Reviews For On the Bridge of Fate
Name: Persy321 (Signed) · Date: 20/02/09 - 04:02 pm · For: Chapter 5: The First Mission
loveddd it! <3 freakin awsomeness! good job! cant ever get tired of this ever! in the whole wide world! again, good job! 10!
Author's Response: haha thanks so much!rnhope to update soon, but i updated on my other story!rncheck it out!rn:D
Name: ItachiUchihaLover (Signed) · Date: 19/02/09 - 03:10 pm · For: Chapter 5: The First Mission
GREAT CHAPTER!!!
Neji and Haru are soo cute together!
Hurry with the next chapter!
but plzzzzz update ur first story first! plz plz plz plz plz plz
I really want to know how the ball goes!!! =D
LOVE YOUR STORIES!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: haha thanks! rnya ill update on the first story, cuz thats the order. if i update on one story, i cant update that story until i update on the other one. so since i just updated this one, Katsumi's coming next!!! rnthanks so much for reviewing on practically every chapterrnTHANK YOU, U R AMAZING!
Name: AikoMatsuo (Signed) · Date: 19/02/09 - 02:26 am · For: Chapter 5: The First Mission
hay amazing i love IT!!!!!!!!!!
you need to keep it up or ill like die XP
love Aiko
oxoxoxox
1000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000/10
Author's Response: haha thanks so much!rnhope you like the rest, and plz keep reviewing!!!rnalso, if u want, u could read my other story, Another Survivor: Uchiha Love Blossomsrn:P
Name: DonniiE (Signed) · Date: 14/02/09 - 01:26 pm · For: Chapter 4: Placement
Hahaas . Sasuke got beat ! [x
Cool story :D I really like it . Hope you update soon ~ ! [:
Haru's awesome . Especially since she's so pweeetiieeee ! Lols x3
-DonniiE
Author's Response: haha ya sasuke's not invincible! he has some weakness, like a certain medic...ahem...sakura..rnthanks so much! i hope to update in the next few days, but im not surernya she is really pretty, because of her true heritage...which i havent revealed yet...bwahhahaha!!rnkeep reviewing!!!
Name: ItachiUchihaLover (Signed) · Date: 08/02/09 - 11:25 am · For: Chapter 4: Placement
wow...she totally kicked Sasuke's butt!
lol Bamboo Village lol
Awww Sasuke and Sakura are soo sweet! I wish they were together in the real show.
hurry with the next chapter!
Oh! I updated! =D
Author's Response: haha i just had to rub it in sasuke's face that he's not the most powerful guy there is, cuz he kinda has a superiority complex!rnhey i was being creative with that name, so no knocking my bamboo village!rnthey would be perfect in the real show, and im so sad they arentrni willrnyay more updates!!!
Name: Persy321 (Signed) · Date: 31/01/09 - 04:38 pm · For: Chapter 4: Placement
HECK YEAH! GET SOME! I LOVED IT! CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE! ^-^ omg...ur so freakin awsome! sasuke and sakura is soo cute! <3
Author's Response: i luv sasuke and sakura too!!! they are by far the best couple ever!! :Prnthx for reviewing!!
Name: Persy321 (Signed) · Date: 31/01/09 - 04:26 pm · For: Chapter 3: All Five Elements
dude! that was fricking awsome! more! ^-^ 10!
Author's Response: thank you so much!!!!
Name: Persy321 (Signed) · Date: 31/01/09 - 03:59 pm · For: Chapter 2: Unanswerable
omg! i love it! i need more! 10!
Author's Response: thx so much!
Name: Miki Everless (Signed) · Date: 31/01/09 - 03:59 pm · For: Prolouge: Konoha
Wow! This story's really good! The main character is a little Mary Sue-ish, but it's well-written and UPDATE SOON!
Author's Response: uhhh wat does mary-suish mean? like she's too innocent or something??? rn???rnanyway, thx for reviewing, and i hope to update soon!
Name: sakura_sasuke17 (Signed) · Date: 31/01/09 - 03:33 pm · For: Chapter 4: Placement
aww that is sweet sasuke really does love sakura :) keep writing, it's great
Author's Response: haha ya i really luv sasuke and sakura together, they are amazing!!! thx for reviewing!
Name: ItachiUchihaLover (Signed) · Date: 29/01/09 - 05:19 pm · For: Chapter 3: All Five Elements
CHIFF HANGERS OF DOOM!!! Nooooooo! the chapter was better than awesome it was...was... words can't decribe it! hurry with the next one!
Author's Response: haha i do luv those cliffhangers! thx so much, i really liked it too. im currently working on the 4th chapter, but school is making it extremely difficult. so im sorry in advance if it takes a while to update!
Name: Persy321 (Signed) · Date: 27/01/09 - 05:09 pm · For: Chapter 1: New Beginning
omg... i loved this! keep going plz...10! ^-^ i am soo happy to see something different to read other than the others.lol
Author's Response: awww thx! ive kinda gotten tired of the same old stories, again and again...and again. so i mixed it up a bit, by making them already together instead of the whole story being about how the couples realize they are meant for each other. thx so much for reviewing!!! u guys really keep me going!!! :P :D
Name: Persy321 (Signed) · Date: 26/01/09 - 03:53 pm · For: Prolouge: Konoha
omg! i love this! good job!
