Reviews For FIRE HOUND: Eye of Destruction
Name: nerdy_narutard (Signed) · Date: 14/07/09 - 01:02 pm · For: REALLY?!
Wait.... what?? REALLY!!!????
Name: nerdy_narutard (Signed) · Date: 14/07/09 - 01:00 pm · For: ACT XII: Ch. 36 "Kali Will Never go Away Again!"
“Oh, yeah...” She said in a low, but confident tone. “We're gonna ROCK this town...”
Hahahaha I love it!
Name: Kakashifan727 (Signed) · Date: 02/07/09 - 09:20 am · For: ACT XII: Ch. 35 "New Friends; New Enemies"
I love it! And do you you know you have it as a round robin? That's mean other people can add to it as they see fit.
Name: Ardisaur_rawr (Signed) · Date: 26/06/09 - 08:37 pm · For: ACT XII: Ch. 35 "New Friends; New Enemies"
Ewww..... Keikoku is a creeper.
I hate her!!!
Name: Ardisaur_rawr (Signed) · Date: 16/06/09 - 12:25 am · For: ACT XII: Ch. 34 "The Dreamweaver"
wow....... Interesting!!!
Name: Miki Everless (Signed) · Date: 08/06/09 - 09:49 pm · For: ACT XI: Ch. 33 "Don't Go Breakin' My Heart"
No...
Kuriochi! Fuck!
Kaliana died... So did Temari... Gaara doesn't have anybody but Kankurou anymore.
"You’re disgusting. I killed my entire clan and I think YOU’RE disgusting!” LMAO.
I was lauging and crying with this chapter.
Damn cliffhangers. Update soon!
Name: Ardisaur_rawr (Signed) · Date: 01/06/09 - 07:15 pm · For: ACT X: Ch. 30 "The Abduction"
Ahhhhh!!!!
That's all I did when I finished this act!!
haha
This story is extremely awesome!!
XD
Name: Miki Everless (Signed) · Date: 26/05/09 - 05:19 am · For: ACT IX: Ch. 27 "A Deal With the Devil"
FUCK. I can't believe that Kabuto unlocked the last clue.
Gaara's a little OOC once he meets Kaliana again, but cute nonetheless. Like, really. He's so innocent! ^__^
It kinda made me sad when Naruto's to-be girlfriend killed herself. She has the same mindset as Neji, but she didn't bother to change herself.
Update soon! I LOVE THIS!!!!
Name: Ardisaur_rawr (Signed) · Date: 25/05/09 - 07:42 pm · For: ACT IX: Ch. 27 "A Deal With the Devil"
Gross!!!! I hate Kabuto!!
Dang it!!
These people are inept ninjas!!
They haven't even told Kakashi what's going on yet!!
It's making me insane in the membrane!!
hehe
But this is a very good story and it excites me to no end!!!
Good job!!!
Name: Ardisaur_rawr (Signed) · Date: 19/05/09 - 03:55 pm · For: ACT VIII: Ch. 24 "A Tale of Two Kaliana's"
Oh, geez..... poor nameless girl!!
lol
Name: Kikyaru360 (Signed) · Date: 18/05/09 - 04:55 pm · For: ACT I: Ch2 "From Spark to Flame"
Wow, that back and forth haku insult fest was pretty funny.
"CONSIDER YOUR ASS OFFICIALLY KICKED!!!! IT WILL BE KICKED! AND I WILL BE THERE TO DO THE KICKING!”"
Ah, a past time of mine. Like it so far (:
Name: DonniiE (Signed) · Date: 11/05/09 - 10:56 pm · For: ACT VII: Ch. 21 "They Call Me MISTER Hound"
Awesome Act ^^
The Last Chapter was different than the rest, but it was still great .(:
I especially liked Part 19 with the " Itachi - Raven " .
Hehee . That got me to laugh .;D
Can't wait for the next Act !
-Donna[:
Name: Kikyaru360 (Signed) · Date: 29/04/09 - 07:05 pm · For: ACT I: Ch1 "Who's That Girl?"
Wow, this is compelling, but I can't read any more right now. I like it.
(:
Author's Response: Trust me, my friend...the story only becomes more compelling as the chapters go on...Thanks for enjoying it! Can't wait to hear your thoughts as you continue reading!
Name: DropDeadThenDance (Signed) · Date: 28/04/09 - 08:17 am · For: ACT VI: Ch. 18 "And the Game Gets Deadlier..."
Oh great! THE AKATSUKI ARE IN IT NOW!!! Lovely!
Man this was a great act, the last bit was so deserving of that warning XD
Anyway, I'll be looking forward to the next act and finding out if that demon hound can talk to Kali, kay?
See ya then!!
