewhere where it actually 'snows', so we have to get snow gear and prepare... ANd I'll probably be going to my cuz's house... But I'll try my best to update, PROMISE!
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 14/12/09 - 10:36 pm · For: Chapter 23: Bandits- you gotta hate 'em.
well...i glad the bantis are no more but... Kokoro is becoming mor of a perfect shinobi in mind of having no prob in killin...*shiver* i wonder wat sasuke will think and if it get lik even worse or sumen...bah brain being weird nicely done!!
Author's Response: Uh, yeah, sorry to say, buu-ut, the bandits aren't exaaactly no more.... You'll understand as you read on. And thank you for reviewing! You know, i think my chaps are getting more and more depressing.... I better liven them up!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 14/12/09 - 02:43 pm · For: Chapter 23: Bandits- you gotta hate 'em.
okay, just pointing this out, Kokoro sounds way more mature than a nine or ten year old. Second, this is a really great story, Rose-chan! I can't wait for the next chapter. BTW, have you ever heard of Wortyofpublishing.com?Well, I wrote a story on there called Revived by Bre2k8, and I was wondering if you could read it?
Author's Response: Oh yeah, Koko isn't nine or ten, she's in her early elevens. Thank you! I haven't heard of that website, I can't wait to check it out!
Name: bre2k8 (Anonymous) · Date: 06/12/09 - 05:33 am · For: Chapter 22: The Haven
Wow!That was a great chapter.Sorry it took me sooooo long to read.I kept reading it,then I had to stop.I read it,then had to stop.Anyways,when you put and how they dealed with it,it should be how they dealt with it.........
Author's Response: That's ok, thank you for reviewing! Hmm, yeah, I should edit that!
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 03/12/09 - 06:46 pm · For: Chapter 22: The Haven
hm... it does seem a lil rushed but its fine...do no a lil jap bty? im trying to fig out sum words and cant...its very bothersome...or u new som1 tht would b good too
it thik u should keep going with this story and do wat u feel like, its ur story do wat u thik is great!
Author's Response: No, I don't know japanese... *sweatdrop* I just google, change in japanese, and get it... Thanks, I'll try to make my story the best possible I can!
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 19/11/09 - 05:33 pm · For: Chapter 1: The Calm before the Storm
Hmmm….not to bad…nice I lil ending, could’ve I dunno had mayb more emotions in but hey its good! Can wait to see the time skip or u going to go a different route? Keep it up!
Author's Response: Yeah, in the next chapter, everyone sorta actually 'realizes' that she's gone and that she might not be coming back, even Kokoro and Luna themselves, so theres more emotion then.
Author's Response: Yeah, in the next chapter, everyone sorta actually 'realizes' that she's gone and that she might not be coming back, even Kokoro and Luna themselves, so theres more emotion then.
Name: bre2k8 (Anonymous) · Date: 19/11/09 - 01:19 pm · For: Chapter 21: Gone
Oh...Pour Ryu.I feel really bad for the pour guy.Anyways,I can't wait for the next chapter,so hurry up!
Author's Response: I will!
Name: bre2k8 (Anonymous) · Date: 19/11/09 - 01:11 pm · For: Chapter 20: Don't you know? Goodbyes can never be hurried.
Wow....I don't know what to say.....
P.S.That is in the good way.
Author's Response: Oh, that's good! :)
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 18/11/09 - 11:48 pm · For: Chapter 20: Don't you know? Goodbyes can never be hurried.
ok b4 the rev on story word of advic...dnt lie on age, it can get u n trouble.
on the story however i like where this is going! its getting exciting and makes u wonder wats nxt for kokoro and luna can t waiT! ^^
Author's Response: Why? Isn't it better to seem older than you are so that people don't try to take advantage of you? But, i'll take your advice. Ahaha, I'm glad you think so! I just put up a new chapter!
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 01/11/09 - 05:22 pm · For: Chapter 19: Ah, Awakening! It's more tiring than it looks...
hmm....feels a lil rushed but its ok, you did a good job retelling the events from a dif POV and it was good.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Name: bre2k8 (Anonymous) · Date: 31/10/09 - 06:21 am · For: Chapter 19: Ah, Awakening! It's more tiring than it looks...
Wow!I love your stories, Rose-chan!I can't wait for the next chapter of this story, so please please please hurry!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!!!
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 24/10/09 - 05:05 pm · For: Chapter 18: Bonus chapter: Romeo and Juliet, starring Shun as Romeo and Kokoro as Juliet!
XD very amusing, FYI if u want a good source on a bk, lik the sum of a bk go to SPARKNOTES.COM it will do wonders! anywho the chapter was a tad short but its fine. nice job d^^b
Author's Response: Heh, thanks! I'll be sure to try it out!rn