Reviews For Kisa (Itachi and Yuki's daughter)
Name: DokuroBerri (Signed) · Date: 29/11/11 - 12:33 am · For: Kisa's thanksgiving
Aww... I loved reading this! It was simply adorable! I love the character interaction.
Author's Response: Thanks ^.^ I'm glad you like it though I think the typo's in this stories are killing me -sweat drop-
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 28/11/11 - 04:59 pm · For: Kisa's thanksgiving
This was overall, very cute. I quite like Kisa, her innocence as a child was really well portrayed in this. I really liked the way her childish naivety was illustrated, especially with the Akatsuki and Yuki. It makes it so funny in my mind, personally.
As for your concerns in the beginning, about being a good writer, don't worry. You're a brilliantly insightful and unique writer. Your grammar is the only issue, but I feel rather redundant by repeating it.
But anyway, great job on this story! I always enjoy reading your writing, it always makes me happy :) Keep up the wonderful work with your writing!
Author's Response:I'm glad you like Kisa. I'm not so sure where I was going with her but I think I have her in a pretty stable spot right now with her. I'm also glad I she seems childish and that her child like manners shows.
Please ignore my comment about being a good writer, (whenever I do that). I think this is one my worst stories seeing how I had soo much mistakes, the paper I printed out is red with mistakes. No idea what I was thinking, oh welll I'm fixing right now. Sorry once again for the Grammar mistakes btw.
I'm glad you like reading my stories, thanks for your reviews.
Name: RawrTheDinoLycan (Signed) · Date: 30/10/11 - 09:33 pm · For: Happy Halloween
Heya. I like this one shot I just have one quick question.
Is Itachi divorcing Yuki? If so why are they still all... Couply?
Eh, sorry. It's just you said soon-to-be-divorced and then ex. Just wanting to get it cleared up :D
Author's Response: No, Itachi isn't divorcing Yuki, it was meant to be a joke because Yuki told him that, she found another guy attractive. Itachi doesn't like that because he wants Yuki just to be his and turn a blind eye to attractive men. Sorry if that got to you. No they will still be married. rnThanks for the review :) thou.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 30/10/11 - 12:05 pm · For: Happy Halloween
AWW! Yuki and Itachi are such softies! ;D
Nah, joking, joking. Really though, I think you portrayed them as great parents, each with their own little flaws or quirks. Kisa was adorable, in her own little girl way. Her being bossy is the only thing I could see of her being bratty... that, or the average 'I don't want to' kind of personality, but every little kid does that.
Overall, I think it was very sweet. Great job on this.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it.rnI tried my best to make parent more realistic then what most fanfics seem to do. I wanted to put out even after marriage Yuki and Itachil will always have problems. Also they aren't perfect parents because they are raised in different ways and their really is no book on how to raise a perfect family. Kind of tired of that, also tired of how when people have a family fics the story is more focused on the romance on parents then on the Kid. I think it is balanced, the focus on the kid and on the love the parents share. Not the Kid trying to make sure the parents happy...sorry I ranted there.rnI'm glad you like Kisa. I once again tried to make her realistic as a five year old kid as much as I can. rnAnyway thanks for the review, I always look forward to what you have to say :D
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