Reviews For Don't Come After Me
Name: AphoriditeRose (Signed) · Date: 01/02/09 - 10:50 am · For: Don't Come After Me
Wow.
.. Wow. XD
That was really rather depressing. Have a bad day? It was really good though, you managed to keep them in character really well! x
Name: fuyuko (Signed) · Date: 21/01/09 - 02:02 am · For: Don't Come After Me
I loved it!!
It's really quite depressing, but I guess it's my kind of story. b^^
I liked your writing style.
May ask, if you will, to space things out a bit more. Like the lines of fighting speech? Maybe make a space between each. And find synonyms for "yelled" and "screamed".
It kind of sounds like a "School Days" story; I sound like I'm rambling. But I liked this story a lot!!
Name: xXxMitsubishi HanaxXx (Signed) · Date: 19/01/09 - 05:51 pm · For: Don't Come After Me
I like this story. Very angsty and dark. I give it a 5.