Name: Miki Everless (Signed) · Date: 28/04/09 - 04:55 am · For: ACT VI: Ch. 18 "And the Game Gets Deadlier..."
AH! AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH! Hahhaha! YEAHHHH!
*totally ecstatic after reading the 2 acts*
You should be immensely proud of yourself, my friend.
Name: Ardisaur_rawr (Signed) · Date: 27/04/09 - 03:58 pm · For: ACT VI: Ch. 18 "And the Game Gets Deadlier..."
Hmmm.... interesting.
I was wondering when you were going to pull Itachi back into this!!
I hope she tells her uncle soon!!
Awesome Volume!!
;]
Name: AikoMatsuo (Signed) · Date: 21/04/09 - 11:58 am · For: ACT V: Ch. 15 "Forever a Distraction"
omg amzing keep it up. and i really want Kaliana to telll Kakashi about what happend ^-^
Love aIKO
XOXOXOX
10000000000000000000000000000000000000/10
Name: Ardisaur_rawr (Signed) · Date: 20/04/09 - 04:06 pm · For: ACT V: Ch. 15 "Forever a Distraction"
Geez!! Kaliana just makes friends where ever she goes... she even made friends with Gaara... but that's before he completely changed into a bloodthirsty monster.
haha
This is getting crazy!!!
Keep going!!
Name: DropDeadThenDance (Signed) · Date: 15/04/09 - 08:02 am · For: ACT IV: Ch 12 "Twilight Puppet"
That was pretty good. Weird but good.
Man I want to Kabuto get his ass kicked! I hate that guy... Orochimaru too. Whatever though, good act and I'm lookming forward to the next one! See ya then!!
Name: Miki Everless (Signed) · Date: 14/04/09 - 05:52 am · For: ACT IV: Ch 12 "Twilight Puppet"
...Fuck.
I hoped that Kaliana would show her strength instead of passing out in Orochimaru's arms, LULZ.
This story is so awesome... yet, with every story, there is a flaw.
The flaw that I see is that Kaliana is too perfect. She's insanely beautiful, insanely strong, and has a mad cool personality.
Not really a major flaw (your writing skill definitely compensates for it), but she comes off as a bit of a Mary Sue.
Well, I really did enjoy Act III, and I hope you update soon!
Author's Response: Insanely Beautiful: She wears a mask to cover up her circus-lips XD As for a nice body...what anime character DOESN'T have a nice body? (Choji doesn't count...lolz)rnrnInsanely Strong: If she were so insanely strong, she woulda showed her strength instead of passing out in Orochimaru's arms!rnrnMad Cool Personality: I was always informed that Mary Sues had one of those insufferable 'I'm-better-then-you' attitudes...Kaliana is an incompetant, clumsy, destructive, forgetful, smart ass oaf. Oh, yeah...Love da Oaf... :)rnrnIf there are flaws in this story, it's not because Kaliana is a MarySue (she is SO far from being MarySue). I respect your opinion, though and am very happy you are enjoying the story! Enjoy the next ACT!
Name: Ardisaur_rawr (Signed) · Date: 13/04/09 - 05:47 pm · For: ACT IV: Ch 12 "Twilight Puppet"
Hmm...... I really hate Orochimaru.
He's soooo creepy.
It makes my skin crawl!!
*shudders*
I hope Kaliana is gonna be okay!!!
Name: DropDeadThenDance (Signed) · Date: 08/04/09 - 02:28 pm · For: ACT III Ch. 9 "The Beat Down"
WOW!! Great act as usual! I feel bad for Kaliana though... WHEN IS SHE GOING TO TELL KAKASHI WHAT HAPPENED?!!
Boy, driving me crazy there... Anyway, again, great Act and I look forward to the next one!!
Name: Ardisaur_rawr (Signed) · Date: 06/04/09 - 06:04 pm · For: ACT III Ch. 9 "The Beat Down"
Finally!!!
lol
She needs to tell him, the silly girl!!
I'm gonna go crazy!! hehe
Name: Miki Everless (Signed) · Date: 06/04/09 - 06:00 pm · For: ACT III Ch. 9 "The Beat Down"
Wow... I guess Kakashi's still heartbroken over 'Kaliana's' horrible phone call.
DAMN! Why didn't she tell him anything???
I'm eager to find out about this Inuzuka Eudame.
Update soon!
Name: DropDeadThenDance (Signed) · Date: 02/04/09 - 08:34 am · For: ACT II Ch.6 "A Stronger, Faster, Walking Disaster"
That was awesome!!!
Kaliana is such a little monster, poor Iruka. Man this whole act was awesome! To bad Kabuto's there but the part with the coffee was funny :)
Can't wait for act 3!!
Peace XD