Reviews For On the Bridge of Fate
Name: Persy321 (Signed) · Date: 10/07/09 - 10:50 am · For: Chapter 18: Confessions and Silence
lol! omg..that was soo funny! good job!
Name: Persy321 (Signed) · Date: 10/07/09 - 10:49 am · For: Chapter 17: Falling
omg this was such a sad chapter :( but it was still good :) loved it! good job!
Name: inuyashas_only_1 (Signed) · Date: 04/07/09 - 12:59 pm · For: Chapter 1: New Beginning
I love all the detail you've out into this-- it's interesting and fun, and keeps me hooked. Haru seems very beautiful, and Sakura kind. I like the way you've portrayed each character, particularly Ino (not sure why). Please keep developing these characters! I'm enjoying this story a lot; expect to see more reviews from me! Arigato, Crimson Lily-- this story is shaping up to be a favorite.
Author's Response: awww you're so NICE!!!! thanks so much, and im so happy to hear that you like the story! i was afraid in the begining that Haru would turn into a lame Mary Sue kinda character, but i think i've made her a bit more flawed, so its all good. see you next time! :D
Name: inuyashas_only_1 (Signed) · Date: 04/07/09 - 12:56 pm · For: Chapter 1: New Beginning
I love all the detail you've out into this-- it's interesting and fun, and keeps me hooked. Haru seems very beautiful, and Sakura kind. I like the way you've portrayed each character, particularly Ino (not sure why). Please keep developing these characters! I'm enjoying this story a lot; expect to see more reviews from me! Arigato, Crimson Lily-- this story is shaping up to be a favorite.
Name: inuyashas_only_1 (Signed) · Date: 04/07/09 - 12:49 pm · For: Prolouge: Konoha
I like the prologue-- good idea, if possibly one that everyone's heard before. I like the way that the area around Konoha is described-- lush plants and a waterfall. I've always just thought of it as a forest, but this is new and interesting.
Name: Persy321 (Signed) · Date: 30/06/09 - 06:28 pm · For: Chapter 16: Dark Cave
omg....cant wait for the next one! bring it on! haaaa! 10!
Name: Persy321 (Signed) · Date: 30/06/09 - 06:16 pm · For: Chapter 15: Teammates
O_O omg...love it! <3 heck yes! more more!
Name: Persy321 (Signed) · Date: 30/06/09 - 06:09 pm · For: Chapter 14: Birthday Surprises
holy crap! sakura freakin interrupted! :( lol! XD freakin hilarious! i love it! more woman! entertain meh! 10!
Name: Persy321 (Signed) · Date: 30/06/09 - 05:31 pm · For: Chapter 13: Time Passes
HAHA! MORE WOMAN! I LOVE THIS! THIS IS MY NEW BOYFRIEND! XD LOL! JK JK...10!
Name: Persy321 (Signed) · Date: 30/06/09 - 05:04 pm · For: Chapter 12: Home
hehe kiba!!!!!!!!!!!!!! that was soo cute! more!
Name: Persy321 (Signed) · Date: 30/06/09 - 04:57 pm · For: Chapter 11: Feelings
omg! loved it! soo freakn perfect! *sighs* i wish this could be real show.....crap....lol! anyway! i loved the couples! :D good job! and i forgot to tell u, that picture on ur story here...is soo cool! i love it! one of my favs! 10!
Name: Ardisaur_rawr (Signed) · Date: 30/06/09 - 01:35 pm · For: Chapter 16: Dark Cave
Wow..... didn't see that one coming!!!
Eww.... caves can be pretty rank if you ask me!!
lol
Author's Response: thanks! I agree. :D
Name: Persy321 (Signed) · Date: 29/06/09 - 05:54 pm · For: Chapter 10: Haru Svit-terrai
omg...dude..i am soo sorry i havent been here reading ur chapters and stories.. :( but anyway, i loved this chapter! especially at the end ^-^ good job!
Name: Ardisaur_rawr (Signed) · Date: 27/06/09 - 11:27 am · For: Chapter 15: Teammates
Awww...... that's sad!!
I hope nothing really bad has happened to Lee and Tenten!! That would suck!!!
Name: ItachiUchihaLover (Signed) · Date: 26/06/09 - 06:25 pm · For: Chapter 15: Teammates
awwww so cute!
Oh I hope tenten and lee are all right.
hurry with the next chapter! I can't wait!
Name: bre2k8 (Anonymous) · Date: 23/06/09 - 05:05 pm · For: Prolouge: Konoha
Great chapter Crimson lily!
Name: Ardisaur_rawr (Signed) · Date: 16/06/09 - 01:06 pm · For: Chapter 14: Birthday Surprises
Awww!!!
Sooo cute!!
I love this soooo much!!
It's my 16th birthday today, so I'm especially entitled to be a giddy nerd!!!
haha
Author's Response: haha thanks so much! HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!! :P
Name: Ardisaur_rawr (Signed) · Date: 16/06/09 - 01:04 pm · For: Chapter 14: Birthday Surprises
Awww!!!
Sooo cute!!
I love this soooo much!!
It's my 16th birthday today, so I'm especially entitled to be a giddy nerd!!!
haha
Name: sakura_sasuke17 (Signed) · Date: 08/06/09 - 10:30 am · For: Chapter 14: Birthday Surprises
that is really good, i really loved the birthday, keep writing :)
Author's Response: thanks so much!! :D
Name: ItachiUchihaLover (Signed) · Date: 06/06/09 - 10:17 am · For: Chapter 14: Birthday Surprises
one word.... WOW! That chapter was awesome!!!!
I cant believe that Sakura intreupted!!!!!!!!! I want to see them kiss!! -sigh- oh well
Great chapter! Of course all your chapters are great.....ANYWAYZZZ
hurry with another awesome chapter!
100000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000/10
Author's Response: haha thanks so much! ya i was going to have them kiss, but then i thought it would be funnier if someone inturupted them. i was going to have sasuke interupt, but that was just a bit too akward to really make it work. thanks for reviewing, and I'll see you next chapter!!!! :D
Name: ItachiUchihaLover (Signed) · Date: 31/05/09 - 12:15 pm · For: Chapter 13: Time Passes
AWWWWW SO CUTE!!!
anyways the chapter went a little fast, but as always was awesome.
I like how ur making Haru's relationship with Neji go slow. Some story tend to make them go really fast. Keep up the good work!
I LOVE the chapter! xD
Author's Response: haha ya i know, it was really fast, but i had to make some time past so their relationship was more defined! :D ya, i've always liked slow relationships, so i love writing them too!!! thanks for reviewing! :P
Name: sakura_sasuke17 (Signed) · Date: 30/05/09 - 08:07 pm · For: Chapter 13: Time Passes
aww that is sweet, i hope neji and haru get together soon. :) keep writing it's awesome
Name: Ardisaur_rawr (Signed) · Date: 30/05/09 - 07:41 pm · For: Chapter 13: Time Passes
Awwww.....
That's cute!!!
Author's Response: haha thanks very much! i hope i made the whole time skip clear enough! I was afraid i would get reviews asking what the hell happened in this chapter! :D
Name: sakura_sasuke17 (Signed) · Date: 24/05/09 - 11:40 am · For: Chapter 12: Home
aww that is sweet, kiba is falling for her lol keep writing, it is good :)
Name: Miki Everless (Signed) · Date: 22/05/09 - 07:11 pm · For: Chapter 12: Home
*feels all fuzzy inside*
Hehe! Kiba/Yuki!
Update soon; this is getting really good! ^__^
Author's Response: :D Thanks so much!!!! :P