Author's Response: thx! hope to update soon! :P
Name: Persy321 (Signed) · Date: 26/01/09 - 03:51 pm · For: Prolouge: Konoha
omg! i love this! good job!
Author's Response: haha thanks! and by the way u posted this twice! not a huge deal, just letting you know. rnThanks so much for reviewing, and i hope u like the story so far!!!
Name: sakura_sasuke17 (Signed) · Date: 26/01/09 - 03:42 pm · For: Chapter 3: All Five Elements
lol tsunade just choked in surprise. i do like your writing style it works out very well, keep writing. :)
Author's Response: i know i thought it would be funny if something happened, cuz they cant just keep getting more and more surprised! something has to happen!rnthx so much for reviewing!! :P
Name: Redbunny13 (Signed) · Date: 26/01/09 - 04:47 am · For: Chapter 3: All Five Elements
hehehe! that was funny. Haru is like a little girl, thinking she did something bad. I liked when Tsunade spit her tea. Did she even have tea, in the beginning? Ghaa! nevermind. Good chapter! :P
Author's Response: ya i just kinda added the tea in there without really thinking, sry! rnthx for reviewing!!!
Name: ItachiUchihaLover (Signed) · Date: 25/01/09 - 06:39 pm · For: Chapter 2: Unanswerable
THIS STORY IS AWESOME!!! =D hurry with the next chapter! Neji and Haru are so cute! =D
Author's Response: haha thanks! hope u like the new chapter!
Name: ItachiUchihaLover (Signed) · Date: 25/01/09 - 06:24 pm · For: Chapter 1: New Beginning
...you I just noticed something... Haru kind of like Kamikaze from my story.
She doesn't like to be touched.
She is very beutiful.
She has a seal that brings her pain.
She doesn't no her past.
She is new to the village.
0.o wow thats a lot! Anywayzz great chapter! I'm on to read the next one! =D Hurry with chapter 3!!!
OH! I updated! =D
Author's Response: thanks! ya im posting chapter 3 right NOW!!! hope u like it!rnand if i did copy ur character please forgive me, cuz i had no intention of doing so!! :P
Name: Redbunny13 (Signed) · Date: 22/01/09 - 06:59 pm · For: Chapter 2: Unanswerable
..................YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY! That was an awsome chapter! :D
Author's Response: ha ha...Ur enthusiasm is very encouraging. I would appreciate a little more constructive criticism though. Nothing bad, just specific concepts you liked and what i should improve on. but ur reviews are awesome and i hope you like the rest of the story!! rn:Prn:)rn:D
Name: Redbunny13 (Signed) · Date: 21/01/09 - 01:53 pm · For: Chapter 1: New Beginning
:D yay to couples! something going on between Haru and Neji ;P. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: ya NaruHina, SasuSaku, ShikaIno are some of my absolute favorite couples! rncant tell you about Haru and Neji...maybe...maybe not...rnhave to keep reading to find out!!!rnsee you next chapter! :D
Name: sakura_sasuke17 (Signed) · Date: 19/01/09 - 07:48 pm · For: Chapter 1: New Beginning
i am proud to be one of your three reviewers. your story is great hope to read more on it.
Author's Response: thx so much!! ya im definitely continuing this story, so keep reading!!! :P
Name: Redbunny13 (Signed) · Date: 19/01/09 - 01:49 pm · For: Prolouge: Konoha
Wow! O.O poor girl... well, let me tell you that you should keep on writing this, but don't forget your other story! :D
Author's Response: thx a lot for reviewing! haha dont worry, i am still continuing Another Survivor: Uchiha Love Blossoms, but since i have 2 stories on my plate now, it might take a bit longer for updates. im trying to alternate between chapters, write one chapter for a story, post it, and then write the next chapter for the other one. i'd really appreaciate you also reading my other story, and reviewing just to give me some feedback. rnThanks for reviewing and enjoy the rest of my stories!! rn:D
Name: ItachiUchihaLover (Signed) · Date: 18/01/09 - 09:04 am · For: Prolouge: Konoha
YEAH!!! This is MY kind of story!!! LOVE IT!!!! PLEASE write more!!! =D =D
Can not wait for the next chapter on both of your stories!!!
Author's Response: awwww thanks so much! i was totally afraid people wouldn't like it! k ill totally write more, but just be warned that now that im juggling 2 stories the updates might take a bit longer than usual. But I'll try to update on On the Bridge of Fate soon!!!!!
Name: sakura_sasuke17 (Signed) · Date: 17/01/09 - 08:09 pm · For: Prolouge: Konoha
i like the prologue and would like to read more on this. please do write more
Author's Response: thx! i have another story too, so it might take awhile. can u also look at my other story? rnAnother Survivor: Uchiha Love Blossoms rnthats wat its called. rnthx for reviewing!!!